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BLAZE: Angel from Hell

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Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.

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Comment from Cajungirl
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Franny sure got Blaze to thinking about poor Seb. Perhaps he will be set free from one prison only to go to another. LOL


 Comment Written 26-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2015
    Thanks so much, Vergie. Yep, that's what will happen...unless he does run away for real. :)
Comment from Selina Stambi
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Oh, and now I'm left wondering what Franny was going to say!

This chapter feels a wee bit longer than the usual length, but perhaps it's me. You set the stage beautifully with Franny in the chair, the buzz of the dryer, etc.

And now off to Rome ... and not to murder the Pope, thank heavens!

An entertaining read, Phyllis. Wonderfully well done, dear. :)

Love,

Sonali :)


 Comment Written 23-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
    Thanks so much, Sonali. It gets very intense when Tara arrives. Chapters up to 80 are posted. :)
reply by Selina Stambi on 23-Mar-2015
    My dear lady, I'm limping and crawling to keep up with you!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2015
    LOL! Don't hurt yourself. :)
Comment from nancyjam
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Good conversation. Franny helped her understand a little more about her past
and manages to help her see her mistakes in her treatment of Sebastian.
Can she use the camera to change him back?

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Nancy. Yes, she can change him back and will have to do so at some point. She's clever enough to find a way. :)
Comment from judiverse
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Excellent discussion between Franny and Blaze. Franny is so down-to-earth, if you can say that about an angel. She makes Tara see the terrible situation she left Sebastian in. As Franny points out, it wasn't Blazes's place to punish Sebastian. Franny leaves it to Blaze to figure out what to do about Sebastian after the honeymoon's over. Franny has something else to bring up, but Tara interrupts that. Great characterization and discussion, and worth a six! judi

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015
    Thanks a million times for the sixer, Judi. Glad you enjoyed the discussion. Things get emotional and serious in 79, and the last paragraph of that chapter will be the topic of the next. Blaze will have to deal with Luke soon, but he still hasn't a clue. :)

    Oh, btw, Franny is not an angel. She's a human soul in Heaven. Angels were created first to live in Heaven. People came second to live on Earth. One can't turn into the other, except for Tara, who gets to live as a human and MAY or MAY NOT get back her wings and angel status when she dies, but I make her an exception in the story... just because I can. LOL!
Comment from michaelcahill
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Whew. Franny pulled no punches here. Blaze does have to answer for some things for her redemption to ring true. It was pretty mean what she did to Sebastian. (and funny too!!) A lot on her plate now considering Tara's role in her ending up in hell. I have to think that Tara had no idea Blaze ended up in hell like that. It just doesn't fit her personality. We'll see, she was blinded by the Devil at the time... mikey

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Mikey. I see you guessed the truth about Tara not knowing Blaze was running in after her. You're a smart cookie. Can a guy be a cookie? Or maybe you should be a smart pizza. :)
Comment from Misrael
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Wow! This is getting very involved and confusing as well. But it just makes it that much more interesting. Which really gets and keeps a persons attention. Good read and keep on writing.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2015
    Thank you so much. I just now posted the next, VERY INTENSE, chapter.
Comment from Spitfire
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Again, Franny serves as a useful character to refresh the reader on past events and also to move the plot forward. She doesn't waste any words and makes Blaze of the immoral lessons and negative emotions she learned in Hell.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Shari. A very emotional chapter coming up tonight. :)
Comment from alexisleech
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I so wish I could get Franny to appear in front of a few people I know! She has a way of putting things that you can't argue with--a rare art! I've just been called up for jury service in April. Can you please send her to give me a hand?

Alexis x

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
    All I can do is ask her. But you have to be a sinner in need of redemption. I'm sure you qualify. :) Thanks so much for reading. :)
Comment from seaglass
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It's good to see Blaze coming around. Still some fence mending to do to be forgiven and redeemed. Fanny is like a fairy godmother but rather than bringing physical beauty and wealth, she tends to the spiritual.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Carolyn. I like your analysis of Franny's role. :)
Comment from gypsycaravan
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Somehow I hope Franny can get God to fix it so Blaze is either not pregnant and gets pregnant with Theo's child in Rome or even changes the paternity in utero. Can't' wait to see what happens.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Shirley. We don't always have things exactly the way we would prefer them, true in books as in life. Blaze will have to deal with the facts in her own way. :)