Let's Talk Dirty!
Viewing comments for Chapter 55 "Show Time!"The story about three women who need to make money
18 total reviews
Comment from wordsfromsue
Priceless chapter! Karen's quite an actress when she wants to be, and good with the quick witted thinking. I think I'd really like her, if she were real. :-)
Okay, moving on to more chapters. It's nice to not have much to do today except read a good story!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Priceless chapter! Karen's quite an actress when she wants to be, and good with the quick witted thinking. I think I'd really like her, if she were real. :-)
Okay, moving on to more chapters. It's nice to not have much to do today except read a good story!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Yes, I like Karen too. She's a combination of people I know, one of whom had her husband walk out on her after saying some horrible things she could never forget. She met her toy boy boyfriend of many years when she came to my birthday party, and has never looked back. That's how I know how hurt Karen will be feeling because my friend thought her marriage was okay when it happened too. Alexis xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
Mark seems a little thick. Does he really think she's OK with selling the house? Somehow I don't think he's going to come out on top this time.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Mark seems a little thick. Does he really think she's OK with selling the house? Somehow I don't think he's going to come out on top this time.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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I'm hoping that he believes Karen needs her share of the proceeds of the house sale to start a fancy restaurant in the city centre. Fingers crossed he falls for it! Alexis x
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear BC - Karen sure knows how to pull a bluff. Great writing, really strong dialogue that carries this post smoothly. Life like, and part of the bigger picture it works well with these characters and their past.
Great job overall.
Thanks for sharing,
wc
xxx
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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Dear BC - Karen sure knows how to pull a bluff. Great writing, really strong dialogue that carries this post smoothly. Life like, and part of the bigger picture it works well with these characters and their past.
Great job overall.
Thanks for sharing,
wc
xxx
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015
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And thank you for following, wc. Just back from France after a horrible experience, so just catching up and trying to get my head straight. I hope you're getting stronger every day. Alexis xxx
Comment from Glasstruth
Great dialogue. With Karen you never know what she'll say next. I think she's still hurt by things he said a long time ago, and still cares enough for him to lie. Now, is that love, or what? Your chapters are moving along quite rapidly. I think it's the dialogue that makes it fot such an enjoyable read. Les
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Great dialogue. With Karen you never know what she'll say next. I think she's still hurt by things he said a long time ago, and still cares enough for him to lie. Now, is that love, or what? Your chapters are moving along quite rapidly. I think it's the dialogue that makes it fot such an enjoyable read. Les
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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You may have hit the nail on the head, although the ending may be completely different to what I have now. Yes, Karen sometimes shoots her mouth off, with amusing results! Alexis x
Comment from Spitfire
I'm confused as to why Jenny is in this chapter. Aside from that I love how Karen tried to sabotage the sale. The thirty degrees would do it for me. Boy, the lies keep piling up.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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I'm confused as to why Jenny is in this chapter. Aside from that I love how Karen tried to sabotage the sale. The thirty degrees would do it for me. Boy, the lies keep piling up.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Well spotted! You were the only one to notice (cringe!) Thank you. Alexis x
Comment from MelB
Wow, that was a close call with the elderly couple. That plan almost backfired on her. I can sure understand her wanting to hang on to the house though and also, not wanting to tell her ex about her jobs. Look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Wow, that was a close call with the elderly couple. That plan almost backfired on her. I can sure understand her wanting to hang on to the house though and also, not wanting to tell her ex about her jobs. Look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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I couldn't resist it. All that planning to put buyers off, and they loved everything except the size! Alexis x
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That was clever and she lucked out that it was too big a house!
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
The viewing went badly, but Karen's pleased - even wanting to hug Mr Stewart. I like her tactics to put viewers off, altho it didn't work with them.
I don't blame her lying to Mark - afterall, she doesn't want to move right now.
Margaret
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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The viewing went badly, but Karen's pleased - even wanting to hug Mr Stewart. I like her tactics to put viewers off, altho it didn't work with them.
I don't blame her lying to Mark - afterall, she doesn't want to move right now.
Margaret
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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She was lucky this time! Thank you Margaret. Alexis x
Comment from alf collier
Hi Alexis. This was another great read. I just loved the way she set the place up and then found they were looking for something smaller. Exactly what agents do, for whatever reason. Loved the read, alf
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Hi Alexis. This was another great read. I just loved the way she set the place up and then found they were looking for something smaller. Exactly what agents do, for whatever reason. Loved the read, alf
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I've known a few of those types of agents too! Alexis x
Comment from adewpearl
great description of setting, and you get into Karen's mindset well
I love the way she is sabotaging the house
excellent dialogue with Mark that conveys their differences and strong emotions well
Brooke
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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great description of setting, and you get into Karen's mindset well
I love the way she is sabotaging the house
excellent dialogue with Mark that conveys their differences and strong emotions well
Brooke
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Thank you, Brooke. My poor old muse has gone into hiding here in France, so I can't wait to get home tonight! Alexis x
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very clever! She turned it around beautifully... or rather YOU did. Terrific chapter, and if I had a six, I'd slap it down hard on this one. :)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Very clever! She turned it around beautifully... or rather YOU did. Terrific chapter, and if I had a six, I'd slap it down hard on this one. :)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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It's the thought that counts, Phyllis. Thank you! Now at the airport for the first of two flights back to Scotland. Phew!
