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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "He Leads Me"poems inspired by Psalm 23
35 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Excellent wording. I find no fault with God's word for it is truth. Thank you for sharing. It lifts up our Lord. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Excellent wording. I find no fault with God's word for it is truth. Thank you for sharing. It lifts up our Lord. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the wonderful review and your insightful comments. Debi
Comment from artisart4u
Beautiful and awesome. The whole Italian Sonnet is nice and especially the last line
"...feels my love within."
Your Italian Sonnet has good rhyming and it appears that you did what was required.
Good luck with it.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Beautiful and awesome. The whole Italian Sonnet is nice and especially the last line
"...feels my love within."
Your Italian Sonnet has good rhyming and it appears that you did what was required.
Good luck with it.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thank you once again for the shiny six stars! Thank you for your insightful remarks and especially the comments about the writing. I appreciate the encouragement.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poet friend. My first time reading your work. I enjoyed the powerful message of Hope and Rescue from the One and Only, the One who is there for us at all times. Just call on Him.
A great witness of the Word!
I have posted one simply titled, "Just Let Go." It is along the same lines, I would love for you to take a peek.
I enjoyed this and hope you enjoy the stars!
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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Hello poet friend. My first time reading your work. I enjoyed the powerful message of Hope and Rescue from the One and Only, the One who is there for us at all times. Just call on Him.
A great witness of the Word!
I have posted one simply titled, "Just Let Go." It is along the same lines, I would love for you to take a peek.
I enjoyed this and hope you enjoy the stars!
Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the wonderful six stars and the gracious comments. Thank you for sharing your insights as well. I appreciate the encouragement.
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My great pleasure, Loyd
Comment from Jacob Collins
An excellent Italian Sonnet depicting the story of Peter. I thought that your writing flowed well in this piece and I liked the rhyme you introduced. I couldn't find any errors. An excellent piece...Jacob
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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An excellent Italian Sonnet depicting the story of Peter. I thought that your writing flowed well in this piece and I liked the rhyme you introduced. I couldn't find any errors. An excellent piece...Jacob
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the great review, Jacob. I appreciate your encouraging comments. Thank you! Debi
Comment from flamingstar
What a beautiful sonnet. I have yet to try this variation. It read very smoothly until I got to the word "contrite" which threw the rhythm with its accent on the second syllable. I think "humbled" would work better there.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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What a beautiful sonnet. I have yet to try this variation. It read very smoothly until I got to the word "contrite" which threw the rhythm with its accent on the second syllable. I think "humbled" would work better there.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2015
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Hi Flamingstar,
I love learning new things and so thank you for pointing out the work "contrite". I had no idea that some people stress the second syllable and some the first. Yep, you sent me to the dictionary to confirm since I stress the first syllable and it says both are acceptable. Looks like this is one of those works to put on the list to NOT use in metered poetry since it will always be wrong for someone.
Thank you for the suggested replacement. I will consider it and also look at just re-writing the last line entirely.
I appreciate you taking the time to read and offer suggestions to improve my writing.
God bless. Debi
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I meant "word" not works in the reply
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Good point. There are so many words like that in our language!
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed this beautiful Italian Sonnet, the wonderful
Spiritual message it conveys.
Strong rhyme and meter for smooth flow and
vivid images.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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I enjoyed this beautiful Italian Sonnet, the wonderful
Spiritual message it conveys.
Strong rhyme and meter for smooth flow and
vivid images.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thank you for the beautiful review. I appreciate your comments about the message and about the writing. Thank you for the encouragement. Debi
Comment from Spitfire
One of the better spiritual poems I've read on the site. Great use of enjambment for easy flow. I like the specific reference to two events in the Bible. Lovely closing lines.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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One of the better spiritual poems I've read on the site. Great use of enjambment for easy flow. I like the specific reference to two events in the Bible. Lovely closing lines.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Thank you again for the six stars! And such nice comments too. I am grateful for the support and the encouragement.
Debi
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written and presented work of the love our Lord has for Hid children. I am blessed.
"Oh, ye of little faith don't doubt what's right.
I hope you know, you're precious in my sight.
It is such a blessing to know that he says we are precious in his sight. Patricia
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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This is a beautifully written and presented work of the love our Lord has for Hid children. I am blessed.
"Oh, ye of little faith don't doubt what's right.
I hope you know, you're precious in my sight.
It is such a blessing to know that he says we are precious in his sight. Patricia
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2015
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Hi Patricia,
I am so sorry for the delayed response, but I want you to know I truly appreciate the six stars! Thank you also for the insightful remarks and the kind comments about the writing. I appreciate the encouragement.
Debi
Comment from Glasstruth
For an Italian Sonnet this has excellent meter and a smoothness as if made of silk. Spiritual and very up lifting. Well penned. Les
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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For an Italian Sonnet this has excellent meter and a smoothness as if made of silk. Spiritual and very up lifting. Well penned. Les
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Wow such nice comments, Les. I am so pleased that you enjoyed this verse. I appreciate the encouraging comments about the writing. Thank you. Debi
Comment from Thamp
Nice, very nice. I always appreciate a well written spiritual poem. We need to be reminded as often as possible. Thanks for sharing the Italian sonnet difference - I was looking for the final two lines until I read your notes. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Nice, very nice. I always appreciate a well written spiritual poem. We need to be reminded as often as possible. Thanks for sharing the Italian sonnet difference - I was looking for the final two lines until I read your notes. Have a great day.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. I do find the Italian sonnet most challenging so I keep working at it so I appreciate the encouragement.
