Calvary.
Achieved our redemption.89 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
John 3:16-17 says it all. This is the crux of the Christian Belief System. The key word is "Belief." Your Acrostic poem is well written. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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John 3:16-17 says it all. This is the crux of the Christian Belief System. The key word is "Belief." Your Acrostic poem is well written. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Charlie, for this most wonderful review and comments.
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You're welcome.
Comment from mfowler
You can't hide from me. I recognised this as you immediately; theme, poetic style, and boldly taking the message to the front page as usual. (I hope I'm right.)
Anyways, lovely poem. I hate acrostics but you make this one sound like an actual poem with great rhythm, word choice and imagery.
The message speaks for itself and you've linked the historical and spiritual Jesus perfectly to the transforming experience of your own life very naturally and with authentic 'passion'. Don't know why, but I loved this line best: Vast my debt, in Christ I hide
It will be a very good poem that beats this in the vote.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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You can't hide from me. I recognised this as you immediately; theme, poetic style, and boldly taking the message to the front page as usual. (I hope I'm right.)
Anyways, lovely poem. I hate acrostics but you make this one sound like an actual poem with great rhythm, word choice and imagery.
The message speaks for itself and you've linked the historical and spiritual Jesus perfectly to the transforming experience of your own life very naturally and with authentic 'passion'. Don't know why, but I loved this line best: Vast my debt, in Christ I hide
It will be a very good poem that beats this in the vote.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Your vote is appreciated Mark, you are perceptive, I can't even "hide myself" in anonymity, thanks, great review, mate,
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
This certainly is a deeply spiritual Easter acrostic poem.
Calvary is the focus point for the supreme sacrifice Jesus made to save us when He died on the cross.
The presentation is devout and the rhyming adds a extra depth to the impact of the words.
The scripture quote is perfect for this theme.
Good luck.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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This certainly is a deeply spiritual Easter acrostic poem.
Calvary is the focus point for the supreme sacrifice Jesus made to save us when He died on the cross.
The presentation is devout and the rhyming adds a extra depth to the impact of the words.
The scripture quote is perfect for this theme.
Good luck.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks Shirley for this wonderful review, exceptional comments and amazing stars, happy Easter.
Comment from mmayen
Wow!! I like the flow of this poem. The cross of Calvary stole away all my sins that glorious day. A well written acrostic. All the best in the contest and happy Easter.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Wow!! I like the flow of this poem. The cross of Calvary stole away all my sins that glorious day. A well written acrostic. All the best in the contest and happy Easter.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an inspired work in well constructed and articulate rhyme and rhythm - my only suggestion in this perfect rendering would be to change the "me" to "I" in the last line, for grammatical correctness...
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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In my opinion, an inspired work in well constructed and articulate rhyme and rhythm - my only suggestion in this perfect rendering would be to change the "me" to "I" in the last line, for grammatical correctness...
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments. Changed it, thanks
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You are so welcome - my pleasure...
Comment from misscookie
There are mountain, there are rivers there are valley there are stream
But on that hill were He died means more to me.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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There are mountain, there are rivers there are valley there are stream
But on that hill were He died means more to me.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Cookie, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from alf collier
Hi to the unknown author. A well composed text with a beautiful image to accompany your entry. Good luck in the contest, alf
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Hi to the unknown author. A well composed text with a beautiful image to accompany your entry. Good luck in the contest, alf
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Alf, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from Dean Kuch
How could any believer or follower of Christ dispute anything this wonderfully written, powerful poetic proclamation of faith has to say?
I didn't realize this was an acrostic until I looked at the contest details below the posting, and that's a good thing.
Short, sweet and on point, this is an outstanding entry in the Easter Theme Acrostic contest.
Good luck, and Amen! ~Dean
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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How could any believer or follower of Christ dispute anything this wonderfully written, powerful poetic proclamation of faith has to say?
I didn't realize this was an acrostic until I looked at the contest details below the posting, and that's a good thing.
Short, sweet and on point, this is an outstanding entry in the Easter Theme Acrostic contest.
Good luck, and Amen! ~Dean
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Dean, for this most wonderful review and comments.
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It was my pleasure. :)
Comment from Green_Jello
Excellent acrostic poem on calvary and what Christ did to save us. He really is an amazing God. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Excellent acrostic poem on calvary and what Christ did to save us. He really is an amazing God. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.
