Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from Ben Colder
Old Jim is hanging in there with her. The table is about to turn in another direction. You are so good at keeping your reader grabbing at a page turner. Well done. I still like Savana Love, best.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Old Jim is hanging in there with her. The table is about to turn in another direction. You are so good at keeping your reader grabbing at a page turner. Well done. I still like Savana Love, best.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. I am hoping to get Savannah Love published this summer
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Save me a copy.
Comment from Sankey
This was good, again. Still plenty of expectations and drama.
There are no spags, just a great piece of "want more" writing. Thanks once again.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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This was good, again. Still plenty of expectations and drama.
There are no spags, just a great piece of "want more" writing. Thanks once again.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
This is excellent. You build your story very carefully. Sanchez sounds like a prime suspect to me, as I remember from his past behavior. Soni's very shrewd. When she realizes that Garrison isn't one of the criminal lawyers their family attorney mentioned, she wants to check it out. Soni is certainly the target of all the mischief that's been going on. At least Garrison got a determination that the agents' warrant is no good, and Kuruk isn't under arrest. That doesn't please the agents. This is really holding my attention. judi
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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This is excellent. You build your story very carefully. Sanchez sounds like a prime suspect to me, as I remember from his past behavior. Soni's very shrewd. When she realizes that Garrison isn't one of the criminal lawyers their family attorney mentioned, she wants to check it out. Soni is certainly the target of all the mischief that's been going on. At least Garrison got a determination that the agents' warrant is no good, and Kuruk isn't under arrest. That doesn't please the agents. This is really holding my attention. judi
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from TOMORAL
Well, I haven't read any of your other chapters, so I am a bit lost, but, what I've read it perfectly written and expressed. I will have to go back and read more. Very interesting what you have written in this chapter. I am already wondering who the cowboys are in the distance. I think I am about to get into this one. Thanks.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Well, I haven't read any of your other chapters, so I am a bit lost, but, what I've read it perfectly written and expressed. I will have to go back and read more. Very interesting what you have written in this chapter. I am already wondering who the cowboys are in the distance. I think I am about to get into this one. Thanks.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
It looks like Soni has some neighbors on her side. I'm wondering who owns the helicopter. It is good Kurak has a specialist defending him. This is well written.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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It looks like Soni has some neighbors on her side. I'm wondering who owns the helicopter. It is good Kurak has a specialist defending him. This is well written.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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I sure hope she had people on her side. Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Sasha
The lawyer certainly seems to know what he is doing. The agent also seems to have an axe to grind. I don't like him. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading the next one.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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The lawyer certainly seems to know what he is doing. The agent also seems to have an axe to grind. I don't like him. I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading the next one.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. I don't like the agent either.
