Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Michael - This has many wonderful layers with that sacred flow you have described so well. Nicely penned and leaves me wanting to read it again - I did:)
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

you did...I do...I mean....wow...so cool...-smile-...well for sure its gold then...-wink- ...can I take home the gold Mo...do you mind...you ready...? ah haha...love bug-

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Your title and illustration are certainly bold and eye-catching. Your echoing "ound" sounds intensified your message about love. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

Hi J...-smile-...ah bold and beautiful...or eye catching as you've so generously have placed it ...has been the constant since july fourth seen me first...God love liberatchi wardrobed, richard simmons dispisitioned....lol....you know on my upside of the bi-polar disorder....yea well J...were not all perfect....dam close though....love bug-

reply by Joan E. on 04-Mar-2015

Since july--that's eight months! I'll match you with my auto-immune diseases! I gave up trying for perfect when I was twelve!! Are we having fun yet? -J

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

fun is my house J...I live in ward A....ward C is where the crazy people practice circus, ward B watches and cheer leads. We've boarded up our section and sleep in shifts...-wink-....their afraid of fire...its really something throw a moltal cocktail at em' and the run like lil' sissy's....so far they think were gods....but you know theres always one that's got to test those bounderays ....so I've planted plastic explosive around the perimeter....you'll be perfectly safe...what time shall I expect you love...? lol ahh night night-

reply by Joan E. on 04-Mar-2015

I think there's another poem in that response, or maybe a screenplay! I don't think I'll be visiting soon, however. Just kidding, of course. LOL -Joan

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

ah I just like that movie with Jack Nicholson......I'm much to normal for crazy people...I tend to irritate them...-shouldershrug-...reciting poetry and songs of love....Come as you are j...will change you here...lol of course I'm just kidding...if it should be yours and bobs whim to visit the land of Conroe cowboy....I assure you I would be a perfect gentleman....I just try lighten things up...otherwise we'd all just hug each other and shiver...ya know....lol ahh good night Dear...Love bug-

reply by Joan E. on 04-Mar-2015

You really do "lighten things up"--it would be fun to visit the land of the Conroe cowboy. Of course, you might want to visit La La Land and Malibu is less than 20 miles away. Besides, Bob and I are good tour guides! Smiles- Joan

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

yes maam...you are correct again...no wonder you were a teacher....save me a place at the table someday...love you guys-

reply by Joan E. on 05-Mar-2015

Any time--I have a ham and a turkey breast in the freezer! Once a teacher, always a teacher!! Endless hugs- Joan

Comment from Pili Pubul

Exceptional

I love your emotions expressed with your gifted emotional words.
I enjoy the music you selected. Meaningful and spiritually
rich words. Big hugs. Pili

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015

Hi Pili...-smile- sure do miss you.....I always say a prayer for you at night. Thank you beauty tree....love you michael

reply by Pili Pubul on 05-Mar-2015

Every day a bit better... Love you too my friend . Pili

reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

what can I do for you ...?

reply by Pili Pubul on 08-Mar-2015

Smile...

Comment from jlsavell

Exceptional

Hello Michael.

You certainly seem to be in deep thought lately.

How are you doing?

There are many things I would like to say but I will limit this review.

I know that music inspires your writing. Music has no boundaries, meaning it transcends across all cultures and uniting every race and religion in its celebration.

Love in its purest form is gold but as rare pure clarity and brilliant diamond.. meaning without flaws. And of course, as in your case, the belief that Christ was the epitome of love and the purest is tangible... should each and every human being experience its flawless and chaste beauty.

On another note, we honor God when we honor this kind of love whether it be agape, philia, eros, and I forgot the other one.. oh yeah storge.

Take care dear friend and sweet man.

Jimi

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Hello Punky...-smile- I'm just fine Dear...I'm just glad normal is relative to everyone...so its all in the family. how are you...besides campaigning for white house press secretary in forum realm...-smile- ah ha ha...give em hell Punky Brewster. -wink- seriously thank you....for enjoying my poetic expression, means a bunch coming from you...love michael

Comment from l.raven

Exceptional

words and feelings felt right from the heart Michael...to be sworn to love...bounded with the beating of a heart...all in the name of love...very nicely written in your own unique words...love Neil Youngs songs...love ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Hello rose petal...-smile-...thank you...very happy you enjoyed this....I'll check with you tomorrow about the doctor....it will be okay...love michael

reply by l.raven on 04-Mar-2015

Hi Baby, thank you so much I love it...glad I am over the one thing...will talk to you later tonight...I know all will be good...love you...Linda xxoo

Comment from madhatter1977

Excellent

Nice post, Michael. Not sure if it's the gold of a love you speak of but I like the poem and the music is an added bonus to the free verse. Hope you are well and best wishes, Pete :)

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

whats going on Pete...-smile- good to see you Sailor ....yes of course....the gold thats worth everything...-smile- thanks bro...love bug-