Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Nicely done/ I like the rhyme and rhythm here. The different aspects of poetry are well described and the metaphoric examples are well chosen. Great job!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the poem. I feel pretty much the same about writing. It us very emotional . I am addicted to it. I also enjoy reading other's work. I could be addicted to so much worse. Great work.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

hi mikey

I hope this day finds you well
your ending line states it well
I think we can all agree
your words are lovely soft and quiet
the voice has an appealing quality

thank you for sharing your talent
may you continue to write
good luck with the contest
ann marie

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

Comment from sgalletti

Excellent

Hi Michael! Too bad there are only two of you in the booth. Writing makes me happy as well, so I could really relate to your delightful words. And, my favorite parts of writing are the use of alliteration and enjambment, which you use brilliantly in this poem. Excellent quatrains with great, creative end rhymes. One of the best poems I've seen you write. Good luck! Sue

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

Comment from jim lawler

Excellent

I nice phrase with no errors or repitition. Your choice of words is good and the content interesting I like it and will check out the rest of the poems before I vote. God bless! Jimmy

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Me too Mikey! Poetry makes me happy but It has to have all those ingredients that you mentioned in your above poem. This is so well done and it would get my vote so far! Writing poetry is what makes me happy. Good poetry is hard to find. Well done! Good Luck! Nancy

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Perfect and I agree with you.
Writing keeps me sane...I think.
The piece is perfectly done in meter and flow.
Excellent entry, dear friend

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid use of abab rhyming
I like all the specific references to writing strategies/devices
good alliteration in phrases like blaze can burn and stalks your soul
good consonance in puzzle/sappy
you respond to the prompt well - writing, definitely not a person, pet or place :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

Yes, writing can be a joyful experience. Most people that write every day find a joy in it. This was a well written poetic voice. It flows smoothly down the page and is written in a good format as well. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Good use of abab rhyming scheme
nice bits of alliteration
Good use of enjambment
you have written a poem that reflects the thoughts of all FS members
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015