Let's Talk Dirty!
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Karen's Plan Backfires"The story about three women who need to make money
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
No! Don't apologise! I wanted more! I can't wait to hear what happens when Mark sees the new Karen! That is going to be brilliant. Now, this hotel, wouldn't it be a dream come true for the girls to run it. They would certainly make a better job than the present owners are doing. This book has more twists and turns than a roller coaster and helter-skelter put together! Another really wonderful page, and I really can't wait for the next one! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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No! Don't apologise! I wanted more! I can't wait to hear what happens when Mark sees the new Karen! That is going to be brilliant. Now, this hotel, wouldn't it be a dream come true for the girls to run it. They would certainly make a better job than the present owners are doing. This book has more twists and turns than a roller coaster and helter-skelter put together! Another really wonderful page, and I really can't wait for the next one! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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Then you're really going to enjoy today's chapter, Sandra. It was such fun to write! You inspire me with every review you write. Thank you! x
Comment from Curly Girly
This was a fun and informative chapter to read. Laura's antics have backfired slightly, and Sandra get the blame for ex-hubby's upset stomach. I am sure she will talk her way out of the crisis of having to move soon. A few typos to fix:
asking for trouble!'
' --delete this stray apostrophe
goggled
Googled
As I said. Mr. Respectable one minute. Mr. Naughty the next.
As I said, Mr. Respectable one minute, Mr. Naughty the next. /punctuation
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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This was a fun and informative chapter to read. Laura's antics have backfired slightly, and Sandra get the blame for ex-hubby's upset stomach. I am sure she will talk her way out of the crisis of having to move soon. A few typos to fix:
asking for trouble!'
' --delete this stray apostrophe
goggled
Googled
As I said. Mr. Respectable one minute. Mr. Naughty the next.
As I said, Mr. Respectable one minute, Mr. Naughty the next. /punctuation
Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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LOL, Margaret Snowden alerted me to that apostrophe but I still couldn't see it! Thanks for picking up the others. Alexis x
Comment from scongrove
Another great chapter. Crap ... the trick Karen played on her ex backfired. That's usually the case when you pull something dirty, it always comes back to bite you in the butt! Been there & done that ... ha-ha!
I hope Mark sees Karen all dressed up w/her new body & totally wants to get back with her again ... so she can turn him down & feel good about herself for once.
I am looking forward to your next chapter!
Shana :)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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Another great chapter. Crap ... the trick Karen played on her ex backfired. That's usually the case when you pull something dirty, it always comes back to bite you in the butt! Been there & done that ... ha-ha!
I hope Mark sees Karen all dressed up w/her new body & totally wants to get back with her again ... so she can turn him down & feel good about herself for once.
I am looking forward to your next chapter!
Shana :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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Now posted! Boy, was that fun to write. I hope you enjoy it, Shana. It's dedicated to all wives who got left behind for all the wrong reasons! Alexis x
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
It's true that when you lose weight,things are so much easier - particularly when bending down to put on one's shoes and such. I'd feel the same as her
when seeing her ex, after loosing so much weight - hats off to her!!
asking for trouble!'
['] = there's a stray inverted comma here
trippled
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symptems
symptoms
Margaret
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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It's true that when you lose weight,things are so much easier - particularly when bending down to put on one's shoes and such. I'd feel the same as her
when seeing her ex, after loosing so much weight - hats off to her!!
asking for trouble!'
['] = there's a stray inverted comma here
trippled
tripled
symptems
symptoms
Margaret
Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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I've posted the reveal today, Margaret. I hope you enjoy it. Alexis x
Comment from Glasstruth
Difficult siruations, such as Karen wanting to hold on to the house, problems at the hotel, business being slow, and the funny dialogue about underwear moved this story right along. It keeps the reader wondering what's next? No sixes left. Superbly penned! Les
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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Difficult siruations, such as Karen wanting to hold on to the house, problems at the hotel, business being slow, and the funny dialogue about underwear moved this story right along. It keeps the reader wondering what's next? No sixes left. Superbly penned! Les
Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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I think you'll enjoy today's offering. It certainly is a 'what's next' situation! Thank you for your review, my friend. As you know, I really appreciate it. Alexis x
Comment from Fridayauthor
Nice setting and story line. I especially enjoyed the dialog. It flowed very well.
as she remembered (Period needed.)
Mr respectable (Period needed.)
One if the shortest call
One of the shortest call
Thank you.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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Nice setting and story line. I especially enjoyed the dialog. It flowed very well.
as she remembered (Period needed.)
Mr respectable (Period needed.)
One if the shortest call
One of the shortest call
Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and my thanks for the review and your eagle eye. Both are appreciated.
Alexis x
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is really moving along Alexis. The ladies are finding their way through a difficult situation and I can see the Chat Line is on the way out. Life has a way of changing things. Can't wait to hear Marks reaction when he sees Laura. Well done.:<))) Nancy
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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This is really moving along Alexis. The ladies are finding their way through a difficult situation and I can see the Chat Line is on the way out. Life has a way of changing things. Can't wait to hear Marks reaction when he sees Laura. Well done.:<))) Nancy
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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They're still stuck with the chat lines for a while, but yes, I hope they all find a way of making a living differently at some point in the future (yet to be determined!) Alexis x
Comment from Cat of Letters
Hi Alexis,
Not very sharp today but I could see no spag apart from the fresh ____ I made the stuff the laxative went it, you missed out a word.
Not much of a review today, I am afraid. But it seems fine. All the hotel talk is interesting and obviously going somewhere.
Best wishes,
Alison
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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Hi Alexis,
Not very sharp today but I could see no spag apart from the fresh ____ I made the stuff the laxative went it, you missed out a word.
Not much of a review today, I am afraid. But it seems fine. All the hotel talk is interesting and obviously going somewhere.
Best wishes,
Alison
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2015
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Thank you for taking the time to review and catch that missing word anyway, Alison. I think the other reviewers picked up the rest of the lurking spag. Fingers crossed!
Take care, and don't let the snow get you down.
Alexis xxx
