Let's Talk Dirty!
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "The Truth Will Out"The story about three women who need to make money
19 total reviews
Comment from wordsfromsue
Oh my gosh, seriously awesome chapter!! They just don't make guys like George very often!!
And the twist of him being able to prank her just a tiny bit with the call he'd answered, THAT was seriously cool.
It has to be a billion pounds of weight off Jenny's shoulders!
I"ll read through again for spag, but nothing jumped out at me on first read.
This really was a top chapter. It would certainly capture a new reader's interest to find out what else happened in this crazy story!
You have such a gift for story telling.
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Completely fine, no changes! Still marveling over Super George!!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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Oh my gosh, seriously awesome chapter!! They just don't make guys like George very often!!
And the twist of him being able to prank her just a tiny bit with the call he'd answered, THAT was seriously cool.
It has to be a billion pounds of weight off Jenny's shoulders!
I"ll read through again for spag, but nothing jumped out at me on first read.
This really was a top chapter. It would certainly capture a new reader's interest to find out what else happened in this crazy story!
You have such a gift for story telling.
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Completely fine, no changes! Still marveling over Super George!!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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What a wonderful surprise to wake up to, Sue! Your encouragement was just what I needed today because I've spent the last two days editing my first two books to resubmit them on Amazon, and I felt like the worlds worse writer by the time I went to bed last night! Alexis xxx
Comment from Glasstruth
A very delightful and laid back reaction. Wasn't surprised that George took it so well. Some guys will be like him, others, the jealous type will throw a fit. The dialogue had a bit of tension in Jenny's approach which kept me wondering will it turn out the way I think it will, and it did. I agree with George, "So?" Wonderfully penned. Les
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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A very delightful and laid back reaction. Wasn't surprised that George took it so well. Some guys will be like him, others, the jealous type will throw a fit. The dialogue had a bit of tension in Jenny's approach which kept me wondering will it turn out the way I think it will, and it did. I agree with George, "So?" Wonderfully penned. Les
Comment Written 14-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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He's a good guy, George. He reminds me of my late husband. I think all three women are so convinced that what they're doing will be frowned on, they've become paranoid! Alexis x
Comment from Seagazer
Outstanding! I so enjoy the way you write. I always find myself quickly with nose to the monitor and you always offer a surprise! Keep up the excellent work! Be well. Jan
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Outstanding! I so enjoy the way you write. I always find myself quickly with nose to the monitor and you always offer a surprise! Keep up the excellent work! Be well. Jan
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Thank you so much for this wonderfully encouraging review. Alexis x
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Alexis. I love George! Does that make me gay? LOL. That is precisely how I would have reacted if she had told me the same thing. This is my favorite story of all time mate. You are a star and I am a huge fan without a six to give, sorry. Cheers Fez (How's France?)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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G'day Alexis. I love George! Does that make me gay? LOL. That is precisely how I would have reacted if she had told me the same thing. This is my favorite story of all time mate. You are a star and I am a huge fan without a six to give, sorry. Cheers Fez (How's France?)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015
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Yes, he's a cool dude, and just what Jenny needs to make her trust men again! Thank you, Fez, I love your reviews. Now at the airport waiting for my first of two flights to get home Alexis x
Comment from Curly Girly
That was an enjoyable chapter to read. So the vet was not surprised. Vets work with animals, they know about sex! He gets the added bonus of being able to see her while she talks on the phone.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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That was an enjoyable chapter to read. So the vet was not surprised. Vets work with animals, they know about sex! He gets the added bonus of being able to see her while she talks on the phone.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2015
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I love George! I've based his character on a doctor in one of the UK soaps called 'Holby City,' and that is all I can see and hear when writing about him. Alexis x
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Alexis - Jenny seems to have found a guy who understands life and its complexities. George is laid back, and fun - I loved the ending:)
Well penned, smooth read and great post for your continuing plot.
Thanks for sharing,
WC
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Dear Alexis - Jenny seems to have found a guy who understands life and its complexities. George is laid back, and fun - I loved the ending:)
Well penned, smooth read and great post for your continuing plot.
Thanks for sharing,
WC
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Just wish he was mine, wc! Lovely to get your review and see you getting stronger with every day. Keep it up, girl. You are so loved! Alexis xxx
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I like George and his laid-back
attitude, then him asking how long
he had to talk to get that bill paid
up - lovely...
so typical of him[,](;) it made her - semi-colan
'So, now that we've got that out of the way...' he asked - surely not ASKED since it's not a question - perhaps remarked
Great chapter, Alexis.
Margaret
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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I like George and his laid-back
attitude, then him asking how long
he had to talk to get that bill paid
up - lovely...
so typical of him[,](;) it made her - semi-colan
'So, now that we've got that out of the way...' he asked - surely not ASKED since it's not a question - perhaps remarked
Great chapter, Alexis.
Margaret
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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I based George on a Jewish doctor on 'Holby City,' who's laid back attitude and kindness is exemplary in that particular soap. It makes it hard to make him a bad guy!
Alexis x
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well it seems that Jenny has found an understanding stand up guy who likes the fact his lady love can talk dirty! LOL
I love the solution he had in the end. That was pretty funny. LOL good Job Alexis. Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Well it seems that Jenny has found an understanding stand up guy who likes the fact his lady love can talk dirty! LOL
I love the solution he had in the end. That was pretty funny. LOL good Job Alexis. Nancy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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I like George. He is everything I would wish for myself, and what my husband was like. Missing him so much just now!
Alexis xxx
Comment from adewpearl
It's good to have you posting again :-)
a great conversation - I love George's reaction to her revelation and his revelation that he has known all along that something was up and she wasn't telling him the truth that first time
I love his sense of humor in his final lines of the conversation LOL
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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It's good to have you posting again :-)
a great conversation - I love George's reaction to her revelation and his revelation that he has known all along that something was up and she wasn't telling him the truth that first time
I love his sense of humor in his final lines of the conversation LOL
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this, Brooke. My days in France have been the opposite to what I expected, and very depressing. I can't wait to get back to Scotland on Sunday night. At least I will see my granddaughter, a sight for sore and disillusioned eyes!
Alexis x
Comment from c_lucas
A very understanding boy friend. A cartoon sticks in my mind of the guy visualizing he talking to a beautiful woman when she is actually middle aged with curlers in her hair. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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A very understanding boy friend. A cartoon sticks in my mind of the guy visualizing he talking to a beautiful woman when she is actually middle aged with curlers in her hair. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Thank you, Charlie. I love it when you stop by.
Alexis x
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You're welcome, Alexis. Charlie
