New Beginnings
Spring after a long winter12 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
good use of abcb rhyming
pops it's head - drop the apostrophe
good illustrative examples that show the change from winter cold to life-giving and warm spring :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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good use of abcb rhyming
pops it's head - drop the apostrophe
good illustrative examples that show the change from winter cold to life-giving and warm spring :-) Brooke
Comment Written 28-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review of my work. I value your input. Have a nice Easter. Kathy :)
Comment from Charlene0513
A blend of activities that array the season of Spring as we portray
with the incentive of short shorts, mini skirts and bathing suits and singing skip-to-my-loo all the awhile.
Good fluency and cadence through.
Enjambments
Charlene
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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A blend of activities that array the season of Spring as we portray
with the incentive of short shorts, mini skirts and bathing suits and singing skip-to-my-loo all the awhile.
Good fluency and cadence through.
Enjambments
Charlene
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thank you for taking your time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your comments and the music. :) Have a nice Easter.
Comment from Tatarka2
I can only hope it will be so. I thought this cheerful poem was well-rhymed, flowed smoothly, and fulfilled the requirements of the prompt. I can't think of a thing I would suggest you change. Strong entry.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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I can only hope it will be so. I thought this cheerful poem was well-rhymed, flowed smoothly, and fulfilled the requirements of the prompt. I can't think of a thing I would suggest you change. Strong entry.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thank you. I think it's just around the corner. Happy Easter. Kathy
Comment from Bill Schott
This line: "Teachers end the school year and hand out the final grade."... is the best part of this ode to spring. Nice job with the Spring-to-Spring placement.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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This line: "Teachers end the school year and hand out the final grade."... is the best part of this ode to spring. Nice job with the Spring-to-Spring placement.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thanks Bill. Glad you liked it. Do you teach? Thank you again.
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Yes. High school. Thinking of retiring.
Comment from Helena Frances
Beautiful picture, Great verse. You
wrapped up everything I am anticipating--after
a very snowy winter. Thank you for officially claiming Spring:)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Beautiful picture, Great verse. You
wrapped up everything I am anticipating--after
a very snowy winter. Thank you for officially claiming Spring:)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you for reviewing my poem. We had a week of wonderful bike riding weather. Then Minnesota decided not quite yet and a few more inches of snow hit covering the green grass. Hopefully this week we should warm up once again. Thank you for taking your time for the great review.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate. This beautiful poem is like a breath of fresh air after all the cold doom and gloom pieces over the last few months. It's a wonderful contest entry and I wish you luck. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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G'day mate. This beautiful poem is like a breath of fresh air after all the cold doom and gloom pieces over the last few months. It's a wonderful contest entry and I wish you luck. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thanks Fez. I agree. Spring is really a great season, sunshine always give me a new perspective. I have been out in the fresh air and that makes a world of difference. Thank you for the review too. Hope all is well with you too. Happy Easter.
Comment from Njorgensen
Light and easy. That's what this poem is. It's bright and sunny, ushering in the new season. You bring to life the essential ingredients of Spring and the only thing missing is a light breeze. The rhyming kept the poem moving along nicely.
Nancy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Light and easy. That's what this poem is. It's bright and sunny, ushering in the new season. You bring to life the essential ingredients of Spring and the only thing missing is a light breeze. The rhyming kept the poem moving along nicely.
Nancy
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2015
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Thank you for taking your time to read and review my poem. Your input is greatly appreciated. Oh, that breeze arrived in Minnesota today. Happy Easter.:) Kathy
Comment from mbagby23
I like how you talk about the things that go on during spring season. Most that write about the earth rebirth. I know I dd. Looking at spring in your eyes I see accomplishments happening.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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I like how you talk about the things that go on during spring season. Most that write about the earth rebirth. I know I dd. Looking at spring in your eyes I see accomplishments happening.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the review. It was fun to try to do something else because I have written more about the earth and flowers etc too. I really appreciate your time and interest. Thank you again.
Comment from RYME4U
You have done a good job with this contest entry. You have rhymed your quatrains well and the flow of words is even. This is well done!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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You have done a good job with this contest entry. You have rhymed your quatrains well and the flow of words is even. This is well done!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thank you for your time and comment reviewing my work. I am so grateful to people such as yourself. You give helpful critiques and it helps a writer to improve their work. I have so much to learn BUT this is a great place to be. Thank you again.
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I see no point in criticizing people's work. When I first started I needed all the encouragement I could get. Your poetry is very good. Keep it up!
Comment from patcelaw
Very good poem for the prompt entry. it flows well , easy to read and presented nicely. Good luck in the contest. Blessings for a wonder filled spring. Patricia
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Very good poem for the prompt entry. it flows well , easy to read and presented nicely. Good luck in the contest. Blessings for a wonder filled spring. Patricia
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2015
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Thank you Patricia. Last week I was riding my Terra Trike...this week we are back to snow. BUT it is just around the corner. Blessing to you and yours. Have a wonderful Easter. Thank you again for the wonderful review. Kathy
