Comment from Lucille Bellucci

Excellent

Very clever and amusing. I'll be singing the lyrics all day, probably to someone else who needs to lighten up. Good image, too. Keeping writing them and perhaps make up a book of them. Luck!

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015

Thanks for the review. I don't know if it will win as it is not on the naughty side, which many feel limericks should be.

reply by Lucille Bellucci on 15-Mar-2015

There are all kinds of limericks, as long as they are funny and are in easy-reading meter.

Comment from pennedup

Excellent

LOL I always loved these crazy little limericks, they are so much fun to write and are limitless in subject matter. I remember some that are well...not so appropriate!! if you get my drift! ( :
This is cute, enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thanks for the review, limericks do not have to be shady to be funny.

reply by pennedup on 06-Mar-2015

I agree with you whole heartedly.

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Author: hmmmm, sometimes people confuse bravery for stupidity! LOL A good limerick; made me chuckle and celebrate my stopping to think things through before leaping! livelylinda

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Linda thanks for the review. I never want you to leap before you think and look.

Comment from happykat4

Excellent

Poor Dave...so very brave but not too bright, or careful. The rhyme pattern is great, AABBA. The rhythm of the poem was very good. It was humorous and fun. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thanks for the review, not bright at all.

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I thouroughly enjoy reading limericks, which I guess makes these one of my favorite contests.

You did not dissapoint with yours. Best of luck. John

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thanks John for the review.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Sorely missed by the pretty maiden. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thanks for the review.

reply by c_lucas on 06-Mar-2015

You're welcome,

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Well, not brave but over-reliant on luck which is suggested by "could fall" instead of "would fall", Dave a dude who thought he'd always land on his feet. Not this time. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thanks for the review. Not this time indeed.

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

I love limericks and this was fun to read. By way of critique, I would suggest you change 'he could fall' to 'he did fall' since the poor dude is dead. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thanks for the review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

This is cute. A fun take on the prompt, however, not so much for poor Dave!

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thanks for the review.

Comment from jim lawler

Excellent

This is quite funny, I got a good laugh out of it. Dave was good at falling off cliffs but only one he could fall from! You did a fine job with your rhyming and it has a nice smooth flow. I like it! Good luck and god bless. Jimmy

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thanks for the review and the good luck wishes.