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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Even when Laura's been paid a compliment about her "guys" looking perky, she insists it's the swimsuit that makes her look good -- she should look at herself in the mirror and see she has every reason to feel confidence about her looks and figure.
when I seen you - doesn't this sound odd -
when I've seen you
(')That's some swimsuit - add
(') You never know what might happen.
Margaret
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Even when Laura's been paid a compliment about her "guys" looking perky, she insists it's the swimsuit that makes her look good -- she should look at herself in the mirror and see she has every reason to feel confidence about her looks and figure.
when I seen you - doesn't this sound odd -
when I've seen you
(')That's some swimsuit - add
(') You never know what might happen.
Margaret
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Believe me, M & S swimsuits have an infra structure that defies gravity and old age! Thanks for catching those, Margaret. I seem to make even more mistakes when I edit than I do with the original draft. Alexis x
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Now I am going on a serious diet! And I'm going shopping for a tummy control, hip control, booby control, flabby arms control... need I go on? Then put my photo on a dating site! LOL.
I know that these big companies do actually take models that are older specifically for that reason. Well done thinking that one up. Is that what you are doing? I would love to find a way to make a bit extra without the taxman taking most of it back. Anyway, the story gets better by the day. I wanted to give you a 6 for the last one, so this is for both! Brilliant as always, my friend. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Now I am going on a serious diet! And I'm going shopping for a tummy control, hip control, booby control, flabby arms control... need I go on? Then put my photo on a dating site! LOL.
I know that these big companies do actually take models that are older specifically for that reason. Well done thinking that one up. Is that what you are doing? I would love to find a way to make a bit extra without the taxman taking most of it back. Anyway, the story gets better by the day. I wanted to give you a 6 for the last one, so this is for both! Brilliant as always, my friend. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 29-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Lol! I tell you what, M & S know what they're doing in that department. I reckon they get corset makers to design their swimwear! Sadly, I can't claim to have thought up the 'Twiggy' and 'Marie Helvin' idea. It was mentioned in one or two of the newspaper articles relating to the story.
Now back to decorating my daughters flat for the third day running. Bless you for the six! Alexis xxx
Comment from Cat of Letters
Hi Alexis,
I know you have told this story elsewhere, but it seems very - er trim lol!- and polished now.
It is just SUCH a funny story too. I mean who would expect a viral swim suit pic. Lol!
That must have been quite a day in your life, and it is so very funny.
You have captured Laura's shock as the email pile grows before her eyes beautifully.
Couldn't spot any spag.
Best wishes, Alison
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Hi Alexis,
I know you have told this story elsewhere, but it seems very - er trim lol!- and polished now.
It is just SUCH a funny story too. I mean who would expect a viral swim suit pic. Lol!
That must have been quite a day in your life, and it is so very funny.
You have captured Laura's shock as the email pile grows before her eyes beautifully.
Couldn't spot any spag.
Best wishes, Alison
Comment Written 29-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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It seemed too good to waste, especially as Laura's sites could do with a little boost, publicity wise. Eat your heart out, Mr Grey!
Thank you so much for the six, Alison. That, and your continued support are both greatly appreciated.
Alexis x
Comment from nancy_e_davis
You had that picture on your profile didn't you? I remember one from about that time. LOL That is a lot of flirts for a dating site I must say. Did you answer any of them? Just asking. This is amusing to say the least! Well done Alexis. Nancy
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You had that picture on your profile didn't you? I remember one from about that time. LOL That is a lot of flirts for a dating site I must say. Did you answer any of them? Just asking. This is amusing to say the least! Well done Alexis. Nancy
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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No, I didn't. The whole experience actually put me off the idea of dating sites after that because it sent out such a strong message (as far as I was concerned) It was because of this experience that I came up with the idea of the friendship sites. If I'd been 10 years younger, I might have been more adventurous!
Alexis x
