Calvary.
Achieved our redemption.89 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Great message for the Easter theme acrostic. I love the line "As far as East is from the West". I visualize that every time I say the Lord's prayer.
Happy Easter and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Great message for the Easter theme acrostic. I love the line "As far as East is from the West". I visualize that every time I say the Lord's prayer.
Happy Easter and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for this affirming and thoughtful review and lovely comments. And happy to you as well.
Comment from jandeck
This is a beautiful telling of Christ's love and redemption of our sins. Tells the main story of Calvery with just a few words. This is a lovely, well written acrostic.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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This is a beautiful telling of Christ's love and redemption of our sins. Tells the main story of Calvery with just a few words. This is a lovely, well written acrostic.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from GWinterwin
A good poem, along with a good picture of the crucifixion. Good word flow and rhyming as you tell of how we are saved because of what Christ went through. We're made perfect in God's sight because of Christ.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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A good poem, along with a good picture of the crucifixion. Good word flow and rhyming as you tell of how we are saved because of what Christ went through. We're made perfect in God's sight because of Christ.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from Sis Cat
What a wonderful acrostic poem this Easter season. I enjoy your message about redemption the most. I also appreciate that you quoted Scriptures. You have simple rhymes and a simple message of God's love. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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What a wonderful acrostic poem this Easter season. I enjoy your message about redemption the most. I also appreciate that you quoted Scriptures. You have simple rhymes and a simple message of God's love. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from Doc Holiday
Well-written acrostic verse for the Easter themed contest.
Rhymed well and presented with an excellent portrayal of the scene on Calvary Hill. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Well-written acrostic verse for the Easter themed contest.
Rhymed well and presented with an excellent portrayal of the scene on Calvary Hill. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mystery Poet
A great entry for the contest. You've taken an up-lifting approach to Christ's death and resurrection nd celebrate the glory of what was offered to us to reach salvation. An excellent image to complement your acrostic. Good alliteration in "Cross/Calvary", "transgressions/test" with abundant use of assonance and consonance to maintain your rhythm, which flows smoothly. Well done with your rhyme scheme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Hi Mystery Poet
A great entry for the contest. You've taken an up-lifting approach to Christ's death and resurrection nd celebrate the glory of what was offered to us to reach salvation. An excellent image to complement your acrostic. Good alliteration in "Cross/Calvary", "transgressions/test" with abundant use of assonance and consonance to maintain your rhythm, which flows smoothly. Well done with your rhyme scheme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Warm Regards - Lovinia xoxo
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Lovi, for this most wonderful review and comments.
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Beautifully expressed. I think you may have the winner. Good luck and Happy Easter. L xo
Comment from judiverse
Excellent Acrostic with your use of the word Calvary. You do a great job with the rhyme. Your message is clear that Jesus died for mankind's sins. He washed all transgressions away so that people may have a fresh start. Well expressed and hopeful words. judi
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Excellent Acrostic with your use of the word Calvary. You do a great job with the rhyme. Your message is clear that Jesus died for mankind's sins. He washed all transgressions away so that people may have a fresh start. Well expressed and hopeful words. judi
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Judi, for this most wonderful review and comments.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Judy Couch
This is good. It covers all the necessary information and tells of Christ's death and why it had to happen. I like the simplicity of expression and the straight forward statements.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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This is good. It covers all the necessary information and tells of Christ's death and why it had to happen. I like the simplicity of expression and the straight forward statements.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Judy, for this most wonderful review and comments.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
This poem seems so easy to read and understand, just like the message of the Gospel! How beautiful. Reading your poem has lifted my soul!
"You and me, pass judgement's test."
I love it, thank you!
-Rhonda
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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This poem seems so easy to read and understand, just like the message of the Gospel! How beautiful. Reading your poem has lifted my soul!
"You and me, pass judgement's test."
I love it, thank you!
-Rhonda
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thank you Rhonda, for this exception review, comments and amazing stars.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
a deep and meaningful little poem presented as an Acrostic - not the easiest of style - and you've kept rhyme throughout - impressive.
good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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a deep and meaningful little poem presented as an Acrostic - not the easiest of style - and you've kept rhyme throughout - impressive.
good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 02-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Thanks so much Margaret, , for this most wonderful review and comments.
