Comment from elgone

Excellent

I guess Blaze could have had an experience inside a church previously but I don't recall one from this story. Maybe you could add in something in revisions. It's just I wondered when I read it. Also is she going to have to spray something on her hands in case she touches anything?

Blaze looked toward the window and thought it over, muttering to herself. "Guess I should practice going into a church again, since Theo will want to tour the Vatican." She nodded. "Okay, if you'll arrange it and go with me."

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 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

Thanks, Elgon. Blaze went to Tara's wedding at the church, wearing a disguise. Verrrrry early in the book.. easy to forget. :)

Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

Have an absolutely wonderful time with your daughter. Your stories will be missed but family is so much more important. So glad Blaze is going to see Father Murphy. Maybe he can save another demon.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

Thanks so much, Shirley. :)

Comment from Annette Gulliver

Excellent

Hi Phyllis - Let's hope that all works out well for Blaze in her plan to track down Sebastion in Rome. Tara is worried about her, but as you say , Theo is a nice guy and will stick by Blaze and the baby. Good that Franny is waiting in the wings.
I do hope you have an enjoyable time with your daughter when she comes to visit. Time with our kids is so precious.

all the best
Annette

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

Thank you so much, Annette. Her plane lands in two hours. Can't wait to see her. As for "finding" Sebastian Blake, he can't be "found" since Blaze changed his appearance with her special camera and now he looks like a short, fat, balding clown and is currently back in the mental hospital from which she and Lorna rescued him. He crossed her, and NO ONE crosses a demon without paying. But no one knows he's the same man. The news reported that he disappeared rather than face disgrace and jail time for his criminal acts, not just against his opponent but during his time as a senator. If she changes him back, he's just going to go to jail. He'll never have a chance to run away. But Luke thinks that he has, and that's all that matters for Blaze's scheme to work. :)

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Bloody excellent!!! What can I say, but you managed to put this down, credibly, and, yes, it was a thriller! Franny didn't pick up on the lie, do you think it will be right to let Theo believe it is his, when it isn't? But at the same time, I want him to believe it's his. You do make my life complicated, Phyllis! Loved this one, and it would have had another 6 had I got one. :) Sandra.

Now, re: your author's notes. In normal events, I would be tearing my hair out, wondering if I would be able to survive without my daily fix. But, I concede, I know what it's like to only see our kids twice a year. (That's why I returned home from Spain.) So enjoy every second you have with her, my friend. I am really, truly happy for you. :) Sandra xsx

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 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

Thanks, Sandra. Theo KNOWS the baby isn't his. He never had sex with Blaze! It was his idea to let the world think it's his baby, for the sake of the child, whose real father is a well-known criminal. It would only be a problem for future medical reasons, and he has no inheritable diseases (tho I should mention his good health at some point... probably an edit on that chapter where he proposes).

I'm surprised you're always out of sixes by Tuesday! LOL! I usually have one or two left on Friday or even Saturday. You need to be less generous... or convince Tom to double our share. :)

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 03-Mar-2015

Of course I knew that, idiot that I am. I meant would it be alright that Tara thought it was Theo's. Because that was a lie. And Franny must know the truth already??

reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

Yes, Franny knows bec she can read their minds, remember? They can "talk" to Franny without moving their mouths. :)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Frankly, my dear, I don't give..." How often do we hide from the realities of today by daydreaming about tomorrow. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a interesting read.

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 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

>>How often do we hide from the realities of today by daydreaming about tomorrow. <<

Verrrry good observation, Charlie. Thanks so much for reading. :)

reply by c_lucas on 03-Mar-2015

You're welcome, Phyllis. Charlie