Let's Talk Dirty!
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Fact Meets Fiction! Part Three"The story about three women who need to make money
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Comment from wordsfromsue
Laura turned off the TV and turned on her laptop (omit the 'turned on' and possibly use 'and started her laptop')
Absolutely fun chapter. :-) That must've been SOME swimsuit!!!
Again, can't wait to see the next chapter. I wonder if any of the 800+ messages will turn out to be "Mr Right" or "Mr Right Enough"? :-)
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Laura turned off the TV and turned on her laptop (omit the 'turned on' and possibly use 'and started her laptop')
Absolutely fun chapter. :-) That must've been SOME swimsuit!!!
Again, can't wait to see the next chapter. I wonder if any of the 800+ messages will turn out to be "Mr Right" or "Mr Right Enough"? :-)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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I don't think Laura is interested in any of them, having only put the picture up for a laugh. In fact, if anything, it puts her off the idea of meeting any of them if it was only her cleavage that made them contact her in the first place! In the 'real' world, the swimsuit has never been worn again! I've sorted the 'turned on' issue by turning it to 'switched' on my master copy. My thanks again for your reviews and this fantastic rating. Alexis xxx
Comment from Curly Girly
Wow! Over 800 e-mails from admirers / horny males. That is a lot to go through. I am not sure how she will sort them out. I stress when my FS inbox exceeds 20, lol!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Wow! Over 800 e-mails from admirers / horny males. That is a lot to go through. I am not sure how she will sort them out. I stress when my FS inbox exceeds 20, lol!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Me too! Laura doesn't even bother reading them because she got hardly any response before she showed her cleavage. Shame, there might have been a keeper in there! Alexis x
Comment from Maureen's Pen
LOL Laura is never going to get through all those emails. Great fun and light post, well penned as usual. I'm laughing to myself over your input here:) What was it 800 emails, LOL - I remember those conversations we had:)
Nicely penned, no issues my end my friend.
wc
xxooxx
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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LOL Laura is never going to get through all those emails. Great fun and light post, well penned as usual. I'm laughing to myself over your input here:) What was it 800 emails, LOL - I remember those conversations we had:)
Nicely penned, no issues my end my friend.
wc
xxooxx
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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It ended up over a thousand, but I only read a handful. I still have them in a 'saved' box in my emails, in case anyone ever doubts that it happened! Thank you for catching up wc, I'm just happy to hear from you, and know the migraines are over. Love Alexis xxx
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! What a fun chapter. She can't even wade thru that many emails. There might be a great guy in there but she'd never find him in such a large haystack. :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Wow! What a fun chapter. She can't even wade thru that many emails. There might be a great guy in there but she'd never find him in such a large haystack. :)
Comment Written 31-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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So true! She didn't even want to be on the dating site after she was abducted on her first date, so it's ironic that she should get all that attention. Alexis x
Comment from scongrove
Great chapter! :) I figured she would get a lot of attention is she posted a picture of herself in a bathing suit. :) That just shows you how shallow men can be. They always respond to a sexy picture. I guess it's just in most men's nature to act that way. Can't wait to read more!
Shana :)
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Great chapter! :) I figured she would get a lot of attention is she posted a picture of herself in a bathing suit. :) That just shows you how shallow men can be. They always respond to a sexy picture. I guess it's just in most men's nature to act that way. Can't wait to read more!
Shana :)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2015
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Soooo behind with my reviews! If you enjoyed yesterday's Part One, I know you'll enjoy part two. All sorts of ideas have been complicating my writing recently, but I'm now getting it straight in my head for the final lap. My thanks again for all your wonderful support and encouragement. You have inspired me to carry on, even when I didn't feel like it. Alexis xxx
Comment from Walu Feral
hahahahaha! G'day alexis. Crikey, free food and grog for the rest of her life! Plus all that sex...have you got the address for this Marks and Spencers so I can buy myself one of those swim suits? LOL. Well done mate, that is incredible stuff, bring it on! Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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hahahahaha! G'day alexis. Crikey, free food and grog for the rest of her life! Plus all that sex...have you got the address for this Marks and Spencers so I can buy myself one of those swim suits? LOL. Well done mate, that is incredible stuff, bring it on! Cheers Fez
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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I'm taking my time with the last few chapters, Fez (apart from the fact I'm helping my daughter decorate her flat to let out!) Now on the home straight! Alexis xxx
Comment from rwilliam
AWESOME Chapter. This was fun to read. I'm a bit envious. Wish I was in as good as shape as, Laura!! :-D I think I need her swimsuit for this coming summer. LOL
I didn't see any mistakes or fixes. Very well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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AWESOME Chapter. This was fun to read. I'm a bit envious. Wish I was in as good as shape as, Laura!! :-D I think I need her swimsuit for this coming summer. LOL
I didn't see any mistakes or fixes. Very well done, my friend.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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I'm sure M&S do swimsuits mail order. They're amazing - they support the bits that droop, and flatten down the rest! Alexis xxx
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That's a miracle bathing suit! LOL Ty.
Comment from Spitfire
These gals are becoming big time entrepreneurs! I'll have to find your story. I find it humorous that Laura's a church goer while promoting herself with her body even if unintentionally.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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These gals are becoming big time entrepreneurs! I'll have to find your story. I find it humorous that Laura's a church goer while promoting herself with her body even if unintentionally.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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I'm sure God understands. Hopefully, chat line work will soon be a thing of the past! Alexis x
Comment from Cindy Warren
Wow, did you get the free stuff? Maybe I need to lose a few pounds and buy a new swim suit. But most likely the guys on the website aren't worth any woman's time.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Wow, did you get the free stuff? Maybe I need to lose a few pounds and buy a new swim suit. But most likely the guys on the website aren't worth any woman's time.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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I didn't, but I earned several thousand pounds by writing articles about the experience for various magazines and newspapers. I just wish, like Laura, I had something to promote at the time because it was a golden opportunity because of the exposure. Perhaps Laura will have more luck than I did! Alexis x
Comment from MelB
Wow, that's a lot of responses! Any you were interested in? Men are so predictable. A little cleavage and they fall all over themselves. Can't wait to read what happens next.
One suggestion: You're always been wearing polo necks or loose sweaters when I seen you. - You've ...when I've seen you or you're always wearing polo necks or loose sweaters when I see you.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Wow, that's a lot of responses! Any you were interested in? Men are so predictable. A little cleavage and they fall all over themselves. Can't wait to read what happens next.
One suggestion: You're always been wearing polo necks or loose sweaters when I seen you. - You've ...when I've seen you or you're always wearing polo necks or loose sweaters when I see you.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thank you for catching that. I changed tense at the last minute, but didn't follow it through. My thanks again for your continued reviews and support. Alexis x
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You're welcome. Enjoying the story!
