Destiny's Angel
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "A Strange Encounter Continues"A fantasy novel set in modern day Baltimore
6 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This character C-Daddy is quite a mystery, your reader will stay with you to find out more about him. This is great imagery, almost like a movie. "The older man simply folded his arms across his broad chest and raised a stubborn eyebrow."
This story is very good, I will definitely be back. A+ work.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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This character C-Daddy is quite a mystery, your reader will stay with you to find out more about him. This is great imagery, almost like a movie. "The older man simply folded his arms across his broad chest and raised a stubborn eyebrow."
This story is very good, I will definitely be back. A+ work.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2023
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Hi Liz, thanks for returning to my book. I may have to go back and finish writing it! I appreciate your time and the stars.
Hugs,
Rhonda
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I intend to follow it to the end
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from jlsavell
Rhonda, so now I just wait patiently for the next chapters. It has me intrigued. Was it the same man the both were to meet and for c daddy, what was in the package.. well done... jimi
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
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Rhonda, so now I just wait patiently for the next chapters. It has me intrigued. Was it the same man the both were to meet and for c daddy, what was in the package.. well done... jimi
Comment Written 03-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
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Thank you, Jimi, and yes, the two men were connected! Good eyes to catch that!
I'm excited for you to read more!
Rhonda
Comment from boxergirl
Candace continues to show her compassionate side and CDaddy also shows his concern for her as well. Anxious to see where this is going. 8-)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Candace continues to show her compassionate side and CDaddy also shows his concern for her as well. Anxious to see where this is going. 8-)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for the review and the interest. He will show up again later.
Comment from royowen
I'm liking your imaginative story Rhonda, cadence and C-Daddy, journey to the store "Destiny's angel" owned by a Nick Collins, C-daddy finally makes his $5, interesting, believable characters, unique plot, most enjoyable, cleverly written, most enjoyable, blessings, Roy,
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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I'm liking your imaginative story Rhonda, cadence and C-Daddy, journey to the store "Destiny's angel" owned by a Nick Collins, C-daddy finally makes his $5, interesting, believable characters, unique plot, most enjoyable, cleverly written, most enjoyable, blessings, Roy,
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you, so much, Roy, for taking the time to read it through, and for the warm review. They are part of a long story, but, I hope, a fun one.
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Most welcome, my friend.
Comment from MelB
A very smooth flowing chapter. C-Daddy seems like a very caring person. I am wondering what put him in the position he is in of being homeless. Great descriptions made me feel like I was right there experiencing the story as it unfolded.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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A very smooth flowing chapter. C-Daddy seems like a very caring person. I am wondering what put him in the position he is in of being homeless. Great descriptions made me feel like I was right there experiencing the story as it unfolded.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for the review and feedback. Heis supposed to be a caring person. I'm glad you picked up on that. His mystery will continue to grow.
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You're welcome
Comment from thomdble
You have some sort of magic in that mind of yours. You were able to take me right into the storyline. I felt like I was observing from the sidelines instead of only reading this adventure. Thank you for having me taking me along for the ride.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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You have some sort of magic in that mind of yours. You were able to take me right into the storyline. I felt like I was observing from the sidelines instead of only reading this adventure. Thank you for having me taking me along for the ride.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for the review and the encouragement! I'm glad I was able to pull you into it. I love this site and the way it allows us to get the thoughts and opinions of others on our work!
