Comment from Cat of Letters

Excellent

Hi there,

Interesting to read the follow up on your last episode.

That is dreadful Bev not giving the relatives the chance to attend the funeral. Though Dee does sound a bit of a pain.

It is a bit fishy a rapid cremation. Though I guess there must have been an autopsy.

Very interesting.

Couple of tiny typos:

Jill stayed quiet. Then, "She loved him." doesn't look quite right without a said or the likes in there.

Missing a " at the end of Dee's speech which ends 'with his money.'

Some funny squiggle has got in to the next para.

Best wishes, Alison

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015

Thanks Alison for noting the typos. I'm still hunting for the missing a. No autopsy because he had a history of heart problems.

Comment from joann r romei

Excellent

This is an intense continuation to the story, will we ever know if he was murdered? i hope not, that would be a tragedy, no errors.

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015

My own feelings? Bev gave him herbal medicine not realizing the damage it could do.

reply by joann r romei on 23-Mar-2015

That makes a lot of sense, and she had him cremated because she may have realized it harmed him after he passed, what a shame,

reply by joann r romei on 23-Mar-2015

That makes a lot of sense, and she had him cremated because she may have realized it harmed him after he passed, what a shame,