Creepy Poems
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Comment from justjo66
I loved your depiction of Satan after the Cross. Yes, I bet he was mad as
Hell. Am I glad? You bet. I'm even more thankful and glad that Christ hung
on that Cross for me. Your poem made me smile. Spread the word...we win!!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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I loved your depiction of Satan after the Cross. Yes, I bet he was mad as
Hell. Am I glad? You bet. I'm even more thankful and glad that Christ hung
on that Cross for me. Your poem made me smile. Spread the word...we win!!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you jusjo. I will.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Never seen it looking better. Picture supported poetry that flowed well. Descriptive language helped keep reader's interest. Wonder how my expression "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary" makes it feel? But, then, who cares? I imagine you are spot on with this one. Do write on.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Never seen it looking better. Picture supported poetry that flowed well. Descriptive language helped keep reader's interest. Wonder how my expression "Cast your vote for Jesus. Keep your eyes on Calvary" makes it feel? But, then, who cares? I imagine you are spot on with this one. Do write on.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you bmwhsd. It fits perfectly.
Comment from kiwijenny
I agree ...he probably threw his minions down the outhouse of hell
Where they writhe in filthy you know what...
Poor minions....I'm so glad God sent His Son ,,,wicked devil is not going to get me....
God bless
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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I agree ...he probably threw his minions down the outhouse of hell
Where they writhe in filthy you know what...
Poor minions....I'm so glad God sent His Son ,,,wicked devil is not going to get me....
God bless
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you Kiwijenny. Loved that transition that bridges my poems. My ribs are getting sore from laughing.
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You are welcome
Comment from patcelaw
Calgary did you mean Calvary?
I like this poem and Satan was defeated on Calvary. May the rest of the week be blessed, Patricia
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Calgary did you mean Calvary?
I like this poem and Satan was defeated on Calvary. May the rest of the week be blessed, Patricia
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Oops yup, thanks for catching that
Comment from TAB_that's me
I think this is exactly how satan reacted and does every time that someone is saved by Jesus. I think this one of the best pieces I have seen from you:)
Teresa
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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I think this is exactly how satan reacted and does every time that someone is saved by Jesus. I think this one of the best pieces I have seen from you:)
Teresa
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much Teresa. That is very high praise. I appreciate those stars too.
