To Cherish Thorns
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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a well done and imaginative personification of Winter gloating about its effect on Spring.
Note: "it's sanity" in first stanza - should have no apostrophe in the possessive ITS. (The apostrophe is only needed when used as the contraction, "it is") Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
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This is a well done and imaginative personification of Winter gloating about its effect on Spring.
Note: "it's sanity" in first stanza - should have no apostrophe in the possessive ITS. (The apostrophe is only needed when used as the contraction, "it is") Good luck to you in the contest, Jeanie Mercer
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
