The Wonder
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Skip to my Lou"miscellaneous poems
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Comment from amada
I must confess that the three first lines of your poem sent a little chill. Snakes, not my fave subject, the same as guns. But anyway I continue reading it, my friend. Good work.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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I must confess that the three first lines of your poem sent a little chill. Snakes, not my fave subject, the same as guns. But anyway I continue reading it, my friend. Good work.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
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Hi Beautiful...-smile- ahh mine either...but they do exist. Thank you Nancy....hope you're well....love Michael
Comment from jlsavell
Good evening Michael.
The weather is gorgeous here and I know it is in the woodlands. My favorite township by the way.
How are you.M?
Well this poem has to be about someone, someone you know very well, eh?
An impressive figure surviving the hard knocks of life.
You make the brain overheat from a use it is not use to.
Gayle and I were just having a talk about Nugent. I love this guy in all his craziness. Gayle just thinks he's plain crazy. Bob Dylan was her man. Well come to think of it, I think I was a groupie. You know one of those chicks tgat followed him everywhere and panted uncontrollably... lololol. If I hadn't been so gawd fearing of my Grandma Emma whk knows what line I would have crossed.
Okay enough said.. no long review. I have to sceedaddle. My wine is waiting.
Miss and adore you dear sweet man.
Jimi.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Good evening Michael.
The weather is gorgeous here and I know it is in the woodlands. My favorite township by the way.
How are you.M?
Well this poem has to be about someone, someone you know very well, eh?
An impressive figure surviving the hard knocks of life.
You make the brain overheat from a use it is not use to.
Gayle and I were just having a talk about Nugent. I love this guy in all his craziness. Gayle just thinks he's plain crazy. Bob Dylan was her man. Well come to think of it, I think I was a groupie. You know one of those chicks tgat followed him everywhere and panted uncontrollably... lololol. If I hadn't been so gawd fearing of my Grandma Emma whk knows what line I would have crossed.
Okay enough said.. no long review. I have to sceedaddle. My wine is waiting.
Miss and adore you dear sweet man.
Jimi.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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no...not like you think. I know his mind...his kind. I've done some research, went to another small town he planted seed in...talked to some who reaped its harvest. His kind leave lasting fingerprint. lol....impressive...? -headshake-....the opposite, so "un" he's accepted and overlooked as ordinary...that's why he hates me...-wink-...and everyone else...-smile-....you see "Legions" daddy...loses....and he knows it. So...he kills what he can, while allowed. Ahh Jimi....Ted went crazy after while...but His first "ted Nugent"...was -headshake-...memorable....and I like his attitude...ya know without the tarzan thong...Well I like Dylan too....I'm an all around songster....I like whatever moves me in the moment....well alright, lets try this again...-clink-...cheers....love Michael
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Hey crazy is good. You gave to be crazy to survive in this world. I kind of like being not what most deem normal. That duhhhh... kind of boring doncha kinda think? I relish being crazy. I NEVER KNOW WHAT THE DAY HOLDS..EHEHEHE
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Hey crazy is good. You gave to be crazy to survive in this world. I kind of like being not what most deem normal. That duhhhh... kind of boring doncha kinda think? I relish being crazy. I NEVER KNOW WHAT THE DAY HOLDS..EHEHEHE
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Do you know me...? eccentric "crazy" is fun...sometimes. Evil....is disgusting...always.
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Well I was not talking psycho evil crazy I was talking blissfully insane. Where you just rock and roll. What ever paints your wagon, puffs your dragon. Puts the wind in your sails and ths pearls in your pail. Yes yes I know you quite well when I was under your spell but our time ran out and now I doubt. But I am just a poetess, more or letess
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-smile-...well give John a call, maybe he can puff your dragon...?...-wink-
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tsk tsk.. a little moody there dream man. Have a good day. Winkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Comment from Healing
Nice work. Must admit I had to read it a few times. Totally different style I have seen on this site before. Great work. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Ky
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Nice work. Must admit I had to read it a few times. Totally different style I have seen on this site before. Great work. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Ky
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Why thank you Sir...much appreciated. ah yea that's what I hear uniquely mine...-smile- bless you bro...love Bug-
Comment from Donovan
No one is going to say you are bashful. Powerful words, put it all in perspective. I like the flow, so often these types of verbiage does not. Good job. I'm depressed.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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No one is going to say you are bashful. Powerful words, put it all in perspective. I like the flow, so often these types of verbiage does not. Good job. I'm depressed.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Hey Man...ah don't be...he loses in the end...its been decided...-smile- no...celebration is in order! raise your chalice in toast to tomorrows promise...here here cheers....love Bug-
Comment from cbat
Sorry! You have a interesting poem but, with my experience I could not quite grasp your direction.
I would think I was on the right path then get lost again.
I hope you keep writing.
Reading is taken like tea, just not every one's cup.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Sorry! You have a interesting poem but, with my experience I could not quite grasp your direction.
I would think I was on the right path then get lost again.
I hope you keep writing.
Reading is taken like tea, just not every one's cup.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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0...my...God. .....0 my god....did you...how ...could you...you. And then you said....o my god....you said keep writing- headshake-......yea right,after this?
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: there you go again, writing in such a mysterious way that this old lady goes, "WWWWhat was that"? I'm wondering if you are joining the Dean/Stephen/Edgar gang to twist our minds with gruesome ghoulies. What's with that ugly picture?? Having a bad day, son?? However, it is nice to holler, "Hi" as I stomp around FanStoryville. Bless you, my writing friend. Soft Thunder
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Michael: there you go again, writing in such a mysterious way that this old lady goes, "WWWWhat was that"? I'm wondering if you are joining the Dean/Stephen/Edgar gang to twist our minds with gruesome ghoulies. What's with that ugly picture?? Having a bad day, son?? However, it is nice to holler, "Hi" as I stomp around FanStoryville. Bless you, my writing friend. Soft Thunder
Comment Written 22-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
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Well I wrestle with principalities and forces of evil...where tounges are set to flame or put to rest, when timing sees fit.....-smile- how are you thunder....you look marvoulus....-smile- ahh just saying hi to old friend. well you hollar at me whenever you can, i look forward to it....love Michael
Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, amazing how you come up with some of the lines you do sweetie...stitched together ghetto rich...pretty much all of them...kind of dark...but written in your own special wording...very well written...look for it to be in one of the poems of the month contests...and yes I do remember Ted Nugent...didn't listen to all his songs...but some...and the picture baby...scary...a great poem...very well written...love ya you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015
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Hi Michael, amazing how you come up with some of the lines you do sweetie...stitched together ghetto rich...pretty much all of them...kind of dark...but written in your own special wording...very well written...look for it to be in one of the poems of the month contests...and yes I do remember Ted Nugent...didn't listen to all his songs...but some...and the picture baby...scary...a great poem...very well written...love ya you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015
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Hello Sweet Lady Linda...-smile-...good woman wand working miracles ...-smile- I thank you for you're review and priceless friendship. Dont let them babysit you to death....-wink- ....love Michael
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LOL...good woman wand working miracles...look in the mirror baby...do you know how many favors you go out of your way helping people every chance you get???...your a good man...and I'm thankful for your priceless friendship...they won't babysit me to death...LOL...love you Linda
Comment from Joan E.
Good Sunday, working man--I hope you're feeling better. Your picture selection certainly caught my attention and established the mood! Once again, I liked your wordplay with expressions like "bungee corduroy-d," "hollow-wean," "fawn headlight caught" and "buries finite her hatchet". Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015
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Good Sunday, working man--I hope you're feeling better. Your picture selection certainly caught my attention and established the mood! Once again, I liked your wordplay with expressions like "bungee corduroy-d," "hollow-wean," "fawn headlight caught" and "buries finite her hatchet". Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 22-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015
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hey J...-smile- ...yes maam...since I was fifteen or so...goes an honest mans life...as opposed to them who feed on the human heartache they create...and so goes Legion legacy , until he rests in peace innosence has none...-smile-...well big hugs back, good to see you J...love bug-
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There's another poem in your response! I worked my way through college, and forever after until I retired seven years ago. Have a good evening- Joan
