Chasing of the Wind.
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "A Voyage into the uncharted waters."Conflict between the Human Needs and the Divinity
2 total reviews
Comment from marijmd
An interesting glimpse into what it must feel like to have your future mapped out for you by others and your own free will and desires taking a back seat to the opinion of the masses.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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An interesting glimpse into what it must feel like to have your future mapped out for you by others and your own free will and desires taking a back seat to the opinion of the masses.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the excellent rating and your comment. I sent you an e-mail also. Best regards.
Comment from thomdble
This was a really tough read due to misspellings, miss-pronouncements. It felt very choppy and not clearly thought out. There could be a story here but you will have to take the time to reread the script and correct the misdeeds that not only slowed the story line but confused me (the reader). Go back over it and smooth out the many typos. You are only cheating yourself with this hap-hazard effort.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015
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This was a really tough read due to misspellings, miss-pronouncements. It felt very choppy and not clearly thought out. There could be a story here but you will have to take the time to reread the script and correct the misdeeds that not only slowed the story line but confused me (the reader). Go back over it and smooth out the many typos. You are only cheating yourself with this hap-hazard effort.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015
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four before this I have a feeling that problem I had uploading this chapter has something to do with bad spellings. I had checked every line in word with spell check and also with oxford dictionary but when I uploaded the chapter several redlines showed up and I went through corrections with spell check of the website. I am going to revisit the chapter to see what happened. the first chapter that got messed up. I posted 4 before this one but did not have any negative comment on this account. Also while writing this, my cursor traveled to another line and words typed went into another already typed word making it a misspelled word. Thanks for alerting me. All other chapters got excellent ratings.
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that will definitely help, good going
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I am still not finding misspellings and mis-pronouncements. May I ask you to point few? Thanks.
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I will get back at you this week end thomdble
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OK. Looking forward to hear from you. Thanks.
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that will definitely help, good going
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I will get back at you this week end thomdble
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Looking forward to your assistance. Thanks.
