Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

Wow! That's a dark chapter, snod. Not much humour in this one. Whitmarsh is definitely not a nice guy. He hit Ess in the face with his fist! I hope Shades sends him to hell! Got me riled! LOL!

Where's Oz? I feel much safer when Oz is on the scene.

Sorry it took so long to review this, Snod. I had computer trouble. I think a 'friend' sent me a virus. Wish you had been closer. You would probably have known how to deal with it. I had to take it to the shop. But, I think they 'saved' it.

Good reading, snod. Waiting for the next one.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2015

Oh, I know why you want me closer. Oz is probably off cavorting with his girlfriend. Somethimes Ess just has to ride into town on her own. Thanks for the review. No need to apologise. I'd wait until politicians were honest for you

Comment from synonymous

Excellent

Riveting Very interesting the only feedback I have really us there is some slight confusion when she first walks into the room. I had to read that twice other then that very well written good job. Looking forward to more.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015

Thank you. Glad you liked it

Comment from benoenose

Excellent

A tragic flow lingers by the work. More on safety and willingness to adopt. However, the author arranges the plots more in connection with the secular format of living. Characters are thus so potentially chosen.
Recommended for adult readers.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015

thanks