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Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Beside"poems inspired by Psalm 23
31 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
This reads well with you use of enjambment. My attempt at a minute poem read clumsy. Yours flows like the water from the well of which you tell. Excellent theme.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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This reads well with you use of enjambment. My attempt at a minute poem read clumsy. Yours flows like the water from the well of which you tell. Excellent theme.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015
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We must have been reviewing each other at the same time. Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate the kind comments, especially since it was my first attempt at a minute poem. It seems there is always something new for me try on this site. Debi
Comment from Ben Colder
He did that, poet. He also told her she was living with someone who was not her husband. Times has not changed much, but people do, thanks to Jesus. Hope you win
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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He did that, poet. He also told her she was living with someone who was not her husband. Times has not changed much, but people do, thanks to Jesus. Hope you win
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the nightfall comments and the wonderful best wishes. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from Nosha17
A lovely reminder of the woman at the well bible story. The woman believed His word and told others about him, good message for us to emulate. Good use of rhyming and good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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A lovely reminder of the woman at the well bible story. The woman believed His word and told others about him, good message for us to emulate. Good use of rhyming and good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you so much for the great review, Faye. I appreciate your insights about the theme, the kind comments about the writing and the good wishes. Thank you for the encouragement. Debi
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Debi,
I really enjoy reading minute poems and yours is nicely written.
What a terrific image you chose to compliment your text. Well done.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Hi Debi,
I really enjoy reading minute poems and yours is nicely written.
What a terrific image you chose to compliment your text. Well done.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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I am pleased you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for you kind comments, Lou. I appreciation the encouragement. Debi
Comment from c_lucas
The Biblical story is often quoted in reverence to Jesus' ministry. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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The Biblical story is often quoted in reverence to Jesus' ministry. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your insights and the gracious words about the writing. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi
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You are welcome, Debi. Charlie
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You're welcome, Debi. Charlie
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a very nice minute poem about Christ's message to the Samaritan woman at Jacobs well. The meter and rhyme are well done wj. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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This is a very nice minute poem about Christ's message to the Samaritan woman at Jacobs well. The meter and rhyme are well done wj. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the the encouraging review and the good luck wishes, Nancy. I appreciate the comments about the meter and the rhyme. Debi
Comment from vw5004
This is a beautiful poem with a beautiful picture to complement your words. You have inspired and captured a moment that one can see. You have painted a beautiful picture with your words and the imagery come through nicely. Well done, good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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This is a beautiful poem with a beautiful picture to complement your words. You have inspired and captured a moment that one can see. You have painted a beautiful picture with your words and the imagery come through nicely. Well done, good luck.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the gracious review. I appreciate the kind comments about the writing and the good luck wishes. I am so pleased your could see the moment described.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-What a beautiful photo to begin your poem.
-Good use of rhyme.
-The description of the woman's emotions in the first two stanzas is very good.
-The use of "quenching water" and "thirst no more" is very good in the last stanza.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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-What a beautiful photo to begin your poem.
-Good use of rhyme.
-The description of the woman's emotions in the first two stanzas is very good.
-The use of "quenching water" and "thirst no more" is very good in the last stanza.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the great review. I appreciate you pointing out what you liked so I know what works. Thank you for the encouragement. Debi
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Helena Frances
Beautiful picture!
Joy bursts through the verse.
You tell an old story with excitement and love.
A beautiful message of hope and belief.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Beautiful picture!
Joy bursts through the verse.
You tell an old story with excitement and love.
A beautiful message of hope and belief.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments, Helena. I am so pleased that you could feel the joy and excitement in the verse. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from artemis53
Beautiful summation of such an important event. The waters that you shall drink from or be bathed clean of your sin. Water is such an integral part of biblical history.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Beautiful summation of such an important event. The waters that you shall drink from or be bathed clean of your sin. Water is such an integral part of biblical history.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the insightful commentary about the story and the kind words about the writing. I appreciate the encouragement.
