Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

Good need to know stuff. I should take note as I have been known to leave such things out. :)
This is going to be interesting. Theo might not be so delighted and ho hum as some might think.
Leads me anxiously to the next chapter. Mission accomplished. mikey

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2015

Thanks a bunch, Mikey. :)

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

I'm surprised and glad Father Murphy believed Blaze and agreed to marry her and Theo in the Church. Most people would put up a shield of disbelief and want proof.However, when you have a character whose faith is unlimited and dealt with a demon before,his acceptance is more believable.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, Muffins. :)

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Ah, so that's why Blaze was always way to clever for Luke! She can fix Blake, but then what? He's confessed to some pretty serious crimes. Will time spent in the psych ward looking like a clown be considered time served? Since this is a story about redemption, maybe he's learned a lesson. Blaze might have scared him straight.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015

I hope so, but he will serve time in prison. No one will know he was the clown at the mental hospital, since they won't know about Blaze being a demon wiht an evil camera or a redeemed angel. No one would believe it anyway. :)

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

Things are definitely gaining momentum and it appears soon things will be ship-shape between all concerned. It'll be interesting to see Theo's reaction. Good chapter, Phyllis!

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015

Thank you for reading today. Much appreciated. :)

Comment from rmj09

Excellent

The focus seeing if Father Murphy will talk to Theo. The storyline development Blaze is talking to Father Murphy regarding what God told her about her being an angel, he confirms that in God's eyes Blaze is still an angel. He agrees to talk to Theo to explain who Blaze is, an suggest that Tara and Gary be there. To have him marry them in the church. She wants to know how to change Blade back since she can no longer use her camera.
The dialog is clear and is clearing any questions about Blaze redefining her. The narration is showing the action with the plans changing Blade, getting married in the church.
The hook will she realize a prayer to God will change Blade.
Keep on writing.

Phyllis, it started around six pm and it still is raining. Have a great week. *J* Rita

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015

Thank you very much for the detailed review, Rita. Looks like we got rain too, about the same time. :)

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I don't know how Theo will react to finding out that Blaze is, or was, a demon. Telling the truth is always figured to be the best policy, but in this particular situation, if I were Blaze, I'd lie like the devil. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015

LOL! Tsk, tsk, Ric. Angels don't lie. That's what demons do. Now I know where YOU stand. LOL! She never should have been in Hell in the first place, so she has nothing to hide. Theo would probably love her if she were still a demon, in fact. He is smitten big time. :)

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

How wonderful it would be to have healing powers. I wouldn't get anything done but clear out the hospitals and nursing homes.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015

Thanks, Carolyn. Yes, it would be wonderful. Must be one reason doctors work such long hours. They must get a charge out of saving lives. :)

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Yeah! for Father Murphy. He should be a Bishop, Cardinal, or a Pope maybe like the one we have now. Fanny has been here. Tara in getting better. Blaise (Blaze) like Tara is a reformed devil/Christian and has one good deed to do.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, Alan. All my stories have happy ending for everyone ... except Lucifer, of course. Blaze will change the spelling of her name soon, but first, she has to pay a visit to Luke and tell him she's pregnant and quitting. :)

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015

Thanks so much, Alan. All my stories have happy ending for everyone ... except Lucifer, of course. Blaze will change the spelling of her name soon, but first, she has to pay a visit to Luke and tell him she's pregnant and quitting. :)

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Nice work, Phyllis. She still has angel powers. Wow! That could turn out pretty interesting. Lots of ways to work with that idea. Hope things have settled for you. Your writing doesn't show any stress or lack of writing skills. Nice job. Drew xx

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015

Thanks, Drew. Yes, things are fine now. Matt still loves me and I visited him and Amanda today. It was fun, but not in the way you think. I got a lot off my chest, and feel so much lighter now. I just needed to know she would not turn him against me. He made it clear today that it was impossible. :)

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015

Thanks, Drew. Yes, things are fine now. Matt still loves me and I visited him and Amanda today. It was fun, but not in the way you think. I got a lot off my chest, and feel so much lighter now. I just needed to know she would not turn him against me. He made it clear today that it was impossible. :)

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

But the chapter is very much needed so we can move forward with the story right? You do amaze me Phyllis, You have such a vivid imagination and you are so good at weaving tangled webs and untangling them. LOL well done xsx Nancy

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015

Thank you so verrry much, Nancy. I appreciate the comment. I love weaving and knitting plot lines together... it's like making a painting somehow. :)

reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015

Thank you so verrry much, Nancy. I appreciate the comment. I love weaving and knitting plot lines together... it's like making a painting somehow. :)