haiku (God rinses his brush)
sunset haiku34 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Oh, but yes He did. What a beautiful photo. I have always noticed how God loves colors. He reveals it in rainbows, sunsets, and, yes, people. My blessings to you. Well done, Mike.
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Oh, but yes He did. What a beautiful photo. I have always noticed how God loves colors. He reveals it in rainbows, sunsets, and, yes, people. My blessings to you. Well done, Mike.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. I read an other one for the prompt but think yours is nicer. I liked the last line separated bit from the rest. You made a beautiful Haiku about sunset.
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Excellent photo that complements your poem perfectly. I read an other one for the prompt but think yours is nicer. I liked the last line separated bit from the rest. You made a beautiful Haiku about sunset.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from Nosha17
Hi, Mikey, haven't seen you on as much, can't remember when you last reviewed me!! I wrote a good review on your artistry piece of prose, in which I poured out my feelings about language and the word. Hope you liked it, I praised you a lot!! I am helping my son in his political career, in between writing, editing stories/scripts for people, not much spare time. Your way with words shows through in your haikus even, and you know I am not very fond of them! Well chosen words, descriptively portraying the theme. Lovely picture, good luck in the contest. Faye
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Hi, Mikey, haven't seen you on as much, can't remember when you last reviewed me!! I wrote a good review on your artistry piece of prose, in which I poured out my feelings about language and the word. Hope you liked it, I praised you a lot!! I am helping my son in his political career, in between writing, editing stories/scripts for people, not much spare time. Your way with words shows through in your haikus even, and you know I am not very fond of them! Well chosen words, descriptively portraying the theme. Lovely picture, good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from mfowler
You had me at the title, Mikey. 'God rinses His brush'. Yeah! That describes that smudging and spread of beautiful gold and black paint about as well as anything. To combine the metaphysical with the natural beauty in one image is a masterstroke. Your second line is more pragmatic naming the time frame of God's action. Your alliterative 'swirling sunset' is the perfect complement to your fine opening and completes a very satisfying haiku. Best of luck with the readers.
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You had me at the title, Mikey. 'God rinses His brush'. Yeah! That describes that smudging and spread of beautiful gold and black paint about as well as anything. To combine the metaphysical with the natural beauty in one image is a masterstroke. Your second line is more pragmatic naming the time frame of God's action. Your alliterative 'swirling sunset' is the perfect complement to your fine opening and completes a very satisfying haiku. Best of luck with the readers.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
Hard to believe you have managed such an original work. This contest lent itself to cliche. You have avoided that brilliantly.a rare exceptional haiku. The picture enhances.
This woyld make a perfect poster.
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Hard to believe you have managed such an original work. This contest lent itself to cliche. You have avoided that brilliantly.a rare exceptional haiku. The picture enhances.
This woyld make a perfect poster.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Very nice photo to go along with your take on God making this happen.. Short in words long in content..Good job with this spiritual prose
TK
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Very nice photo to go along with your take on God making this happen.. Short in words long in content..Good job with this spiritual prose
TK
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from INtity
God rinses his brush.... love the metaphor for the change of days. Swirling sunset... excellent alliteration to end it as well. This makes me want to write my own haikus which I have never really done a haiku but this is one of the best I have read. Great job
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God rinses his brush.... love the metaphor for the change of days. Swirling sunset... excellent alliteration to end it as well. This makes me want to write my own haikus which I have never really done a haiku but this is one of the best I have read. Great job
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mikey, what a brilliant entry for this particular Haiku competition, your well chosen words say all there is to say about the artwork, but would easily stand alone.
Good luck in the contest my friend.
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Hi Mikey, what a brilliant entry for this particular Haiku competition, your well chosen words say all there is to say about the artwork, but would easily stand alone.
Good luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from bob cullen
What an amazing picture.
And your words add to the overall beauty.
So few words but such a vivid description. It's the perfect combination of image and lyrics
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What an amazing picture.
And your words add to the overall beauty.
So few words but such a vivid description. It's the perfect combination of image and lyrics
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from justafan
Above my pay grade for crit...but I love it. Does that count? Your mind is a wonderous thing MC..I am in awe!
Excellent!
Always,
Melissa
justafan
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Above my pay grade for crit...but I love it. Does that count? Your mind is a wonderous thing MC..I am in awe!
Excellent!
Always,
Melissa
justafan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
