To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "I'm Winter, Lest You Forget"Free Verse Poetry
11 total reviews
Comment from mauidux1963
I think my friend....you took the "personification" aspect of this contest to the next level.....I LOVE how you personified winter in the FIRST PERSON.....simply brilliant! I dont believe I would have thought of that. And you gave Winter the Crotchety ...ill-tempered personality I imagine it would have. stumbling across this piece was a very pleasant surprise! Thank you.
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I think my friend....you took the "personification" aspect of this contest to the next level.....I LOVE how you personified winter in the FIRST PERSON.....simply brilliant! I dont believe I would have thought of that. And you gave Winter the Crotchety ...ill-tempered personality I imagine it would have. stumbling across this piece was a very pleasant surprise! Thank you.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2015
Comment from l.raven
Winter truly does have a way of coming and going...it comes in like a lion...and leaves at it's on pace...I love the wording in your poem...a great description of Winter...very well written....Luff Linda xxoo
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Winter truly does have a way of coming and going...it comes in like a lion...and leaves at it's on pace...I love the wording in your poem...a great description of Winter...very well written....Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
Comment from Dawny53
Perfect! I do believe this is the finest write I've come across all day.. winter speaks out his mind loud and clear in this poem.. yes, winter to me is most definitely a he.. what a great entry.. best of luck to you..
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Perfect! I do believe this is the finest write I've come across all day.. winter speaks out his mind loud and clear in this poem.. yes, winter to me is most definitely a he.. what a great entry.. best of luck to you..
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
This is one of the best personifications of ANYTHING I have ever read. Wow!! You give so much depth to winter in this. Exceptional stand out work.
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This is one of the best personifications of ANYTHING I have ever read. Wow!! You give so much depth to winter in this. Exceptional stand out work.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
Comment from thomdble
I am Minnesota born and raised and if anyone knows winter it is a Minnesotan. I say you described winter perfectly. I moved to Colorado and though we have winter here, it is a little brother to the real thing. Thank you for a wonderful and true read.
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I am Minnesota born and raised and if anyone knows winter it is a Minnesotan. I say you described winter perfectly. I moved to Colorado and though we have winter here, it is a little brother to the real thing. Thank you for a wonderful and true read.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is great! I'm sure exactly what the contest organizers were looking for. I love how you ended it- there is no escaping it. Winter is like an evil villain in your poem. Terrific write.
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This is great! I'm sure exactly what the contest organizers were looking for. I love how you ended it- there is no escaping it. Winter is like an evil villain in your poem. Terrific write.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
Comment from Dean Kuch
This was quite a chilling entry, Anonymous Poet (pun most certainly intended, LOL) It's a bit eerie, and I liked the way you've combined a bit of free verse poetry with occasional rhyming. It made for an imaginative and extremely compelling read. One has to wonder if winter truly laments the coming of spring and summer after reading this, and you've managed to do a very good job of conveying those emotions.
Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest. ~Dean :)
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This was quite a chilling entry, Anonymous Poet (pun most certainly intended, LOL) It's a bit eerie, and I liked the way you've combined a bit of free verse poetry with occasional rhyming. It made for an imaginative and extremely compelling read. One has to wonder if winter truly laments the coming of spring and summer after reading this, and you've managed to do a very good job of conveying those emotions.
Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest. ~Dean :)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
Comment from RYME4U
Great! Very well written, I love the way you have added a mocking tone to this poem. The free verse flows well and the seasonal descriptions are excellent. Great job!
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Great! Very well written, I love the way you have added a mocking tone to this poem. The free verse flows well and the seasonal descriptions are excellent. Great job!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
Comment from Pyrrho
Personification of winter ... this is the second one I read and both are excellent.
Were I to compete I believe I would be a complaining winter trying to get a foothold in southern California and exhausted by the fight.
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Personification of winter ... this is the second one I read and both are excellent.
Were I to compete I believe I would be a complaining winter trying to get a foothold in southern California and exhausted by the fight.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
Comment from Lylise
This is a strong entry into the Winter Personification Poem writing prompt. It is cleverly written and this structure is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a strong entry into the Winter Personification Poem writing prompt. It is cleverly written and this structure is great. Contest requirements appear to be filled. I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
