The Bedford
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25 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Wonderful to join this story at the very beginning. I didn't read your previous story, but feel I should be able to pick up and enjoy this sequel. I can only imagine what goes on behind the scenes running a hotel. I look forward to high hilarity!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Wonderful to join this story at the very beginning. I didn't read your previous story, but feel I should be able to pick up and enjoy this sequel. I can only imagine what goes on behind the scenes running a hotel. I look forward to high hilarity!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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It's lovely to have you aboard! I ran a 26 bedroom hotel with my late husband, so there a few good stories to use. Alexis x
Comment from Eric1
Hi alexis, I missed this one and read your next episode first, so now I am up to date and I realise that they are the same three ladies, Ok, I am all ready to go with your wonderful new story.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Hi alexis, I missed this one and read your next episode first, so now I am up to date and I realise that they are the same three ladies, Ok, I am all ready to go with your wonderful new story.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Thank you! I'm taking this one a bit slower, but it will hopefully be good fun! Alexis x
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I am sure it will Alexis.
Comment from Ulla
Lovely, It stars very promising and appears to be as much fun as their previous adventures. I can't find any faults so just waiting to enjoy the next installment. Ulla
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Lovely, It stars very promising and appears to be as much fun as their previous adventures. I can't find any faults so just waiting to enjoy the next installment. Ulla
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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Chapter one and two now posted. I do hope you enjoy them! Alexis x
Comment from Brett Matthew West
If the rest of the story is as well written as this part was it should be very interesting indeed. Action flowed well. Descriptive language used throughout held reader's interest. Write on.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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If the rest of the story is as well written as this part was it should be very interesting indeed. Action flowed well. Descriptive language used throughout held reader's interest. Write on.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2015
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What a lovely compliment! The first and second chapter are now posted. I hope you enjoy the journey! Alexis x
Comment from emrpoems
I followed your last story and will certainly follow this one too.
Great story to be developed.
Great introduction of characters
Good use of dialogue
Good use of nonverbal communication
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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I followed your last story and will certainly follow this one too.
Great story to be developed.
Great introduction of characters
Good use of dialogue
Good use of nonverbal communication
Comment Written 18-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for your review. Yes, the 'girls' are ready for another adventure or two, and not a chat line in sight! Alexis x
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I must admit, when I started writing 'Let's Talk Dirty,' I had no idea how much potential there was in bringing these three ladies together. They now keep me up at night, and my real friends are worried about me! Alexis x
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahahaha! G'day Alexis, revenge is my middle name, "Feral Revenge Feral". That was such a pleasure for me to read mate. I hate that stuck up old biddy LOL. I am so glad they finally have the Bedford, this should be a fantastc journey. Bring it on! Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Hahahahaha! G'day Alexis, revenge is my middle name, "Feral Revenge Feral". That was such a pleasure for me to read mate. I hate that stuck up old biddy LOL. I am so glad they finally have the Bedford, this should be a fantastc journey. Bring it on! Cheers Fez
Comment Written 17-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Me too! I so enjoyed seeing her go with her tail between her legs! The girls are getting ready to turn The Bedford into the best bijoux hotel in Glasgow. Do you know any funny hotel stories? Alexis x
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Hahaha! Bring that stuff on mate. Firstly wtf is " bijoux"?..I am am a qualified chef (white fella way) and some of the yarns I have mate you probably won't believe
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Please let me hear some! Any ideas would be appreciated because I want to include as many funny stories as I can! Bijoux is French for small but beautiful (or similar!) x
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Gamay is Filipino (Cebuano) for small...jumparri is my tribal word (Nyamal)
Comment from c_lucas
When a tyrant finds herself on the receiving it, things are not right with her world. I trust the Bedford will not be come a bordello. Very well written.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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When a tyrant finds herself on the receiving it, things are not right with her world. I trust the Bedford will not be come a bordello. Very well written.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Lol, no, this one is all above board! Alexis x
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You're welcome, Alexis. Charlie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wonderful chapter, but why start a new book? This could continue the first book as Part 2. The first book wasn't all that long, so it could be Part 1. Just a suggestion. :)
door to greet her, made her feel << Lose the comma as it separates the subject from its predicate.
the infamous 'Attila the Hun,' type character << Again, remove comma.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Wonderful chapter, but why start a new book? This could continue the first book as Part 2. The first book wasn't all that long, so it could be Part 1. Just a suggestion. :)
door to greet her, made her feel << Lose the comma as it separates the subject from its predicate.
the infamous 'Attila the Hun,' type character << Again, remove comma.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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Thank you for catching those, Phyllis. Commas are my weak point, so I need all the help I can get. Having reached 96,000 words, I thought it was time to start another book! Alexis x
Comment from Glasstruth
This truly ends on a happy note. Also makes me feel good about the characters I've come to know as they succeed since I've been rooting for them. Shows how once someone on the bottom rises and becomes a leader. Very up lifting. A great finish. Les
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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This truly ends on a happy note. Also makes me feel good about the characters I've come to know as they succeed since I've been rooting for them. Shows how once someone on the bottom rises and becomes a leader. Very up lifting. A great finish. Les
Comment Written 17-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Les. I posted the first chapter today where the characters introduce themselves and tell you a little bit about their aspirations for the hotel. I hope you enjoy it. Alexis x
Comment from Spitfire
I love the image the ending provides--three fingers all pointing to the door. Mrs. Patel just wasn't getting it.
Revenge is sweet and sounds as if the woman deserved it.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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I love the image the ending provides--three fingers all pointing to the door. Mrs. Patel just wasn't getting it.
Revenge is sweet and sounds as if the woman deserved it.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2015
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People like Mrs Patel will never get it because they're so up their own backsides. Never mind, the girls enjoyed it! Alexis x
