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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael - such sacred and powerful lines - I especially loved "I Am your Mothers' and Fathers', your Sisters' and Brothers' " you weave a magic spell of blessings even in those challenging moments, and the love that blooms from those fertile soils.
Great job and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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Dear Michael - such sacred and powerful lines - I especially loved "I Am your Mothers' and Fathers', your Sisters' and Brothers' " you weave a magic spell of blessings even in those challenging moments, and the love that blooms from those fertile soils.
Great job and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 02-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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Mo Gra....-smile-...yea...-headshake-...all that stuff you said...so well. well you would know about the ability of fertile soil to bloom love...I trust you...-smile- Love Bug-
Comment from mountainwriter49
Hello, Michael,
I enjoyed reading your poem of faith this afternoon. Affirmation of faith is good for the soul.
May I offer one comment/question and several suggestions to correct some SPAG issues?
I'm not sure I'm understanding the context of this line:
"Alpha and Omega agape trustworthy"
Is 'agape' the correct verb?
your Mother[']s first
sublime experience your Father[']s last...
k[K]ing David's crown removed far from Glory
I Am your Mother[']s and Father[']s, your Sister[']s and Brother[']s
(if you meant this last line to be in the plural possessive, then just relocate the apostrophes accordingly.
-Ray
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
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Hello, Michael,
I enjoyed reading your poem of faith this afternoon. Affirmation of faith is good for the soul.
May I offer one comment/question and several suggestions to correct some SPAG issues?
I'm not sure I'm understanding the context of this line:
"Alpha and Omega agape trustworthy"
Is 'agape' the correct verb?
your Mother[']s first
sublime experience your Father[']s last...
k[K]ing David's crown removed far from Glory
I Am your Mother[']s and Father[']s, your Sister[']s and Brother[']s
(if you meant this last line to be in the plural possessive, then just relocate the apostrophes accordingly.
-Ray
Comment Written 02-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2015
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Hey Ray...how are you Shakespeare ....-smile-..agape...big....biggest kind of love....sacrificial...agape dies for what's cherished...and did so first for you and me. Okay Teach, I'll go comma up...appreciate ya....love Bug-
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello poet friend and thank you for sharing your work, looks like it has been well received. I am back, from about 2 years away, so nice to meet you.
Even though the artwork is beautiful, I personally think the font is too small and too light. Maybe that will help. I enjoyed it, Loyd
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Hello poet friend and thank you for sharing your work, looks like it has been well received. I am back, from about 2 years away, so nice to meet you.
Even though the artwork is beautiful, I personally think the font is too small and too light. Maybe that will help. I enjoyed it, Loyd
Comment Written 01-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Hello General...how are Sir...? Well alright...welcome...-smile- ah well....I am at odds with the ah monster call "new"...it is very uncooperative....and would slay it, were I king Arthur wielding Excalibur....however, I am mere poet from Texas with a magic wand purchased at a local five and dime, so far all I've managed to get it to do is spin in the wind......anyway have it general...Love bug-
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Hi poet friend, loved your reply. My best to you, Loyd
Comment from kiwijenny
This is truly beautiful..
I love these lines
Holy baptized One and only
Defined as Divine beauty's ..full
Heritage eternal..gifted over
And further more
I am in love with you
Well penned poem...
God bless
Acts 2:38... Our response
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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This is truly beautiful..
I love these lines
Holy baptized One and only
Defined as Divine beauty's ..full
Heritage eternal..gifted over
And further more
I am in love with you
Well penned poem...
God bless
Acts 2:38... Our response
Comment Written 01-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2015
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thank you Jenny....really do appreciate this...love michael
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Incredibly well stated. Completely appreciated this poem. Would enjoy reading more of your work. Nice picture that totally supported the theme. Spot on! Very well done!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Incredibly well stated. Completely appreciated this poem. Would enjoy reading more of your work. Nice picture that totally supported the theme. Spot on! Very well done!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Hi...-smile- and thank you so much...pleased you enjoyed ....always great to here approving feed back. Love bug-
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You are welcome.
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"Along the road of my life are littered regrets...
"Along the road of my sad, sad, oh so sad life there are littered
regrets and 'Paper Glass and Plastic *Hearts...
...
"As I approach the wayside I see it everywhere....
"The Plastic refuse town and tossed away...
"The papered thoughts left being...
"And as I turn the page again I am confronted with a choice...
...
"We can sit idle {Theology24-23}] or we have a choice a voice to
communicate out thoughts and moue feelings...
'And as we turn the page in this 'Great Book of Life'.....
"We have a choice to live with the 'Paper Glass and Plastic Hearts'
or to die?"
"But why?"
"Why should we just pass...
"By the waste-side?"
"'And why should we have to retire and give in with this path than
is blocked with sin?"
{Theology 24.24}.
*Hearts-Our losses.
"Special thanks goes out first and always to Heavenly Father and his Son Jesus the Christ Fan story, Fan Art review and this artist 'avmurry' and her picture......
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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what say ye, merry man of fanstorian wood...is all understood as of yet, or perhaps more to learn....I am Robin the Hood, I bid you follow me and cause righteous...we must right what has been wronged. The bell tolls my friend....the time has come...to gather from the forests as one...American arm powerful and rid our cities again of greed and corruption, standing as Black Panther unity in a just say no champagne against drugs...Come!...we haven't much time....we still need leathers, take off that high school letter jacket...-headshake-...aright, aright...its gonna be okay...love Bug-
Comment from trimple
Hiello there, Michael
You manage to intrigue and baffle in equal measure:)
I really enjoyed reading this,three times in fact.
What ever this is, I was fascinated :)
much love
tracey
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Hiello there, Michael
You manage to intrigue and baffle in equal measure:)
I really enjoyed reading this,three times in fact.
What ever this is, I was fascinated :)
much love
tracey
Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Hi Tracey....-smile- Lady who makes words sexy to read....-smile-...apart from trying to hit on you...i do really mean that. always a pleasure to read you...and see you at my domains door...-smile- would you care for a tea or crumpet perhaps....lol...love bug-
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lol Hello there, Michael
Sure! You bring the tea, I'll bring the crumpet :)
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yes maam....on my way....wait up...-smile-
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Wait up! You're not even at the airport yet! LOL
Comment from Sonjalee
This poem is beautiful. The words flow . I t speaks to me even though I do not understand verse 3 and 4 completely but I get the idea.
Beautiful job.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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This poem is beautiful. The words flow . I t speaks to me even though I do not understand verse 3 and 4 completely but I get the idea.
Beautiful job.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Hello Sonjalee...-smile-...tell me sweet Lady will you pull into port one day...or do you plane to mermaid forevermore....lol...ahh thank you ....I've tweeked it.....sort of a mind occupying cross word puzzle...to solve, truimph over, to celebrate in dance with joyous jumps of graduation and shouts of demanded attention....then comes tomorrow...-smile- alright....love Bug-
Comment from rjuselius
This is an interesting and intriguing piece of poetic art dear friend! It does showcase your talent as a poet and as a person. Never let go!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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This is an interesting and intriguing piece of poetic art dear friend! It does showcase your talent as a poet and as a person. Never let go!
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015
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Hello pretty Lady...-smile-...well thank you very much Rebekka.....but at this piont if I let go, i'm afraid i'd fall...-wink-....whoever said they weren't araid of hieghts , has never hit the ground at high rate of speed...i promise....love Bug-
