Calvary.
Achieved our redemption.89 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is an excellent Easter acrostic and an awesome spiritual/faith poem. Best to you in the contest!!! I loved everything about it.
~~~ Teresa~~~
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
This is an excellent Easter acrostic and an awesome spiritual/faith poem. Best to you in the contest!!! I loved everything about it.
~~~ Teresa~~~
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Teresa, for this exceptional review, comments and amazing stars.
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this it is one of the best acrostics I have read so far...I love Vast for the V in Calvary ...well penned
Good luck with the contest
God bless
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
I love this it is one of the best acrostics I have read so far...I love Vast for the V in Calvary ...well penned
Good luck with the contest
God bless
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Jenny, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from evilynne
I think this poem is wonderful reminder of the true meaning of Easter. It is wonderfully worded and touching, its meaning easily followed.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
I think this poem is wonderful reminder of the true meaning of Easter. It is wonderfully worded and touching, its meaning easily followed.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Evilynne, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic, Calvary, is a timely reminder of why we celebrate this time of season and how nature's renewal is in Lind with the resurrection of man' connections to everlasting life.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
This acrostic, Calvary, is a timely reminder of why we celebrate this time of season and how nature's renewal is in Lind with the resurrection of man' connections to everlasting life.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Bill, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from l.raven
God gave His son's life so our sins would e forgiven...an awful day...and yet a glorious one...your poem is very well written...and a stunning picture...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
God gave His son's life so our sins would e forgiven...an awful day...and yet a glorious one...your poem is very well written...and a stunning picture...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Linda, , for this most wonderful review and comments.
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you are so very welcome...xxoo
Comment from Glasstruth
Nice alliteration of C words. This would be perfect on a Easter card. The rhyming is natural. Spiritually up lifting as it should be for this time of the year. Wonderfully written. Good luck w/ contest. Les
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
Nice alliteration of C words. This would be perfect on a Easter card. The rhyming is natural. Spiritually up lifting as it should be for this time of the year. Wonderfully written. Good luck w/ contest. Les
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Les, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from Drew Delaney
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Very nice poem written with the Easter theme.
Watch for mistakes after posting. Sometimes you don't seem them before, but following the post, always check for correct spelling, spacing issues, and for unnecessary marks. It looks more professional if all these things are cleaning up. Nice writing. Drew
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
Spelling error - achieved
Remove (.) following Calvary
Very nice poem written with the Easter theme.
Watch for mistakes after posting. Sometimes you don't seem them before, but following the post, always check for correct spelling, spacing issues, and for unnecessary marks. It looks more professional if all these things are cleaning up. Nice writing. Drew
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Drew, for this most wonderful review and comments.and suggestions,
Comment from fimarie78
John 3:16- my favourite verse.
Calvary is the perfect word for an Easter poem. was I, till Jesus died'- a message that so many unbelievers need to hear.
I liked the use of 'vast'. We can never repay our debt.
good luck in the contest.
Fiona
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
John 3:16- my favourite verse.
Calvary is the perfect word for an Easter poem. was I, till Jesus died'- a message that so many unbelievers need to hear.
I liked the use of 'vast'. We can never repay our debt.
good luck in the contest.
Fiona
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so Fiona, for this exceptional review, comments and wonderful stars, Happy Easter.
Comment from Ben Colder
Good one. The day salvation was born. Glad it happened, I would be still lost in a dying world. Hope you win the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
Good one. The day salvation was born. Glad it happened, I would be still lost in a dying world. Hope you win the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Ben, for this most wonderful review and comments and normal support, happy Easter to you and yours.
Comment from stephybs
This is a beautiful Acrostic this time of year and the line flow is so smooth with rythem and rhyme excellent poetry and beautiful art work to match. Thanks for sharing. Stephybs
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
This is a beautiful Acrostic this time of year and the line flow is so smooth with rythem and rhyme excellent poetry and beautiful art work to match. Thanks for sharing. Stephybs
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.