Cherries
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Comment from Glasstruth
Yum! I just love cherries. Like how you refer to them as 'gemstones' Read your author notes, and I see how a daily experience leads to a poem. I have my mind ready to pick up on any idea which I see you did in your case. Very nicely written. Les
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Yum! I just love cherries. Like how you refer to them as 'gemstones' Read your author notes, and I see how a daily experience leads to a poem. I have my mind ready to pick up on any idea which I see you did in your case. Very nicely written. Les
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Yes, Les, not only did the cherries at the market surprised me, but that I composed a poem before I ate one. Always have your mind ready to pick up on any idea.
Comment from granny goes viral
Oh my goodness. You have them already? I can't wait. I especially love those Mount Washington cherries. I think that is the name. Those almost white ones. Yum, yum.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Oh my goodness. You have them already? I can't wait. I especially love those Mount Washington cherries. I think that is the name. Those almost white ones. Yum, yum.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Two things surprised me today. The appearance of the first cherries and that I would compose a poem about them before I ate the first one. I love the Raniers and may compose a poem about those when they arrive. Thanks for your review.
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Didn't even eat them yet? Something to look forward to.
Comment from Cogitator
I love cherries. I grew up in France with cherry blossoms in about seventy-five trees about our house and couldn't wait to climb them after the fruit appeared. Of course, my impatience caused some tartness in my eager grabbing, but, when they finally ripened, i had to be ripped of the branches. Great...John
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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I love cherries. I grew up in France with cherry blossoms in about seventy-five trees about our house and couldn't wait to climb them after the fruit appeared. Of course, my impatience caused some tartness in my eager grabbing, but, when they finally ripened, i had to be ripped of the branches. Great...John
Comment Written 18-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Two things surprised me today. The appearance of the first cherries and that I would compose a poem about them before I ate the first one. Thank you for your review and fond memories.
Comment from Ben Colder
Excellent, 5-7-5. A very good contest piece, nothing could work better when creating a Sunday. Always needs a cherry on top.to make it right on. Well done, Bro.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Excellent, 5-7-5. A very good contest piece, nothing could work better when creating a Sunday. Always needs a cherry on top.to make it right on. Well done, Bro.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Thank you, Ben, for your kind review. I was thrilled to discover these "gems" today. I am eating rubies.
Comment from zanya
This 5-7-5 captures well the sheer delight on discovering these first 'delicious gemstones ' of the cherry season - especially precious since the season for these beauties is so brief
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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This 5-7-5 captures well the sheer delight on discovering these first 'delicious gemstones ' of the cherry season - especially precious since the season for these beauties is so brief
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2015
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Thank you, zanya, for your kind review. I was thrilled to discover these "gems" today. I am eating rubies.
