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When Blood Collides

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A family's love is tested.

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Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
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I didn't realize how close I was to being caught up... lOL... cool, I am so glad Nicole got the job on the cruise line. And, I was delighted she had developed a plan in case she hadn't landed an acting role. That was sweet of you to help her get the computer. I have a feeling that will serve her well in her future.
You did go on cruises didn't you? Were they on the ones she sang for.?
:-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
    I'll have to check my photo album for the date of our first cruise. They were expensive back then. Any savings went to help put both our kids through college.
Comment from Walu Feral
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G'day Shari, go on the cruise, go on the cruise, it'll be fun LOL. That is another great chapter mate, a bit more upbeat and positive than some. I think that job would be great, if you can handle being inside a ship for all that time. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
    Some more upbeat coming and a shock or two. :-)
Comment from chasennov
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Another chance to bond with my daughter again. When Blood Collides Nichole's Break.' Another very good personal story you have written here. It read well, and I could empathise with you, Shari. All families have some kind of problem. Well done.


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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Chase. I know a lot of families have skeletons in their closets.
reply by chasennov on 31-Mar-2015
    You are most welcome, Shari. Have a few myself.
Comment from thomdble
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Kids and walking on egg shells, both are extremely difficult. I really like your style and wit. The stories are delightful and so human. I really like that about all I have read from you. Keep on keeping on and be careful with those eggshells.

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
    Thank you for the compliments. As for egg shells, I still have to be wary of what I say to my daughter. But she's getting easier with age.