Seeing Behind the Eyes
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Fly the Friendly Skies"A book of poems on people.
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Comment from pennedup
I find this kind of attitude at the grocery store when they say "thank you for shopping at Walmart"... or drive throughs as well.. I like the way you have described this character and then of course your last line of sarcasm "fly the friendly skies".
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
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I find this kind of attitude at the grocery store when they say "thank you for shopping at Walmart"... or drive throughs as well.. I like the way you have described this character and then of course your last line of sarcasm "fly the friendly skies".
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2015
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THanks so much!
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THanks so much!
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THanks so much!
Comment from tfawcus
Your words certainly paint the picture here! I, too, have come across this type of air hostess now and again. It is a great sadness when people are reduced to going through the motions of their workday without their heart in it, be it on land or in the sky.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Your words certainly paint the picture here! I, too, have come across this type of air hostess now and again. It is a great sadness when people are reduced to going through the motions of their workday without their heart in it, be it on land or in the sky.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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That is for sure although I suppose it could be she was having a bad day like we all do at times. Thanks for the great review:)
Comment from Thamp
I may have been on that flight with you or at least met the same flight attendant. Nice work on capturing the attitude and the details of how it affected you. Nice piece. Thank you for writing and sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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I may have been on that flight with you or at least met the same flight attendant. Nice work on capturing the attitude and the details of how it affected you. Nice piece. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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thanks:)
Comment from lancellot
Perhaps if you described more of the look behind her eyes that gave you that feeling. Her facial expression or her body language as she spoke.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Perhaps if you described more of the look behind her eyes that gave you that feeling. Her facial expression or her body language as she spoke.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thanks for the review and suggestion.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Teresa,
Is this poem about a real person or something you made up? Either way it's really good and an enjoyable read. Some people, who are supposed to show politeness to others as part of their job, can sure act awful. It's funny they don't fire her.
Kat
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Hi Teresa,
Is this poem about a real person or something you made up? Either way it's really good and an enjoyable read. Some people, who are supposed to show politeness to others as part of their job, can sure act awful. It's funny they don't fire her.
Kat
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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About a real person Kat. thanks so much.
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I don't know how they keep a person like her.
