haiku (God rinses his brush)
sunset haiku34 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
OMG Michael, this is beautiful...your words and the picture....a so well deserved win...I love your poem and the picture is stunning...luff Linda xxoo
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OMG Michael, this is beautiful...your words and the picture....a so well deserved win...I love your poem and the picture is stunning...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Mike,
I live in the paradise of the magic sunset... and yes, our Creator sure knows how to paint a scene of everything coming together for wonderment and awe.
Truly perfect visual to add colour to the palette you created with ten beautiful words... wonderfully composed and well deserved win... congrats brother.
Yes, of course this should have the extra exceptional golden additive... the sentiment is here, just not the arsenal... sorry.
With our thoughts we create,
majestic bliss,
James.
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Hi Mike,
I live in the paradise of the magic sunset... and yes, our Creator sure knows how to paint a scene of everything coming together for wonderment and awe.
Truly perfect visual to add colour to the palette you created with ten beautiful words... wonderfully composed and well deserved win... congrats brother.
Yes, of course this should have the extra exceptional golden additive... the sentiment is here, just not the arsenal... sorry.
With our thoughts we create,
majestic bliss,
James.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2015
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
My vote because it is stylishly done.
I love the idea of God rinsing his brush.
Nicely done, I don't know why but I have a hard time with these.
Love the dramatic picture to go with it.
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My vote because it is stylishly done.
I love the idea of God rinsing his brush.
Nicely done, I don't know why but I have a hard time with these.
Love the dramatic picture to go with it.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
Comment from Tatarka2
The picture is perfect with this. As far as I can tell, you have fulfilled all the rules of this daunting contest. I commend you for having taken on this challenge, and for the win. It is certainly well-deserved.
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The picture is perfect with this. As far as I can tell, you have fulfilled all the rules of this daunting contest. I commend you for having taken on this challenge, and for the win. It is certainly well-deserved.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
Comment from Megalips
You're pretty good with these....the imagery in the poem by itself is nicely set and the picture really just adds to it. Did you see the picture and then write the poem or vice versa? I'm guessing you saw the photo and it inspired you from there.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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You're pretty good with these....the imagery in the poem by itself is nicely set and the picture really just adds to it. Did you see the picture and then write the poem or vice versa? I'm guessing you saw the photo and it inspired you from there.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015
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No, I wrote it first and then spent forever finding a picture. I'm not an expert at these, but I come up with a decent one here and there. Thanks, mikey
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely haiku about the sunset. Many time as I see the sunrises or the sunsets, I marvel at the beauty with which God paints the skies. Blessings, Patricia
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This is a lovely haiku about the sunset. Many time as I see the sunrises or the sunsets, I marvel at the beauty with which God paints the skies. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
Comment from sgalletti
This is a lovely haiku Mikey. I can just see God swirling his paint brush and the resulting sunset. It's a wonderfully creative image to juxtapose with the phrase"turning day into night" to describe the sunset. I enjoyed! And, good luck to you in the contest with an excellent entry. Sue
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This is a lovely haiku Mikey. I can just see God swirling his paint brush and the resulting sunset. It's a wonderfully creative image to juxtapose with the phrase"turning day into night" to describe the sunset. I enjoyed! And, good luck to you in the contest with an excellent entry. Sue
Comment Written 22-Apr-2015
Comment from Jackarrie
This is an excellent haiku describing a sunset. The poem stands on it own perfectly, but the image is breathtaking
I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Mary
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This is an excellent haiku describing a sunset. The poem stands on it own perfectly, but the image is breathtaking
I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from Deborah Marie
Lovely Sunset Haiku; good luck in the contest. Beautiful presentation from photo to clever wording to color scheme. Photo especially makes a statement and enhances your last line in your Haiku. Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming, Deb
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Lovely Sunset Haiku; good luck in the contest. Beautiful presentation from photo to clever wording to color scheme. Photo especially makes a statement and enhances your last line in your Haiku. Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming, Deb
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
Comment from Joan E.
I really like the idea of the Master artist "turning day into night". Your use of alliteration in the satori line is very effective as well. The picture you chose and your presentation are perfect complements to your words. Best wishes to us both in this contest- Joan
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I really like the idea of the Master artist "turning day into night". Your use of alliteration in the satori line is very effective as well. The picture you chose and your presentation are perfect complements to your words. Best wishes to us both in this contest- Joan
Comment Written 21-Apr-2015
