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Comment from padumachitta
Hello OK, so, i am sure i did not get it all, but i got enuff to know some and i figure it was and is well written. we are kept in our sold ignorance and woe be it to us.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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Hello OK, so, i am sure i did not get it all, but i got enuff to know some and i figure it was and is well written. we are kept in our sold ignorance and woe be it to us.
padumachitta
Comment Written 14-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you...-smile-
Comment from RGstar
My good friend, had to work hard at this one. I ran between clouds, mayhem and sublime beauty in trying to follow your lead, yet, you know something? I wouldn't have it any other way. This is the trademark of your writing, and it's originality is what makes you a good poet.
Good to come back with your work making it even better.
Best wishes, my friend.
RG
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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My good friend, had to work hard at this one. I ran between clouds, mayhem and sublime beauty in trying to follow your lead, yet, you know something? I wouldn't have it any other way. This is the trademark of your writing, and it's originality is what makes you a good poet.
Good to come back with your work making it even better.
Best wishes, my friend.
RG
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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god bless you bro....good to se you of course....hope your well....thanks for checking in love the bug-
Comment from Dawn Munro
Now that's what I call inventive - first stanza, 'wolf in sheep's clothing' enticing - yowza! Michael, your rather abstract way of getting a point across is entirely original, and I respect that - it's also always so evocative, so thought-provoking! This poem is not the easiest to follow, but after reading it a few times, I think I have it (and I'm hiding away from the mean streets)!
Excellent!
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Now that's what I call inventive - first stanza, 'wolf in sheep's clothing' enticing - yowza! Michael, your rather abstract way of getting a point across is entirely original, and I respect that - it's also always so evocative, so thought-provoking! This poem is not the easiest to follow, but after reading it a few times, I think I have it (and I'm hiding away from the mean streets)!
Excellent!
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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yes mam inventive...that's me....-smile- I've learned to improvise when necessary. this is a history lesson that will be taught for generational wisdom...-wink- watch. love the Bug-
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Great job, Michael. I love this. It's a roller coaster of words that is spell-binding. I can follow your thoughts and greatly appreciate the wonderful poem that you have woven here. It is intricate and full of great pieces. As always, your choice of music is a bonus treat. Keep on going, my talented friend. Later. Bruce.
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Great job, Michael. I love this. It's a roller coaster of words that is spell-binding. I can follow your thoughts and greatly appreciate the wonderful poem that you have woven here. It is intricate and full of great pieces. As always, your choice of music is a bonus treat. Keep on going, my talented friend. Later. Bruce.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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its a six...allll life long...-wink- I by God I'm a keep up here until he gives it back to me....or makes himself. -smile- appreciate you brother....always have keep it up.....love the Bug-
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Hello, my friend, I haven't seen you on here for a while, and now I'm wondering if I even got your posts, I didn't get this one. It was only because I looked on the front page and saw you there, otherwise I would have missed you again. This poem is really a message from God, to you, for us. I have been thinking a lot about Him lately, I wonder if I will get to meet Him. You are close to Him, Michael, you have the perfect name. I've missed you, I hope I haven't upset you. Love you lots, Sandy. xxx
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Hello, my friend, I haven't seen you on here for a while, and now I'm wondering if I even got your posts, I didn't get this one. It was only because I looked on the front page and saw you there, otherwise I would have missed you again. This poem is really a message from God, to you, for us. I have been thinking a lot about Him lately, I wonder if I will get to meet Him. You are close to Him, Michael, you have the perfect name. I've missed you, I hope I haven't upset you. Love you lots, Sandy. xxx
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Sandy...-smile-...missed you too...been working and hunting...it gets tiring to most...but I'm different I guess. Havent had a whole lot to say....except I'm getting pissed off at the lowering of my rank......smile-.....so will see. love you Lady always michael
Comment from jim lawler
I like it, all that I could grasp. It reads like you're speaking in tounge. But I really did enjopy the read. I imagine it's a sort of godly reprimand, right? You did an excellent job with your presentation. Good luck and god bless. Jim
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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I like it, all that I could grasp. It reads like you're speaking in tounge. But I really did enjopy the read. I imagine it's a sort of godly reprimand, right? You did an excellent job with your presentation. Good luck and god bless. Jim
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
hey Jim....-smile-....got my guys set up and signed three more...so I'm taking the rest of the day off....I may pass the gas of a fifty ninth ranked poet....-wink-.....it would bother me...if I...and you and all the rest didn't know better.....-smile- I got six stars on my last poem never made front page....not even for half a minute like most other times....I believe I'll write open challenge to any one who's got the balls....lets make it interesting what you say...got some time to kill....? got a love the Bug-
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I would have given you a sixer but I'm all out. I had a few sixers also but never got a mention either. It's no big deal with me, i don't go by anyone's opinions this web site is merely a distraction from all the stress in my life. I'm 81 and nearing the end of my journey. My wife has Alzheimers' Disease. I got a grandson on drtugs that's driving me crazy. And that's why I waste away my days! Thanks for the conversation reconciled, god bless! Jim
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sorry brother....for me too...of all the lack of respect....I am still grateful for this place....god knows what would have happened had I not sank here. your grandsons scared....I don't know why...but theres your root. love your wife like you did....bless you man....love Michael
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Thank Mike And god bless you! Jim
Comment from Praise000
Good day Reconciled,
Well written poem. Your words are carefully chosen.
"elixir faux wool shaped
sinful sold sacred fake..."
We need to be more vigilant.
All the best in your writing. Praise000
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Good day Reconciled,
Well written poem. Your words are carefully chosen.
"elixir faux wool shaped
sinful sold sacred fake..."
We need to be more vigilant.
All the best in your writing. Praise000
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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yes...it has been so far. so I'm not leaving the house....love Bug-
Comment from CR Delport
If you look at all the trouble in the world today, it seems like Michael is taking a vacation. This is very well written.
Take Care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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If you look at all the trouble in the world today, it seems like Michael is taking a vacation. This is very well written.
Take Care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 14-May-2015
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ahh far from it...doing some remodeling on my home and customers....been growing slowly but God seems to be caring for me....went by that church....that did this to me....twice.....like ghost town. should that bring me comfort....? do they understand why...? ahhh see...? genuine is found like treasure....love Michael
Comment from misscookie
You had my attention from the first line to the last. I found your words very interesting. This is what I call a food for thought poem.... meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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You had my attention from the first line to the last. I found your words very interesting. This is what I call a food for thought poem.... meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 22-May-2015
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thank you maam...smile-
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You're very welcome, have a blessed day.
Cookie
Comment from Chris Tee
Great poetry and the whole job put together rather impressive. I like some alliteration which is strewn around like "sinful sold sacred fake" Excellent work here well done indeed.
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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Great poetry and the whole job put together rather impressive. I like some alliteration which is strewn around like "sinful sold sacred fake" Excellent work here well done indeed.
Comment Written 13-May-2015
reply by the author on 13-May-2015
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thank you Chris...good to see you around....love bug
