Comment from scd41

Excellent

The story of Charlie and his companions is very amusing. His autobiography is interesting as it is uncensored and there is no objectionable adult content in it. He is frank but suspicious to doubt who are their real fathers for him and his sister born on the same day from their mother. Best of luck for the contest

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

Thanks a lot. I am glad you enjoyed it. Ulla

Comment from Delahay

Excellent

Catnip {Kat-nip}: Method of waking sleeping "feeder" type person of which cats are fond.
Charlie sounds like a real rascal and one that has his humans well trained.
Mary

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

Thank very much for your kind review. Ulla

Comment from Jacob Collins

Excellent

Well, Charlie is certainly a troublesome character. I thought that you wrote this piece from Charlie's point of mind well. I laughed when he says how he doesn't like his name. Your writing flowed well and I couldn't find any faults. A delight to read...Jacob

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

Thanks very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. Ulla

Comment from Rikki66

Exceptional

I do not give this rating often but Charlie deserves it, my Katy agrees with me. I would like to give some criticism or critique the story is too well written.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

Well, what can I say other than I am so pleased for your rating and that you liked it so much. Thank you very much. Ulla

Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

This Charlie has a relative who resides at our house. Same colour, black and white. Same attitude, she rules and pesters the life out of the house humans.

In moments of tenderness, the cat like to become involved. Amy, the cat, things she should be involved. Obviously she enjoys the idea of a threesome. Neither human enjoys such a tryst.

Guess who always gets eliminated, me. Those bloody females always stick together.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2015

Thanks for your rating. Yeah, they are good fun aren't they. We love ours to pieces. Ulla

Comment from chasennov

Excellent

A story from a cat's point of view Charlie The Cat.' It was fun reading a story from the perspective of a cat. I could feel the vibes and I also appreciated the Charlie Chaplin moniker. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Thanks a lot for your very kind review. I am glad you liked it. Ulla

reply by chasennov on 04-Mar-2015

You are most welcome, Ulla.

Comment from amahra

Excellent

I read something similar from a dog's point of view, but this is even cuter. You really give this cat a voice that is very believable. Great job.

I am a black and white cat and quite handsome if I may say so myself. [Lovely beginning sentence for any animal.]

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Thanks a lot. I am happy you enjoyed it. Ulla

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

I found this story quite charming, just like Charlie. I enjoyed reading about his exploits and manipulation of humans. Good luck in the contest,Charlie!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. Ulla

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the story. This human Mom and Dad have their hands full. Humans are outnumbered when they have just one cat. My cats used to jump on my computer keyboard. They could write some stories, in their own language of course. Great work.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015

Thanks a lot. You are right about that. But they are so good fun. Ulla

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

'Although it is said that I behave as one much younger() my age. Insert (than).

This is a sweet story. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015

Thanks very much.Ulla