The Midnight Regulator
Novel Beginning-Serial Killer Contest16 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It's fine just as it is. I thought it was interesting. A good entry for the contest. I like the fact there was not too much blood involved in the story. LOL He is a Super Hero from the dark side. Only kills those who need killing. LOL Good idea Mikey. Nancy
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It's fine just as it is. I thought it was interesting. A good entry for the contest. I like the fact there was not too much blood involved in the story. LOL He is a Super Hero from the dark side. Only kills those who need killing. LOL Good idea Mikey. Nancy
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
Comment from Tootsie55
Good work, mate. Found out how I could get back toreviewing on Louise's account to get her Member dollars up. Thanks for another good read.
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Good work, mate. Found out how I could get back toreviewing on Louise's account to get her Member dollars up. Thanks for another good read.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
Comment from robina1978
Great matching photo of a man on his own at night. It complements your story very well I liked it. It is slow because it is an intro. Are you going to continue with it? Best wishes for the contest.
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Great matching photo of a man on his own at night. It complements your story very well I liked it. It is slow because it is an intro. Are you going to continue with it? Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
Comment from justafan
Talented. Insightful.
I love reading through the mind of a character. Got me to break out the old Wikipedia to look up "table rasa"...Tabula rasa: Locke's philosophy a theory that at birth the (human)mind is a "blank slate" without rules....
Amazing piece!
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Talented. Insightful.
I love reading through the mind of a character. Got me to break out the old Wikipedia to look up "table rasa"...Tabula rasa: Locke's philosophy a theory that at birth the (human)mind is a "blank slate" without rules....
Amazing piece!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
Comment from CR Delport
An interesting point of view and written with a nice flow that makes for an easy read. Your usual brand of humor finely woven into the story makes for a nice touch. I didn't spot any obvious errors. Good luck in the contest.
Take care.
Christelle.
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An interesting point of view and written with a nice flow that makes for an easy read. Your usual brand of humor finely woven into the story makes for a nice touch. I didn't spot any obvious errors. Good luck in the contest.
Take care.
Christelle.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Mikey,
I really enjoyed this introspective piece on the serial killer. This is the kind of writing I enjoy as you can get completely immersed in it. too much are characters poorly defined and backstory sacrificed for the furthering of the plot. This was really good.
- Still, you all found it all so endearing and fascinating - perhaps lose one of the 'all's
- I love his psychiatrist - this paragraph threw me a bit as it is sandwiched in between two paragraphs about the mother. At first I thought it was a mistake saying his psychiatrist.
All the best and good luck
GMG
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Hi Mikey,
I really enjoyed this introspective piece on the serial killer. This is the kind of writing I enjoy as you can get completely immersed in it. too much are characters poorly defined and backstory sacrificed for the furthering of the plot. This was really good.
- Still, you all found it all so endearing and fascinating - perhaps lose one of the 'all's
- I love his psychiatrist - this paragraph threw me a bit as it is sandwiched in between two paragraphs about the mother. At first I thought it was a mistake saying his psychiatrist.
All the best and good luck
GMG
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2015
