Grace is What We Need
Can't we all just get along?50 total reviews
Comment from Jacob Collins
I am one to believe that the majority of people in this world are good but there are those who wish to kill and destroy. ISIS is the main problem I feel we are facing at the moment, it seems that any minute now the world is expecting another terrorist attack which begs the question indeed: why can't we all get on. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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I am one to believe that the majority of people in this world are good but there are those who wish to kill and destroy. ISIS is the main problem I feel we are facing at the moment, it seems that any minute now the world is expecting another terrorist attack which begs the question indeed: why can't we all get on. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much, Jacob. I appreciate your review and comments. 8-)
Comment from Cedar
This is a very inspiring message and you raise a very important question, "why can't we all just get along?" That's a question that has been haunting us from the beginning of time and I don't imagine it will ever stop. Your presentation is gorgeous. Great job. Bill
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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This is a very inspiring message and you raise a very important question, "why can't we all just get along?" That's a question that has been haunting us from the beginning of time and I don't imagine it will ever stop. Your presentation is gorgeous. Great job. Bill
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much, Bill. I appreciate your review. 8-)
Comment from stephybs
This is a very nice piece and shows a spiritual love and grace. Lovely lines and very poetic structure that dose you proud. The art work and colours are stunning too. Stephanie
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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This is a very nice piece and shows a spiritual love and grace. Lovely lines and very poetic structure that dose you proud. The art work and colours are stunning too. Stephanie
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Thank you, Stephanie. I appreciate your review!
Comment from walbc
Your poem flows extremely well and the topic is interesting and universal. Why can't most humans show love and kindness to others? Yes, we are all sinners so who are we to judge others? seems to me to be the theme of this poem. Well written. Wendy.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Your poem flows extremely well and the topic is interesting and universal. Why can't most humans show love and kindness to others? Yes, we are all sinners so who are we to judge others? seems to me to be the theme of this poem. Well written. Wendy.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much, Wendy. I appreciate your review and understanding of the poem's intended message. 8-)
Comment from Doc Holiday
Too much suffering and pain already here...We do need to try harder and look for what we have in common instead of what separates us...Your poem has a great message for the world and what better time to serve it than during this Easter season. Peace to all!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Too much suffering and pain already here...We do need to try harder and look for what we have in common instead of what separates us...Your poem has a great message for the world and what better time to serve it than during this Easter season. Peace to all!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much for your understanding of my poem's intended message! :-)
Comment from GWinterwin
Very good message in this poem, also good word flow, and rhyming. Very true that grace is what we need to show each other, and it seems the judgment begins before the grace can be shown.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Very good message in this poem, also good word flow, and rhyming. Very true that grace is what we need to show each other, and it seems the judgment begins before the grace can be shown.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much for reviewing! :-)
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Thanks so much for reviewing! :-)
Comment from Thamp
Excellent point and always good timing. It would be great if we could all get along - even Jesus didn't get to see that while here with us. Great topic - thanks for writing and sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Excellent point and always good timing. It would be great if we could all get along - even Jesus didn't get to see that while here with us. Great topic - thanks for writing and sharing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Writingfundimension
This lovely poem is filled with good-sense, BG. I like that you mention how people watch the news, only fueling their feelings of frustration and letting themselves be convinced of the sin of others. This is a particularly poignant message for this coming Easter holiday.
:) Bev
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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This lovely poem is filled with good-sense, BG. I like that you mention how people watch the news, only fueling their feelings of frustration and letting themselves be convinced of the sin of others. This is a particularly poignant message for this coming Easter holiday.
:) Bev
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thanks, Bev. I appreciate your review. :-)
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Thanks, Bev. I appreciate your review. :-)
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You're welcome, BG.
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a quite wonderful and effective poem about God's grace. The rhymes are smooth, the lines are polished, and the message is powerful. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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This is a quite wonderful and effective poem about God's grace. The rhymes are smooth, the lines are polished, and the message is powerful. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thanks so much! :-)
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Thanks so much! :-)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Amen to that, boxergirl! I couldn't agree more with what you've written here. The media loves to hype racial events to stir up dissension, create chaos among the masses. They only care about their bottom line -- the ratings. Does anyone truly believe that very many of them feel for a young, unarmed black male being gunned down in the streets by callous cops? Or a white girl gang raped by a group of Hispanics in a seedy part of Anytown, USA? No, but they want you and me to care, and they make damn sure we know about such incidents too.
Great poem, with excellent rhyme, rhythm and flow, on a very pertinent topic.
Excellent presentation, too!
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Amen to that, boxergirl! I couldn't agree more with what you've written here. The media loves to hype racial events to stir up dissension, create chaos among the masses. They only care about their bottom line -- the ratings. Does anyone truly believe that very many of them feel for a young, unarmed black male being gunned down in the streets by callous cops? Or a white girl gang raped by a group of Hispanics in a seedy part of Anytown, USA? No, but they want you and me to care, and they make damn sure we know about such incidents too.
Great poem, with excellent rhyme, rhythm and flow, on a very pertinent topic.
Excellent presentation, too!
~Dean :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Thanks Dean. I appreciate your understanding of my poem's message!
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Thanks Dean. I appreciate your understanding of my poem's message!
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It was my pleasure, boxergirl. Excellent work. ;} ~Dean
