Creepy Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Satan's Rage"A touch of Fear
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Comment from rod007
You get into Satan's mind well and the deliberate capitalization creates great impact but at least He admitted defeat to the Lord's sacrifice. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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You get into Satan's mind well and the deliberate capitalization creates great impact but at least He admitted defeat to the Lord's sacrifice. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2015
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Thank you rod. Good point. He orobably wouldn't do t hat.
Comment from Joan E.
I could hear the devil shout through your use of capitals, and I admired your continuing the Easter theme and your alternating rhymes in this sonnet. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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I could hear the devil shout through your use of capitals, and I admired your continuing the Easter theme and your alternating rhymes in this sonnet. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you Joan. Hope your ears aren't bleeding.
Comment from Nosha17
It is rather comforting to think that the Devil was defeated when Jesus died on Calvary. You have made good use of descriptive language and imagery and your rhyming was good. Anapestic I tried once and it is hard. I read what you wrote about creating the effect of discord, I think your meter may have not stuck with 11/9, as I noted couple of 8 and syllable lines, too. The overall effect was however good and the bitter hatred of the Devil shines through the words. Most appropriate picture. Faye
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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It is rather comforting to think that the Devil was defeated when Jesus died on Calvary. You have made good use of descriptive language and imagery and your rhyming was good. Anapestic I tried once and it is hard. I read what you wrote about creating the effect of discord, I think your meter may have not stuck with 11/9, as I noted couple of 8 and syllable lines, too. The overall effect was however good and the bitter hatred of the Devil shines through the words. Most appropriate picture. Faye
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you very much Nosha for your wonderfully detailed assessment.
Comment from robina1978
Great artwork that complements your poem perfectly. It is an original subject to think about how Satan experienced Easter. He RAGED. This must be a difficult form an anapestic Heroic Sonnet.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Great artwork that complements your poem perfectly. It is an original subject to think about how Satan experienced Easter. He RAGED. This must be a difficult form an anapestic Heroic Sonnet.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you Ine. It took a bit longer than most to write, and I'm still not sure I got it right.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Heh-heh, yeah, I'd wager the big red guy was pretty upset when Christ spurned his offers if He would but bow down and worship at his feet. But, Christ did die, and on the third day was resurrected, so it's already a done deal, a foregone conclusion.
Great poem from the devil's POV...
~Dean
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Heh-heh, yeah, I'd wager the big red guy was pretty upset when Christ spurned his offers if He would but bow down and worship at his feet. But, Christ did die, and on the third day was resurrected, so it's already a done deal, a foregone conclusion.
Great poem from the devil's POV...
~Dean
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you Dean. I thought you could get into this one.
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I'm glad I had a look at your portfolio and spotted it. I frequently cruise the portfolios of my favorites here, just to see what they've been up to, LOL.
You are welcome, Tom... ~Dean
Comment from tfawcus
Well, you certainly come up with some interesting forms, Tom! This one works splendidly to express the venom. I found your capitalisation a bit distracting but enjoyed reading this aloud. Anyone within earshot might have imagined I was having a fierce contretemps!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Well, you certainly come up with some interesting forms, Tom! This one works splendidly to express the venom. I found your capitalisation a bit distracting but enjoyed reading this aloud. Anyone within earshot might have imagined I was having a fierce contretemps!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you tony. I say that's mission accomplished.
Comment from misscookie
I found this to be an interesting read. You had my attention from the start. This is what I call a food for thought poem...meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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I found this to be an interesting read. You had my attention from the start. This is what I call a food for thought poem...meaning after you read it you go mm.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you miss cookie. That mmm is a good thing, i hope.
Comment from Pantygynt
You never cease to amaze me with the breadth of your repertoire. Have a look at my greek mythology in my portfolio for a slightly different outlook on hell. Another well-presented piece of work.. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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You never cease to amaze me with the breadth of your repertoire. Have a look at my greek mythology in my portfolio for a slightly different outlook on hell. Another well-presented piece of work.. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2015
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Thank you Pantygynt. I will.
Comment from emrpoems
God use of abab rhymes
nice bits of allitertion
Good use of enjambment
We penned 11-9 Anapestic Heroic Sonnet
Awesome pairing of picture and poem
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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God use of abab rhymes
nice bits of allitertion
Good use of enjambment
We penned 11-9 Anapestic Heroic Sonnet
Awesome pairing of picture and poem
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you Erica.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Mr T this is a devilish good write. Taking the tempter to new heights of evil is just what you did ... Have a couple of tempters in portfolio as well..Might have to bring them out and see how they play again lol
tk
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Mr T this is a devilish good write. Taking the tempter to new heights of evil is just what you did ... Have a couple of tempters in portfolio as well..Might have to bring them out and see how they play again lol
tk
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2015
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Thank you Sir T. Looking forward to it.
