Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

Hi sweetie, if you have nothing in life and all you have is love....you have the greatest gift of all...and when you know it is true...when you feel it deep down in your soul...you want to scream it from the highest mountain...nothing is out of reach...it's the golden crown that truly makes a man a king...a woman a queen... yes love is truly a many splendored thing...just my feelings...a wonderful movie...and a wonderful poem...love this song...love you Michael...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015

Hello God send...-smile- love... the risk takers last breath gambles win with luck therein....is hope. Thank you beautiful Linda....love bunch Michael

reply by l.raven on 08-Mar-2015

love you bunch too...and you are so welcome sweet boy...talk to ya later...love you...Linda xxoo

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Hi Michael. Don't yell at me, okay? Promise? I Iike this one. I remember seeing this movie as a young lassie and thinking, wow...can't wait to fall in love and be splendorized. Still waiting lol I liked "freedom is Spring seen in Winters ending". You'll have me humming and singing that song all night.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015

did I yell at you...? or did I raise my voice in delivered concern...you , young Lady...have a way of saying things that just spin a head deliberate. now I must say I am shocked at your behavior as of late. I believe we shared a locker at one time...best friends was in our vocab...I do not EVER remember ignoring you...nor giving suggestion to its appropriate application EVER being...My word....you are dirty...surely ashamed of yourself....need I say more...I thought not...now gimmie a bear squeeze....love-

reply by IndianaIrish on 08-Mar-2015

We're not friends anymore? Gosh golly gee, I thought we still shared that locker! Just our classes never let us show up at the same time very often. You didn't forget the locker combination did you? If yes, you know where to find me :-)

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Hi Michael. Lovely poem, love is a beautiful thing, doesn't matter where is comes from, or to where it goes. Love, just is. You write of it beautifully in this poem, my friend. Have you heard how Pili is? I had a message ages ago that she was doing well, but she hasn't posted anything. Have you heard from her? Take care my friend, love always. Sandy. xxx

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015

Hi Sandy...-smile- thank you sweetheart....she sent me a "smile"....I asked if there were something I could do....I'm worried.I don't think she's out of the hospital yet....love you Michael

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Michael: love songs and poetry can only be written by a man who is in the process of or already has lost his heart to someone. YOU DOG! What you been up to?? Your words are prettier and the music that which has touched our hearts for years you have begun to play. I am happy for you. Behave yourself, now. Thunder

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015

love songs of poetry can be recorded by anyone whose given themselves over to love. It is dangerous, you will never feel more vulnerable in life...or more alive. love Michael

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

This is a lengthy poem with a nice photo and video. A free verse mainly about a new born, and the couple that got a Godchild. A lot of alliteration and an excellent poem.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015

hm...you're not much for romantic black and whites I see....well Sis...its not something I do on regular basis either...but every once in a while....I see her...-wink- love Michael

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Beautiful and unique. This is a wonderful timely message that is rich in emotion without the sappy romance. Good poem. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015

well thank you sir....pleased you enjoyed...love Bug-

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 09-Mar-2015

I'm a ma'am, but you are welcome. My name is Rhonda.

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015

I'm terribly sorry...as you can see...please forgive me Rhonda...-smile-

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 09-Mar-2015

That's okay, the davsr is Rhonda Davis.

reply by the author on 09-Mar-2015

gotcha...-wink-

Comment from jlsavell

Exceptional

Hi again Michael,

Now you must think I am haunting you with these reviews. Perhaps, perhaps.

I love this movie but detest the song. Memories of yesteryear. Drive in movies. Mom and her beau in front seat telling me to go swing by the concession stand.

Your poem is romantic and nostalgic. Should ever a man feel such depth for a woman, then, indeed, it is a splendored thing.

I think my last stanza is my favorite. Enveloping the of whole work in a sweeping package of adulation and passion. Opening line, closing statement...repetition spells force or importance.

Poetry captures life in all its province and if done well releases it with gusto for all it has to offer. BRAVO.

HOPE you are doing well.How is Emmy?

A good night hug across the stars and much more. Okay enough said. JIMI

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2015

Hello jimi...-smile- I thank you sweet woman. no, I don't think that at all...I believe we are friends....at least I hope so...-smile- Emmy...is fine...she getting white in the face....but my hairs turning gold so....we look remarkably alike....they say the longer you live with someone , the more you look like them...don't they say that...lol...ah thank you...love Bug-

reply by jlsavell on 18-Mar-2015

Hey good morning.

Thanks for the reply. Most times I am late getting to replies because I am so busy. I thought you were ignoring me deliberately. You know people do that when they don't like what you have to say. They thank everyone else and just rudely and bkatantly skip you. But for you I will give slack because I know you are busy.

Well to say the least I miss you and Emmy, but I am doing very well. I will be up in the Woodlands next week, would love to have dinner but of course that is up to you.

I see you and L.Raven are working together on poems. Best of fortune to both of you. Oh well ypu both are very good just completely different. I couldn't fit your work into my work if I sold my soul to the devil. It wouldn't work.. remember we tried before. Lol.. It is not an insult to you or to anyone else. Can you imagine me asking Pablo Nerudo if I can insert my words into his... he would laugh me off the page. Why, because his work is very much like yours, totally signature and anyone with even half a brain who has read him knows his work is special and unique known only to him.
But that is me and how I see it.

You take care my dear sweet friend. I love you in many ways.