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The Crook in the White House

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Comment from Delahay
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I don't know anything about Bibi but if he is able to help bring peace to a troubled area then I wish him a long and prosperous life. Your eloquent poem says so much in so few words.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
    Thank you so much...he is a wise and courageous man. Blessings, Barbara
Comment from Jean Lutz
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"For a time such as this...". That may be the most important message delivered to the joint house in years. Best wishes with your entry. Does your selected artwork suggest the fig tree blossoming?

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015
    I don't know. I thought about that, but it is a peaceful pic and that is what I wanted to evoke. Thank you Jean. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from rspoet
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Peaceful and politics rarely go together, but they merge beautifully in this Positive 5-7-5
political poem. It's nice to see the words peace and calm, our world would be so much better if they were spoken more often. Your match of photograph and poem say it all. Thank you.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015
    Thank you so much rspoet. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from dmt1967
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This is a very good poem. I liked the picture of a park and the last line of the poem which referred to a politician coming to town. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015
    Thank you dmt. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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It is obvious from your poem and comment afterwards that you are an admirer of the Prime Minister. How wonderful for you to have political personality that can live up to your expectations. So many of them end up falling from our personal graces. I love the artwork!

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015
    Thank you so muchdavisr. Blessings. Barbara
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 12-Mar-2015
    You're welcome,
    Rhonda
Comment from patcelaw
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I like the message here. if only we had a president that was even half the man that Bibi is I could be so proud of our national leader, but right now I have no pride in the holder of the office. I respect the office, just not the holder of the office right now. Patricia

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015
    Amen to that patcelaw. Thank you so very much. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

Now this is a very rare thing indeed.
Joy and excitement at the thought of a visiting politician. Make a pleasant changes.

Different
GMG

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015
    Thank you so much GMG. Happy you liked it. Blessings. barbara
Comment from adewpearl
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Thank you for the author notes as I didn't know who you meant when you said Bibi came to town
good alliteration in few fast and good pairing in smiled and skipped
you convey well the speaker's enthusiasm and happiness
Brooke

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015
    You're welcome and thank you Brooke. Blessings. Barbara
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Illinois Democrat Jan Schakowsky, an eight-term Jewish veteran of Congress and member of the party's House leadership, was quoted as having said that the most positive measure would be for Israeli voters to oust Netanyahu. Her anger was directed at Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu following his recent speech to a joint meeting of Congress warning against a deal with Iran being negotiated by the Obama administration and six other governments.

Her harsh reaction to Netanyahu's speech may further complicate her relations with AIPAC. "I've been asked to make a choice between Boehner and Bibi, and Barack Obama, and I support Barack Obama," she said.

You just gotta love those whacky democratic liberal ultra conservatives.

Good stuff, and good luck to you in the contest. :)

~Dean








 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015
    Thank you Dean. You just gotta love those whacky democratic liberal ultra conservatives. Nope. ;) Blessings. Barbara
reply by Dean Kuch on 13-Mar-2015
    Hah, you're very welcome, Barbara. I don't care for 'em at all. :)
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This political 5-7-5 has the right form and syllable count according to contest rules. I regret to say that I am too uninformed or sleepy to know who Bibi is at this moment. Good luck to you, though. Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015
    Thank you very much. Blessings.