Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Well, he took that pretty well. Its always easier to accept news when surrounded by friends who accept it. Now for the inside scoop of who else is from "down under"

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thanks a bunch, Carolyn. New use of "down under".... LOL! :)

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Poor Theo! This would be very hard to believe. I'm not surprised he thought they were teasing him. Will he believe Blaze is still an angel and the baby is now his? I don't think too many people would.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, Cindy. They won't mention the baby. Blaze will have to tell him that news privately, since everyone else already assumes it is Theo's child. :)

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

He is having a hard time digesting all this isn't he. Well it does sound like a fairy tale so who can blame him. How will he react to the rest of the story? Good job. Phyllis. xsx Nancy

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, Nancy. True, the next part will be even harder to accept. :)

Comment from lancellot

Exceptional

I knew you wouldn't say it. Your cliff hangers are becoming predictable. Anyway, a good tale. I would've got up and walked out on all of them. You are becoming a master of suspense.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thanks a million for the sixer and the encouraging comments. :)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Time to give Theo a wake-up call. This is very well written with very good imagery. It is time for Blaze to make her confession and to test Theo's faith.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, Charlie. Father Murphy wouldn't be agreeing if it weren't true... or maybe Theo figures he just WANTS to believe because he's a priest. Blaze will have to do the actual convincing, I think. :)

reply by c_lucas on 22-Apr-2015

You are welcome, Phyllis. Charlie

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

This is quite a revelation for Theo to accept. So far he seems to take it quite well, but I wonder how he's going to take the rest.

You are a good writer, Phyllis. You work hard at what you do and it really shows. Keep up the great work.

Drew xx

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thank you so verrry much for the encouraging comments, Drew. :)

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

The motivational actions for all the participants in this scene is spot on. It's paced perfectly, so that Theo didn't prematurely accept Tara's news and his shock and doubt about the news he is about to be given.

This is where you excel, Phyllis.

You know the story. This is a six ... if I only had one.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thank you so very much for the virtual six, Jay. And I really appreciate the encouraging comments. :)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I just wonder how Theo will react when they tell them who Blaze really is! Good episode Phyllis, the real crunch is about to happen, I certainly look forward to these writing "happenings" the imagination of the writer is where the focus of the story is centred, although there's no question of your creativity my friend, well done, looking forward, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015

Thank you so much, Roy. Blessings to you, as well. :)

reply by royowen on 21-Apr-2015

Most welcome, Phyllis

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

This story really would be hard to fathom and Theo's reaction so
far is very normal.
I can't wait to see his reaction to Blaze's story.
Nicely done.
Nancy

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, Nancy. They all thought, correctly, I believe, that hearing about Tara first would make BLaze's announcement easier to take. :)

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

You have built up our suspense to an incredible level. What is Father Murphy to say. It might be to Theo insurmountable. We will trust in your judgement, Phyllis for you are our guidance in this story.

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2015

Thank you so much, Alan. Tomorrow we'll see how Theo takes the news that he just married an angel. :)