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Easter wishes and my sister

A short story.

25 total reviews 
Comment from Deborah Marie
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Nice photo to go with your short story. Thanks for the Easter wishes. It's always good to remember way back when...and even today. Thanks for sharing and God Bless, Deb

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Have a great second part of the week.
Comment from Treischel
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Thank you very much Ine, for this wonderful Easter greeting and description of your plans. My you thoroughly enjoy this time with your sister. I enjoyed mine with my son, Sean, and daughter, Aisha, and their families. Good food, and the grandkids had an Easter egg hunt.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.
Comment from Bryana
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Thank so much dear Ine, I wish you and your family
the same a very happy Easter Sunday.
A holiday like this takes me back to my childhood,
the eggs, the chocolate bunnies and the delicious
food.

Have a wonderful day my friend.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hi Ine - and a Happy Easter to you. Hope you enjoy yours. We had lunch at my daughter's with large number of guests. It is on a farm so there is plenty of room for kids and dogs. We talked about when I and my husband were young we had painted hard boiled eggs to roll in the park - now it is chocolate ones of all sizes. God Bless - warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from MizKat
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Thanks Ine,

It's really nice of you to write to the people on Fanstory. I'll be leaving to go to my grandson's for a good Easter meal. His mom and her brother will go along too. I'm getting hungry already. ( ;

Kat

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 06-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great week.
Comment from misscookie
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I love the photo of the Easter eggs
IU remember me doing them and later with my children and theirs
Thank you for the kind Easter blessing . I pray you and your sister enjoy each other and have a blessed day.
Cookie

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely Easter Sunday.
reply by misscookie on 05-Apr-2015
    You're very welcome.
    May you and yours have a blessed and Happy Easter also.
    Cookie
Comment from Sis Cat
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I love the directness and honesty of this piece. It is not polished prose nor even what I would describe as a story with a beginning, middle , end, and conflict. It is one heart reaching out to another on this important day. Joy and good will radiates from your writing. As short as it is, your piece brought back memories of Easters past: the painted eggs, crowded church services, and visits from relatives. You show that writing need not be complicated to be effective. Thank you for sharing and have a Happy Easter.

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Easter Sunday.
Comment from c_lucas
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The same to you, Ine. Wishing you and yours a Happy Easter. Easter Sunday is a good day to spend with your family and enjoy your blessings. Well written.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Easter Sunday.
reply by c_lucas on 05-Apr-2015
    You're welcome, Ine. Charlie
Comment from Glasstruth
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A wonderful Easter wish. It's a time for getting together and taking a breather. Hopefully everyone will enjoy their day off. At my age egg hunting is a thing of the past. Take care. Happy Easter! Les

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Easter Sunday.
Comment from krys123
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Ine; Thank you so Kindly for wishing us all a happy Easter And may you have the same. I think the picture you you have chosen is so darling and definitely relates and reflects and definitely complement your essay so well. During this holiday season I wish you a happy Easter and may the Lord be with you always Ine.
Alex

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2015


reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
    Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Easter Sunday.