Calvary.
Achieved our redemption.89 total reviews
Comment from amahra
congratulations. Beautiful acrostic. Loved the art work, first of all. Very well chose. And I loved the very simple and warmth of the poem. Great rhymes.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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congratulations. Beautiful acrostic. Loved the art work, first of all. Very well chose. And I loved the very simple and warmth of the poem. Great rhymes.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2015
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Thanks Amara once again for your support and fantastic review, and comments, happy Easter and blessings Roy,
Comment from sunnilicious
Congratulations on taking home the Blue Ribbon. You love Calvary. I read another poem about the same hill last year. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imagery. Enjoyable to read.
Happy Easter
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Congratulations on taking home the Blue Ribbon. You love Calvary. I read another poem about the same hill last year. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imagery. Enjoyable to read.
Happy Easter
Comment Written 04-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you Alicia, for these lovely, kind thoughts and review. and happy Easter to you also, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Roy, congratulations on the big win mate. This is a very meaningful piece and I hope you are correct about the passing of the test, I have my doubts about some people. Well done Sir, cheers Fez
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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G'day Roy, congratulations on the big win mate. This is a very meaningful piece and I hope you are correct about the passing of the test, I have my doubts about some people. Well done Sir, cheers Fez
Comment Written 04-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you for these lovely, kind thoughts congrats, and review. and happy Easter to you also, blessings, Roy.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
How I do admire your work as a poet The flow is right on as its rhythm.. The subject fits the time of year as well.. Vast my debt, in Christ I hide... very moving indeed..Many mothers and fathers have given their only beloved son or daughter as well to protect what you or I may believe. I don't think until you realize that or least express it in word or rhyme you pass the judgements test.. But I do think you are a good sleuth anyway
tk
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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How I do admire your work as a poet The flow is right on as its rhythm.. The subject fits the time of year as well.. Vast my debt, in Christ I hide... very moving indeed..Many mothers and fathers have given their only beloved son or daughter as well to protect what you or I may believe. I don't think until you realize that or least express it in word or rhyme you pass the judgements test.. But I do think you are a good sleuth anyway
tk
Comment Written 04-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you TK, for these lovely, kind thoughts and review. and happy Easter to you also, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Janet7053
The acrostic is making a real comeback. I appreciate your proclamation of what God did on Calvary. The picture cut that way is very effective.
Vast my debt, in Christ I hide is such a profound line.
Godspeed in your writing endeavors.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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The acrostic is making a real comeback. I appreciate your proclamation of what God did on Calvary. The picture cut that way is very effective.
Vast my debt, in Christ I hide is such a profound line.
Godspeed in your writing endeavors.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you Janet, for these lovely, kind thoughts and review. and happy Easter to you also, blessings, Roy.
Comment from 4hisglory
Amen! A wonderful poem for Easter with the message of salvation. You used the word calvary as the acostic and explained it in the poem. That's how an acostic should be I thingk Great job.
Blessings in the contest, LaVonne
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Amen! A wonderful poem for Easter with the message of salvation. You used the word calvary as the acostic and explained it in the poem. That's how an acostic should be I thingk Great job.
Blessings in the contest, LaVonne
Comment Written 03-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thanks LaNVonne, for this fantastic review, best wishes, lovely comments and great stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from m.cleveland
Just learning poetry so acrostic poems were new to me. Looks like yours was spot on and one of my favorite topics, too, I might add!
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Just learning poetry so acrostic poems were new to me. Looks like yours was spot on and one of my favorite topics, too, I might add!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you for these lovely, kind thoughts and review. and happy Easter to you also, blessings, Roy.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from HAPPIOTTER
This is an outstanding poem! You have captured every important element of Easter here. Thank you for sharing it! Blessings to you,
Happi
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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This is an outstanding poem! You have captured every important element of Easter here. Thank you for sharing it! Blessings to you,
Happi
Comment Written 03-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you Happi, for these lovely, kind thoughts and review. and happy Easter to you also, blessings, Roy.
Comment from MelB
You and I pass judgement's test. - judgment
A very nice acrostic with good rhyme and flow.
As far as East is from the West,
Removed transgressions, now I'm blest,
You and I pass judgement's test. - favorite lines
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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You and I pass judgement's test. - judgment
A very nice acrostic with good rhyme and flow.
As far as East is from the West,
Removed transgressions, now I'm blest,
You and I pass judgement's test. - favorite lines
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thanks again, Melissa for these lovely, affirming words, and great review, yes indeed you and I might not meet here, but we will up there! PG, blessing, Roy.
Comment from Matoshka
Your presentation is beautiful. I love the picture and your message of what Our Lord did to make us free. We just need to walk in faith and His Love. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Your presentation is beautiful. I love the picture and your message of what Our Lord did to make us free. We just need to walk in faith and His Love. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thanks Matoshka for this delightful review, wonderful comments, and amazing stars,
