When Blood Collides
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Long Distance Relationship, Part 4"A family's love is tested.
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Comment from Eigle Rull
This was a well written chapter, which puts the reader in your shoes. It was interesting and fun to read. I kept waiting for the husband to split. I'm glad he didn't. I can feel your frustration over your daughter moving back to California. I am waiting for the next chapter. I'm enjoying this write. And I'm glad you're sharing it.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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This was a well written chapter, which puts the reader in your shoes. It was interesting and fun to read. I kept waiting for the husband to split. I'm glad he didn't. I can feel your frustration over your daughter moving back to California. I am waiting for the next chapter. I'm enjoying this write. And I'm glad you're sharing it.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 26-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Thanks, Eigle. Now to get back to some drama.
Comment from Muffins
In this chapter there's a more postive flow to your experience with your daughter. For a while she had sir stability until Jeff couldn't follow Walt Disdeny ruled. I feel with their move this is the calm before the thunderstorm .
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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In this chapter there's a more postive flow to your experience with your daughter. For a while she had sir stability until Jeff couldn't follow Walt Disdeny ruled. I feel with their move this is the calm before the thunderstorm .
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Jeff didn't like authority figures, for sure.
Comment from Deniz22
I've had friends who worked at Disney who say the work is difficult and the pay is low. I'm fascinated to tour the tunnels under the place that I only heard about after the second visit. Irony best describes this segment...JB
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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I've had friends who worked at Disney who say the work is difficult and the pay is low. I'm fascinated to tour the tunnels under the place that I only heard about after the second visit. Irony best describes this segment...JB
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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I never heard about the tunnels. I'm guessing about the pay, but I'm sure it was more than he made as a clerk in the video store. I bet it is difficult because of the heat and the weight of some of the costumes. Jeff hated it after the first month.
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The tunnels are used to move supplies around. You never see delivery trucks to the restaurants and I guess that's why.
Comment from mountainwriter49
HI, Shari,
I enjoyed your chapter in this continuing family saga. While this one lacked the pressure cooker steam of some other chapters, it was good to have a cool-down and catch one's breath. I can't wait to hear about this new deal with Barbara. My, my, my. I have images in my head but will save them until I can read the next installment.
Excellent work,
Ray
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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HI, Shari,
I enjoyed your chapter in this continuing family saga. While this one lacked the pressure cooker steam of some other chapters, it was good to have a cool-down and catch one's breath. I can't wait to hear about this new deal with Barbara. My, my, my. I have images in my head but will save them until I can read the next installment.
Excellent work,
Ray
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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Thanks, Ray. I know what you mean about steam, but I have to let the water simmer for a while. :-)
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I'm waiting for the top to pop!
