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Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "What To Do Next?"The story about three women who need to make money
16 total reviews
Comment from wordsfromsue
When Laura explained about her frustration at being charged for three months instead of one, and why Michael (should this be Paul?) had actually taken the picture of her wearing the swimsuit in the first place, Tanya burst out laughing.
What an exciting photo shoot this turned out to be!!! I could see the subsequent chapters going in myriad directions.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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When Laura explained about her frustration at being charged for three months instead of one, and why Michael (should this be Paul?) had actually taken the picture of her wearing the swimsuit in the first place, Tanya burst out laughing.
What an exciting photo shoot this turned out to be!!! I could see the subsequent chapters going in myriad directions.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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You've done it again! Another simple mistake that will stop me from being humiliated when I publish it as a book. It's easy to correct a kindle edition at the flick of a switch, but a book is a completely different matter. Thank you again! Alexis xxx
Comment from madhatter1977
Brilliant writing and again, it's a great idea! Laura is coming into her own here and she deserves the success I hope she gets. Just one thought - will you have to get copyright from M&S, Primark, etc to use their names? I bet you know your way around that snag better than me but I just wanted to be sure. Superb writing, Alexis! Best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Brilliant writing and again, it's a great idea! Laura is coming into her own here and she deserves the success I hope she gets. Just one thought - will you have to get copyright from M&S, Primark, etc to use their names? I bet you know your way around that snag better than me but I just wanted to be sure. Superb writing, Alexis! Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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If you enjoyed this one, Pete, I know you'll enjoy the one I posted today. You're absolutely right re M & S and Primark, but as I understand it, your publisher does deals for brand name inclusion, as do the film companies. At the end of the day, it's all about money! Alexis x
Comment from Curly Girly
Well, it looks as if Laura is going to get a good advert for Marks & Spencer's, and a good advert for herself, and one for her websites! She has a good business brain.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Well, it looks as if Laura is going to get a good advert for Marks & Spencer's, and a good advert for herself, and one for her websites! She has a good business brain.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Hopefully. She can't undo what she's already set in motion, so she'll either have to swim with the tide or fall flat on her face. It won't be long before we find out. Alexis x
Comment from Spitfire
Things are moving fast for Laura. Before you know it, she'll be a CEO! (I going to fine you one star every time you write "burst out laughing" --April Fool's ,tee,hee.)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Things are moving fast for Laura. Before you know it, she'll be a CEO! (I going to fine you one star every time you write "burst out laughing" --April Fool's ,tee,hee.)
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Now there's a thought! I was writing part two last night when I read your review and guess what? I burst out laughing! I then read what I had just written and saw 'Jacques' had done the same thing, so I told him he couldn't because you would fine me a star. I love your sense of humour, my friend. I hope you enjoy your involvement in today's chapter! Alexis x
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Oh wow, way to hook a reader. :-)
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
The chapter flew over too quickly -
I was quite lost in it - conversation
so natural - something more might
come from the photo shoot and interview...
sounds interesting.
Margare
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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The chapter flew over too quickly -
I was quite lost in it - conversation
so natural - something more might
come from the photo shoot and interview...
sounds interesting.
Margare
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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That's the plan! Today's post highlights that possibility. Thank you, Margaret. Alexis x
Comment from Cat of Letters
Hi Alexis,
Spag free so far as I can see. You might just want to check Marks and Spencer's is how you put it, with the apostrophe where it is. I think it is but go on line and check for sure.
Yes, it all seems to be going just fine. I imagine you're feeling relieved now the end is in sight.
Best wishes, Alison
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Hi Alexis,
Spag free so far as I can see. You might just want to check Marks and Spencer's is how you put it, with the apostrophe where it is. I think it is but go on line and check for sure.
Yes, it all seems to be going just fine. I imagine you're feeling relieved now the end is in sight.
Best wishes, Alison
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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I'll say! The last two chapters posted (yesterdays and todays) have needed a major rewrite now 'Jacques' is involved, so I expect there will be tons of spag! Everything else is in place now, except for the final chapter. Things keep coming to me as I'm writing, so who knows what will happen (apart from the obvious!) I'm so grateful for all your help, Alison. As I've said before, I'm never happy with a chapter until you've read it. Thank you! Alexis xxx
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Alexis. This is another wonderfully written chapter mate. Well I guess there go my chances then! Now that she'll be famous she will totally forget about her old lowly poet frind huh? Ahhhh well, sigh, I'll get by. I love this book, I'm going to go on a naked hunger strike in the Australian embassy in Manilla if you threaten to finish it again. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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G'day Alexis. This is another wonderfully written chapter mate. Well I guess there go my chances then! Now that she'll be famous she will totally forget about her old lowly poet frind huh? Ahhhh well, sigh, I'll get by. I love this book, I'm going to go on a naked hunger strike in the Australian embassy in Manilla if you threaten to finish it again. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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No worries, my friend. The sequel is already planned! Laura will never forget you - honest! Alexis xxx
Comment from rwilliam
VERY well done, my friend. I so enjoyed the journey of where this whole thing was going. I found myself sitting up and getting excited at the new twist on where the newspaper article was going. You tied that in well with your story.
BRAVO!!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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VERY well done, my friend. I so enjoyed the journey of where this whole thing was going. I found myself sitting up and getting excited at the new twist on where the newspaper article was going. You tied that in well with your story.
BRAVO!!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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It's taken me HOURS to use the experience as best I can to take the story forward. Now on the home straight! Alexis xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
This just might be the publicity she needs. The extra month on the dating site turned out to be a good thing, in a quite unexpected way. Maybe now she can quit working for the chat line too.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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This just might be the publicity she needs. The extra month on the dating site turned out to be a good thing, in a quite unexpected way. Maybe now she can quit working for the chat line too.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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It certainly is. In fact, if we didn't know differently, one might think she had posted the picture deliberately! Alexis x
Comment from MelB
Well, still don't know if she's getting a free swimsuit or not. Something better might turn up out of this unexpected twist. She might get all the publicity she needs for those sites out of this.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Well, still don't know if she's getting a free swimsuit or not. Something better might turn up out of this unexpected twist. She might get all the publicity she needs for those sites out of this.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Forget the swimsuit, Laura's just realised that this could get her sites some exposure. Fingers crossed! Alexis x
