The Wonder
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "God Sided"miscellaneous poems
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Comment from Janet7053
Great on several levels. Your testimony of being reconciled, and your warning of his terrible fate is grounded and well founded.
elixir faux wool shaped is a powerful line to label him and his deeds.
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Great on several levels. Your testimony of being reconciled, and your warning of his terrible fate is grounded and well founded.
elixir faux wool shaped is a powerful line to label him and his deeds.
Comment Written 12-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Amen....you said it. stay away from faux folk that go by the name of Skip....-smile-....he's on his last leg now though...almost time. love Bug-
Comment from BJ_Barnes
This was a very interesting read. It flows together very smoothly and is very well written making it easy to follow. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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This was a very interesting read. It flows together very smoothly and is very well written making it easy to follow. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Well thank you BJ....-smile-...some poems write themselves....destiny I guess. My Pastor always said God had great things planned for me...-wink-.....love Bug-
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a poem that you can't read just once. I read it twice to really get the message. I thought it was well written. Powerful words and a wonderful read.
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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This is a poem that you can't read just once. I read it twice to really get the message. I thought it was well written. Powerful words and a wonderful read.
Comment Written 12-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Hey mike...-smile- appreciate you man. its history....a teaching lesson. you'll see....love bug-
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
plans to see recompense (should this be seek?)
like natures mistake (nature's)
A well written and powerful poem, my friend. Take care~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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plans to see recompense (should this be seek?)
like natures mistake (nature's)
A well written and powerful poem, my friend. Take care~Debbie
Comment Written 24-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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no.....if I believe I will see it....Vengence is mine sayeth the Lord. Hi Deb....-smile- where are you...? love michael
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Michael,
well this evoked big-time... but where it took me was inside the machine that prints money in the name of God and gives little to nothing back... yeah, I'm hitting Hillsong, seen that is from my neck of the woods, but there are so many singing, putting on the big production events and saying 10% + of your earnings for God, and yet I know for a fact, the machine that is the Hillsong corporation and company give as little as 3% to 000000 of their tax-free money back to help the cause they sprook... now, that's just plain evil, using the name of God to fleece the golden ideal of integrity... I say wield the hammer where needed brother... I'm over parasitic leeches that pray on the weak and vulnerable.
As always, your words have deep underlying content, not for the faint hearted, more the ones that seek out the truth of their beliefs... no matter, you rock the foundations that the weak of evil is built upon... love you passion brother!
With our thoughts we create,
service to higher meaning,
James.
******Stars!!!!!!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Hi Michael,
well this evoked big-time... but where it took me was inside the machine that prints money in the name of God and gives little to nothing back... yeah, I'm hitting Hillsong, seen that is from my neck of the woods, but there are so many singing, putting on the big production events and saying 10% + of your earnings for God, and yet I know for a fact, the machine that is the Hillsong corporation and company give as little as 3% to 000000 of their tax-free money back to help the cause they sprook... now, that's just plain evil, using the name of God to fleece the golden ideal of integrity... I say wield the hammer where needed brother... I'm over parasitic leeches that pray on the weak and vulnerable.
As always, your words have deep underlying content, not for the faint hearted, more the ones that seek out the truth of their beliefs... no matter, you rock the foundations that the weak of evil is built upon... love you passion brother!
With our thoughts we create,
service to higher meaning,
James.
******Stars!!!!!!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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I met a man half human....made a b- line for me first time he seen me in my church......the founder my paster who called me son....stepped between us and said Michael stay away from this man and then asked him to leave unwelcome....at time I thought him harsh.....at the time.....when he died my pasted who had terminal cancer when God introduced us....this freak came back to disrespect him.....and they let him....headshake.....this man is evil in flesh who hates all men but himself......and preys on vulnirability he finds at church's......he trained his children to do the same.....he sick, physcopathicand will continue to destroy God ordained his until he's stopped.....this is fact and quite unfortunate for moment or two for his executioner ....ahh have a great night love bug
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How can I have a great night now my brother, knowing this vile creature is embedded under your skin? You know I met someone who this dude reminds me of, and for five years he tested me and my integrity to the full, I nearly broke a few times... I had so many ups and downs because of him and his self-absorbed family... who by the way, stuck together like glue, no matter what some of them perpetrated onto others... really sick shit. I involved myself because I will always be the bully's bully... I see it as my job and privilege to be so... but honestly this dude was all dark and belonged to a powerful family who had connections... I grew in faith, belief and spiritual attainment more in those five years, than ever before... because I didn't play their game... I wanted too... it would have been so easy for me to do what I grew up doing, but it would have destroyed the giant leaps I had taken personally... God always guides those who listen... I listened... and I know you will too. These dark entities are all around us and dress up in sheep clothing... some people can't see them until it's too late... my ability... I can see, every-time... I feel them... and I listen... be well my good Brother, always ask for guidance as how to proceed, and caution should always be your closest friend... love you man... take care.
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love you too my Brother-
Comment from Janet Foor
The Legend of John Henry is always a good choice. Nice rhyme and excellent alliteration. Not sure I understood the full meaning of your piece but I enjoyed the imagery your created.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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The Legend of John Henry is always a good choice. Nice rhyme and excellent alliteration. Not sure I understood the full meaning of your piece but I enjoyed the imagery your created.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thank you kindly....love bug
Comment from Wabigoon
Reconsiled--
Very hard to know what to make of this. The lines are like chunks of very interesting concrete. I love all the references you make -- to John Henry, to Hercules, Samson, Michael, etc. Despite this I don't have the foggiest idea what you're saying. Not true, all the words add up to a certain kind of "grok," comprehension, but it's not an easy one with resolution. I'll look for more of your work or at it. You might want to take a look at my poem "Twisted Mental" now up. We share...certain things. Listened to as much of the video as I could with my rather pathetic hearing.
Couple of lines that might need apostrophes depending upon your inclination toward "correct" punctuation:
reprobate burned like natures mistake
the names Michael
Thanks
Wabigoon
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Reconsiled--
Very hard to know what to make of this. The lines are like chunks of very interesting concrete. I love all the references you make -- to John Henry, to Hercules, Samson, Michael, etc. Despite this I don't have the foggiest idea what you're saying. Not true, all the words add up to a certain kind of "grok," comprehension, but it's not an easy one with resolution. I'll look for more of your work or at it. You might want to take a look at my poem "Twisted Mental" now up. We share...certain things. Listened to as much of the video as I could with my rather pathetic hearing.
Couple of lines that might need apostrophes depending upon your inclination toward "correct" punctuation:
reprobate burned like natures mistake
the names Michael
Thanks
Wabigoon
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Thanks my friend this was a personal expression of destiny created.....whom I want to understand most certainly does.....smile.....sometimes I'm a solider for god .....every time he orders me to move a mountain ...wink
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
I have not quite figured out what you are trying to say here. Bible quotes mixed with folk hero's just kind of loses me..Some I know will get it but me I'm in the dark..Well at least you know what it's all about... But your use of words does make this interesting in its own way
TK
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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I have not quite figured out what you are trying to say here. Bible quotes mixed with folk hero's just kind of loses me..Some I know will get it but me I'm in the dark..Well at least you know what it's all about... But your use of words does make this interesting in its own way
TK
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2015
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Hey knight....how's quenavire....she say anything about me....haha thanks champ love bug
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Ah she ran off with the Black Knight Said she likes more tarnish than I had lol Really she has a bad Knight syndrome..
tk
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. I enjoyed reading your poem.
evil rehearsed sells goodness for sake
practice made perfect faux wool shape
sinful sold fake
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Excellent poem. I enjoyed reading your poem.
evil rehearsed sells goodness for sake
practice made perfect faux wool shape
sinful sold fake
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Amen...-smile-...Come Lord Jesus Come. Thank you very much....love-
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thank you!
Comment from artemis53
You still leave me dumbfounded and lost. Perhaps living in the moment is not my greatest asset but I'm doing my damnedest to tie together your writing. I'm just not there yet.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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You still leave me dumbfounded and lost. Perhaps living in the moment is not my greatest asset but I'm doing my damnedest to tie together your writing. I'm just not there yet.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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-headtilt-....-smile-...Well let me help...the poems originator heard this song and knew it was destiny that he was chosen to write for it...and so he did...-wink- it is based on lies dressed in Sundays best. Evil complete in its corruption, capable and culpalble of cold blood murder, planned and calculated first degree. -smile- K...? love-
