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BLAZE: Angel from Hell

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Blaze is one of Lucifer's demons, a fallen angel.

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Comment from ravenblack
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That is Blaze's protection- the child she us carrying love itself teaching her love. And it is through the child that she will truly come to understand her love for Theo.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Ed. You've got it. I wish I could grasp your poetry as well. :)
Comment from Spitfire
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Wow! Talk about a lesson in Christianity. A great way for young readers to understand about being at one with the Divine. A lot of FS members are devoted to the teachings of the Bible. Have you heard from them?

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks so much, Shari. I'd guess that most of my readers are religious folks. I've only had one complaint, and that was about calling Lucifer Luke. :)
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Isn't amazing how just talking to Father Murphy can ease one's mind and make everything seem alright? But, why is it that I feel like this chapter is the calm before a storm? Oh, I'm sure it's just me being a worry wart. Thanks for another fun chapter. :-)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
    LOL! It's all gonna blow sky high, but not yet. :)
Comment from boxergirl
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This is a nice continuation of your story line. Father Murphy helps Blaze to understand maybe why she has a chance at getting back to God and that it is all about our love for Him. I liked also that you explained why she couldn't communicate with God while in Hell and that it would be the worst punishment. Can't wait to see where this is going. I'm afraid things are going to nicely for Blaze and she is going to hit a bump soon. 8-)

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks so much for an insightful review. Blaze will hit a bump so hard that it will knock her off the Earth for a while. But that's not till later, near the dramatic conclusion. :)
Comment from Muffins
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This chapter feels like the closing of one door for Blaze and the start of going throu another door . I hope Blaze is right about God protecting Theo from Lucier's wrath.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
    Thanks so much, Muffins. I wish I could say it would be smooth sailing from here on, but there is still Luke to deal with. :)
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Blaze seems to think a good deal of Theo and understands what the priest is talking about - love and God.

I think the meeting went well in the end.

another great chapter, Phyllis.

Margaret

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
    Thank you so much, Margaret. :)
Comment from michaelcahill
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The lull before the storm is definitely at play here. I can almost see the clouds of things to come on the horizon. I have the feeling there won't be too many nice pleasant breaks for awhile. Another smooth chapter with great dialogue. mikey

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Mikey. Nothing terrible will happen till close to the end, and it will be a HUGE problem. She'll need the help of all her friends. Next, she'll hear from Franny. :)
Comment from emrpoems
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A very serious chapter abut blaze feels encouraged now and is willing to take counsel from Father Murphy. a great step toward her return to God's way

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks so much, Erica. It's a start. She's promised not to do harm. Can she keep that promise? :)
Comment from Curly Girly
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Father Murphy spoke about love and the scripture they had read. The most important person to her now, is her baby. She says she loves Theo too. And she has promised not to hurt anyone. Let's hope she can change.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
    Thanks a million for the sixer, Nicole. I know she'll end up happy with Theo and the baby, but Luke is going to interfere, and it won't be pretty. But not for a while.

    Do you have a photo of the second car you painted? On FAR perhaps? I showed my hubby and he was quite impressed. Too bad you live so far away. I'd gladly pay to have my own old car painted.
reply by Curly Girly on 15-Mar-2015
    I just got it back from being clear-coated today. I can't do photos yet because it's raining.
reply by Curly Girly on 15-Mar-2015
    I just got it back from being clear-coated today. I can't do photos yet because it's raining.
Comment from seaglass
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Well, that went better than expected. Now on to Rome for romance and celebration...until Luke gets it figured out. I'm sure a snag has to come somewhere.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    Thanks, Carolyn. You're right. Luke will find out, and when he does, she'll need the help of her friends. :)

    I miss reading about Becca. Hope she and Thad are happy, and I especially hope she doesn't let him push her around as men of the day did to wives. You should write a sequel! About her changing their thinking and fighting with Thad all the while.
reply by seaglass on 16-Mar-2015
    Thinking about taking her through women's suffrage...thanks for your faithfulness in following
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015
    That would terrific! Do it! :)