Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Seems like all is going well for Blaze. Tara is helping and now she has Franny on her side. i have a strange feeling she will be joining Tara on earth completely in a short time

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2015

Thanks, Erica. It won't be such a short time, for there is Lucifer to deal with. She can't fool him forever. :)

Comment from rmj09

Excellent

The focus is Blaze's upcoming marriage and baby. The storyline development Blaze tells Tara about Theo asking her to marry him. She had talked Luke into letting her marry Theo. So they can go to the Vatican and look for Blake. Franny shows and tells Blaze to do what Tara tells her to do. Tara sets up an appointment with Father Murphy.
The dialogue is clear and gives a good view of the characters. The narrative shows action Franny popping in.
Keep on writing.

Phyllis, enjoy your visit with your daughter. *o* Rita

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thank you very much, Rita. :)

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Don't worry. We'll be here when you get back. Have a great visit, and of course we will understand. Great chapter, my friend. Take care~Debbie

 Comment Written 06-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2015

Thanks so much, Debbie. I'll have some time for a day while my kid's in Chicago visiting a friend overnight. :)

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

I hope that Luke has agents in reserve or soon hell will just be one leaderless bureaucracy. like earth lol. Luke is bound to find out about the pregnancy. I wonder how he will deal with it and how Blaze will explain it away. Have a great visit with your daughter!

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

one leaderless bureaucracy. like earth

LOL! Good point! Thanks a bunch, Ed.

My kid is at the mall with Amanda now so I have some time on FS. She talks as much, if not more, than my hubby and I. Amanda is outnumbered. LOL! Amanda is a quiet sort and LISTENS well, which is a good trait to have. Be careful what you say around THAT one. She doesn't forget anything either. :)

reply by ravenblack on 05-Mar-2015

That sounds like my daughter. My wife and I can be whispering in our bedroom, and Natalie will here exactly what we said. And yes, she can't ever remember to put anything away but certain events, usually when she did not get what she wanted, she remembers crystal clear.

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

That's how we women are wired. Always collecting things to use against you guys. :)

Comment from Selina Stambi

Exceptional

Love the concluding line. As long as Theo doesn't say, "Frankly my dear ..."!

Enjoyed the script-like dialogue. It moved the action on smoothly and quickly.

Well done, Phyllis, my dear!

Love,

Sonali

p.s. Amanda has been quite for a while. How's she doing?

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

Thanks a million for the six stars, Sonali. Much appreciated! :)

Amanda is busy with learning to drive, studying to prepare for college in the fall, cooking (she insists!) and just enjoying the real world. She has written a few poems but hasn't posted for some reason. Write and ask her. Maybe she'll post one. :)

Right now, Amanda is at the mall with my daughter. I can't go malling anymore without using my wheelchair and I didn't want to slow them down. Anyway, I think it's good for Amanda to get away from me for a while. I must drive her nuts with all my yakking. Of course, Katy is a talker too, but I'm sure they'll have fun. Girls of ALL ages love shopping! :)

reply by Selina Stambi on 05-Mar-2015

Good to know she's well and happy. Tell her I said hello and am thinking of her.

I'm a strange girl ... is dislike shopping and only when I have to. The kind of wife every man dreams of having? :)

You are on my prayer list. xx

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

This was a good transitional chapter, Phyllis. No spag spotted, and it was good to see Franny's influence again. I like the way she appears, almost like a conscience, now and then.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

Thanks so much, Nicole. Like a conscience! I think you're right! I never thought of it that way. Not only are you beautiful and a talented artist, but you're smart, too. If I didn't like you so much, I'd hate you. LOL! :)

reply by Curly Girly on 05-Mar-2015

Oh, wow, thanks, Phyllis. If you saw me in real life you would realise that I am far from beautiful, lol! Have you been drinking wine? He-he-he!

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

I'm just going by your profile photo. :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Exceptional

Aw, Theo loves Blaze. That sounds like a match made in Heaven on Earth of course and all else in between.

A honeymoon in Rome, this is gonna be fun. Are we invited? Do I need to buy a new outfit?

Ah ha! So this is gonna be some sorta father-in-law type competition thing going on between God and Luke. Good one!

Oh wonderful news your daughter is coming for a visit, Phyllis. We will miss you, and say hello to her. Have a blast.

Gloria

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

Thank you very verrry much for that lovely sixth star. I'm so glad you liked this scene. We'll see just a bit of the honeymoon in Rome, but alas, the hotel is fully booked so no room for you. I'll take pictures for you, tho. :)

Yep, my kiddo's here and talks more than I do, so we got all caught up. Seems now Ben has moved in with her, and when I asked her if they're considering marriage, she didn't kick me this time. I took that as a good sign. :)

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I think Blaze might be in for a surprise in the church. She won't have as much trouble as she thinks she will. I'm not sure she is yet, but I don't think she's who she thinks she is. Have a wonderful time with your daughter.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Thank you so much. You're right about one thing... she isn't who/what she thinks she is. She's been in that church before for Tara's wedding but she wore gloves. I hope it's still cold enough for gloves. LOL! :)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

a most thoughtful conversation between Tara and Blaze and about how her decisions impact other people
love when Franny shows up
it will be interesting to see how Father Murphy weighs in on all of this
Brooke

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Thank you so much, Brooke. Will Father M. be able to figure out the mystery? Franny will be back when Blaze is alone to have some frank words with her. She knows the whole truth, of course. :)

Comment from judiverse

Exceptional

I'm going with six on this. I love the conversation between Blaze and Tara. It shows that Blaze feels she can confide in her. Tara speaks from experience when she questions how she can be away for so long without Luke being suspicious. Blaze thinks she has a nifty plan. I like bringing Franny back. Blaze thinks it's good sign if she's wanting to help Tara. It'll be interesting to see what happens when Blaze goes to see Father Murphy. Blaze is really in a dilemma. judi

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Wow, thanks so verrry much, Judi. Sure appreciate the sixer and really glad you liked the scene. :)

reply by judiverse on 05-Mar-2015

You're welcome. I enjoy Blaze's creativity. She is amenable to those visits from Franny, and is now going to consult Father Murphy. Maybe she's ready to go in a different direction. judi