In Fields of Clover
Casualty of war56 total reviews
Comment from Cass Carlton
Beautiful , tragic, so real. this wrings my heart with its images of a brave man who loses the only thing he has left to the ugly cruel war. Well written , rhyme perfect, rhythm perfect no typos. spot on, well done cheers Cass
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Beautiful , tragic, so real. this wrings my heart with its images of a brave man who loses the only thing he has left to the ugly cruel war. Well written , rhyme perfect, rhythm perfect no typos. spot on, well done cheers Cass
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your wonderful comments.
Comment from TOMORAL
What a fine tribute to those whose lost their lives defending their country. A twist to make the lost one a lady. Very well written and expressed, and the picture complements the poetry to a tee. Makes me want to go and look for that four leafed clover. Blessings..
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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What a fine tribute to those whose lost their lives defending their country. A twist to make the lost one a lady. Very well written and expressed, and the picture complements the poetry to a tee. Makes me want to go and look for that four leafed clover. Blessings..
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you very much. Your warm comments bring joy to my spirit. I appreciate your great remarks.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
What a beautiful and bittersweet poem. It touched my heart with its words and pressure. I loved it from start to finish!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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What a beautiful and bittersweet poem. It touched my heart with its words and pressure. I loved it from start to finish!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much. Your very nice words warm my heart with gratitude.
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It was beautiful, and pressure should say passion.
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No worries, I appreciate everything you wrote.
Comment from thomdble
Very emotionally charged piece. A sad statement of the way of the world we live in. As long as there are have's and have not's there will be war and death is inherent with that beast. The emptiness of the survivor's tears is impressively stated. You truly did a wonderful job with such a sad subject
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Very emotionally charged piece. A sad statement of the way of the world we live in. As long as there are have's and have not's there will be war and death is inherent with that beast. The emptiness of the survivor's tears is impressively stated. You truly did a wonderful job with such a sad subject
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you very much. It is great when an idea you had many years ago finally tak shape and prove to be what you hoped it would be.
Comment from royowen
A nicely composed love and tragedy poem dedicated to those who have fallen in battle, leaving behind a lover, remembered but not forgotten. Well composed in a nice even meter, an unusual reversal of the normal subject, that of a man venturing to war! Written abcb rhyming, in an even meter, I particularly liked, the fields of clover watered by his tears, well done, a pleasant and sensitive read, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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A nicely composed love and tragedy poem dedicated to those who have fallen in battle, leaving behind a lover, remembered but not forgotten. Well composed in a nice even meter, an unusual reversal of the normal subject, that of a man venturing to war! Written abcb rhyming, in an even meter, I particularly liked, the fields of clover watered by his tears, well done, a pleasant and sensitive read, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you Roy. I feel like you and I are old friends by now. I appreciate the support, your comments warm my heart with gratitude.
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My pleasure, Of course we are friends, you review me a lot, good support, thank you.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
As an Army Veteran I really could appreciate the message of this poem. It flowed nicely and I enjoyed the story. Write on.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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As an Army Veteran I really could appreciate the message of this poem. It flowed nicely and I enjoyed the story. Write on.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thank you, few times do we hear about the casualties where the one being killed was female. I felt that they should be represented as well. Although If I had my way no one would ever be killed in war ever again.
