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Comment from happykat4
Enjoyed this. The music, the photo added a lot to the delivery. Christ died for all. Love the sinner hate the sin. We make the choice to accept or reject Him. Guilt yes, but acceptance and we are not left behind. This is so worthy of 6 stars!! Thank you. I have just started writing after 30 years. I am so glad this site is there.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Enjoyed this. The music, the photo added a lot to the delivery. Christ died for all. Love the sinner hate the sin. We make the choice to accept or reject Him. Guilt yes, but acceptance and we are not left behind. This is so worthy of 6 stars!! Thank you. I have just started writing after 30 years. I am so glad this site is there.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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em hm...-smile- that's what God-man perfect said. He could,...did. Seeing the bigger picture...He also saw...said..."there will come many to Me, and say I've done this and that for You...I am worthy.....and He says depart from Me...ye worker of inequity, I never knew you" You see my friend...the worst ..ah of man created...the worst sin...is to have one forgive you for your wrong doing...and then to do it again, even nurturing it in growth. it is un forgivable....Peter, would have and did...except crucifixion upside down instead, Paul...prison and off with his head, Judas hung himself soul broken after casting his poison gain back at the swine's hooves. Once...one gains knowledge, understanding of God...life...and His gift....we are held responsible for what we do with it...never will your life be the same...what sin willfully committed ...will haunt you and hunt you down. Forgiveness is offered...even repeatedly forty year circle...but you will notice, the consequence still bares its fruit.
Amen Brother...except him...his character, commands....and hope for follow into transformation...into his living Body ...going about doing good...-smile- Love bug-
Comment from Jean Lutz
Deep, deep thoughts poured out in this one, Reconciled. As I clicked on your title my thoughts turned to ISIL. After reading -- still that and more.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Deep, deep thoughts poured out in this one, Reconciled. As I clicked on your title my thoughts turned to ISIL. After reading -- still that and more.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2015
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Hi Jean...how are you Maam...-smile- yes indeed....ah I have God and his loves inside me...so it tends be noticed in my thoughts....sometimes...my actions...and you know visa versa...thank you Dear...love michael
Comment from Joan E.
I will never forget your most powerful verse in the stanza before the last one: "I hope to die a good man/ still remembering who I am/ in those never left behind". I says so much about you and life. Your title and artwork selection are quite dramatic and set the mood well. Many more cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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I will never forget your most powerful verse in the stanza before the last one: "I hope to die a good man/ still remembering who I am/ in those never left behind". I says so much about you and life. Your title and artwork selection are quite dramatic and set the mood well. Many more cheers- Joan
Comment Written 26-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Hey J...-smile-...thank you...-smile-. you too my friend...have a great night. love michael
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Michael - what a wonderful thought provoking work to read. You have pulled in many layers with this one, leaving me pondering it long after the read.
"I hope to die a good man
still remembering who I am
in those never left behind " // Contemplative wisdom:)
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Dear Michael - what a wonderful thought provoking work to read. You have pulled in many layers with this one, leaving me pondering it long after the read.
"I hope to die a good man
still remembering who I am
in those never left behind " // Contemplative wisdom:)
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
Comment Written 26-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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right babe...sometimes they come for real. thank you for your notice...-smile- bugging the big love..michael
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Category: Romance Poetry | Posted: February 24, 2015
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MY ex who is mentally-ill!
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"NASTY NANCY ESPOSITO!"
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{A Companion poem}
Pen Number One-
"She abuses me and refuses me and I walk now alone. "
"Like a dog with-out a bone, she miss-treats me and beats me...
"She is a cheater and a thief steals my booze and my titles as she digs through my money drawl...
"She has gambled away and lost thousands of my dollars and I still have to pay to take her home on the bus!"
''In God We trust?'
"But with nasty Nancy its' "Dust to DUST!"
"Never would or should any man trust this evil and dirty witch as she has stolen from others too!"
"Even a necklace with a cross from the dead!' Yes, she is mentally-ill and out of her head!"
"I tried to help her and get her institutionalized but she just lies and lies!"
...
"She has a job and her profession is...
"She cleans cat boxes and works all day at shoveling cat crap!"
{What more can I say?}
..
"She hates my family because even her mother doesn't want a thing to do!"
"I bought her a diamond ring and took it back for she cheated on my and spread her crack!"
"She says she's the best that there would ever be but I have a much younger and pretty lady named Sherry!''
"Sherry loves me and soon we will meet, a 'Philly Girl' and loves the horses too...
"So that Horseman magazine that I was going to give to Nasty and now throw away...
"Sherry says she likes horses too Sop I will bring it to her today!!"
...
"Nancy hopes and schemes and dreams that I will go to jail and lose my house but my re-if want out in the mail and that is exactly so...
"Nancy come to my yard sale there will not be a boarded-up house but many wonderful and expensive antiques but you see you will be destitute no car or place to live...
"No job and no life and that is what God will do to you for trying to ruin my life!'
"And as for my daughter and my brother ?'
"Well you can put them and me down all day with your dirty mouth but the next time you call and bring my grandson Alex into your shit well Tony is awaiting and she doesn't take no shit and will serve you up your shit-sandwich right in your big and dirty mouth!"
"Nasty Nancy!"
By Ricky1024
{a Companion Poem} Number Two-
Note- This was inspired by a fourth aggressive and foul threat!
"As She lays in her sleigh and tomb...
"Nasty Nancy plots a way...
"To end Ricky's life today!"
"She calculates and emulates her large a bulbous of breasts...
"Yes she was but now she has lost...
"The glow that she had Bought!'
...
"She staggers in drunken bloom out of her tog of doom and wanders out side...
"Oh, the cold and the sun ..
"Its glows and I haste that as I am a creature of the dark!"
...
"Tee, he, as she waxes her fattening legs and shaves away a mop!"
" And gathers her feast, this piggy of slop!"
"Oh me oh my I got me a knot!"
"And then again she mounts her beast a BRANH OF TREE SHE THICK ENOUGH FOR FAT AND nasty"
...
"Away I go to haunt this Earth and steal the plunders of all it's worth!'
"And as she blasts over and hopefully past my house...
"Pray to god the door and locks doth hold...
"Or this nasty whore of a witch...
"Has been here and plundered before!"
"Special thanks goes out first and always to Heavenly Father band His Son Jesus Christ, to Fan story and Tom the administrator, Fan Art Review and this artist 'Mr. Jones' and his pica 'Witch Concept79' and 'Dodgement' with his pic 'Kune, Kune, Pig' And last but not in the least...
"Nancy Esposito who is truly a miserable and nasty person who shoal's seek help immediately as she only wants the good people of this world to suffer!"
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Category: Romance Poetry | Posted: February 24, 2015
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MY ex who is mentally-ill!
Nasty Nancy Esposito!
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"NASTY NANCY ESPOSITO!"
By Ricky 1024
{A Companion poem}
Pen Number One-
"She abuses me and refuses me and I walk now alone. "
"Like a dog with-out a bone, she miss-treats me and beats me...
"She is a cheater and a thief steals my booze and my titles as she digs through my money drawl...
"She has gambled away and lost thousands of my dollars and I still have to pay to take her home on the bus!"
''In God We trust?'
"But with nasty Nancy its' "Dust to DUST!"
"Never would or should any man trust this evil and dirty witch as she has stolen from others too!"
"Even a necklace with a cross from the dead!' Yes, she is mentally-ill and out of her head!"
"I tried to help her and get her institutionalized but she just lies and lies!"
...
"She has a job and her profession is...
"She cleans cat boxes and works all day at shoveling cat crap!"
{What more can I say?}
..
"She hates my family because even her mother doesn't want a thing to do!"
"I bought her a diamond ring and took it back for she cheated on my and spread her crack!"
"She says she's the best that there would ever be but I have a much younger and pretty lady named Sherry!''
"Sherry loves me and soon we will meet, a 'Philly Girl' and loves the horses too...
"So that Horseman magazine that I was going to give to Nasty and now throw away...
"Sherry says she likes horses too Sop I will bring it to her today!!"
...
"Nancy hopes and schemes and dreams that I will go to jail and lose my house but my re-if want out in the mail and that is exactly so...
"Nancy come to my yard sale there will not be a boarded-up house but many wonderful and expensive antiques but you see you will be destitute no car or place to live...
"No job and no life and that is what God will do to you for trying to ruin my life!'
"And as for my daughter and my brother ?'
"Well you can put them and me down all day with your dirty mouth but the next time you call and bring my grandson Alex into your shit well Tony is awaiting and she doesn't take no shit and will serve you up your shit-sandwich right in your big and dirty mouth!"
"Nasty Nancy!"
By Ricky1024
{a Companion Poem} Number Two-
Note- This was inspired by a fourth aggressive and foul threat!
"As She lays in her sleigh and tomb...
"Nasty Nancy plots a way...
"To end Ricky's life today!"
"She calculates and emulates her large a bulbous of breasts...
"Yes she was but now she has lost...
"The glow that she had Bought!'
...
"She staggers in drunken bloom out of her tog of doom and wanders out side...
"Oh, the cold and the sun ..
"Its glows and I haste that as I am a creature of the dark!"
...
"Tee, he, as she waxes her fattening legs and shaves away a mop!"
" And gathers her feast, this piggy of slop!"
"Oh me oh my I got me a knot!"
"And then again she mounts her beast a BRANH OF TREE SHE THICK ENOUGH FOR FAT AND nasty"
...
"Away I go to haunt this Earth and steal the plunders of all it's worth!'
"And as she blasts over and hopefully past my house...
"Pray to god the door and locks doth hold...
"Or this nasty whore of a witch...
"Has been here and plundered before!"
"Special thanks goes out first and always to Heavenly Father band His Son Jesus Christ, to Fan story and Tom the administrator, Fan Art Review and this artist 'Mr. Jones' and his pica 'Witch Concept79' and 'Dodgement' with his pic 'Kune, Kune, Pig' And last but not in the least...
"Nancy Esposito who is truly a miserable and nasty person who shoal's seek help immediately as she only wants the good people of this world to suffer!"
Pays one point and 2 member cents.
Artwork by dodgement at FanArtReview.com
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2015
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Hey Dad...-smile-...never hard to tell when you're around...-wink-...thank you Sir...hope you're well...,.love Michael
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, we never know when our time will come...but all want to be remembered in a good way...and know I loved as God wanted me to...and hopes not to let Jesus down...and people shouldn't hate their brothers and sisters in Gods eye's...we are all brothers and sisters...will depend on the road we take...it's a great poem...words once again only you can write...love it...picture perfect...and Van Morrison...one of the best...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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HI Michael, we never know when our time will come...but all want to be remembered in a good way...and know I loved as God wanted me to...and hopes not to let Jesus down...and people shouldn't hate their brothers and sisters in Gods eye's...we are all brothers and sisters...will depend on the road we take...it's a great poem...words once again only you can write...love it...picture perfect...and Van Morrison...one of the best...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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sweet Linda...your going to heaven, I'm certain. Your life blesses...and so it goes...wherever you do...you don't take , you give...-smile-..just focus on getting well right now. love michael
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thank you Michael....I am...going to try meds again tomorrow...and still drinking plenty...I swoosh when I walk...going to bed...goodnight...love xxoo
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goodnight sweetheart...-smile-
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thank you...goodnight...sweet dreams sweetie...smiling...
Comment from jlsavell
Well Michael, it does appear as if you have been quite prolific lately. Your muse must be residing in your walls now. Who knows. Hope you're doing well.
Once again a subject that will not be exhaustive until hatred is culled from the heart of every man, woman and child. A time when the pure unadulterated principal of love resides in every purpose of the heart, overflows from every mountain side to meet the depths of the sea. Only then, only then.
Until then misled ideology and misinterpreted commands will continue to wreak havoc in a world gone mad.
I believe there is a saying that says when good men stand by and do nothing evil will flourish. We live in an era where political correctness has truth and decency in a chokehold. Soon, these attributes will be so far removed from mankind that we might all wish for the Apocolypse. There was a time during the cold war we lived with threat of nuclear annihilation, now we live with the threat of annihilation of true north principals and love for our fellowman. Better the the atom bomb spit on us tgan to live this way.
The greatest teacher who has ever lived lived His life freed from the understanding of man's wayward and erroneous ideolgy. Love was the whole foundation and principal of His stewardship then in the ancient of days and still resonates today. Therefore I am a firm believer that His truth will prevail if not in my lifetime, but it will prevail.
Exceptional poem with your style which displays a higher calibre of thinking.
Have a great evening friend.. Jimi
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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Well Michael, it does appear as if you have been quite prolific lately. Your muse must be residing in your walls now. Who knows. Hope you're doing well.
Once again a subject that will not be exhaustive until hatred is culled from the heart of every man, woman and child. A time when the pure unadulterated principal of love resides in every purpose of the heart, overflows from every mountain side to meet the depths of the sea. Only then, only then.
Until then misled ideology and misinterpreted commands will continue to wreak havoc in a world gone mad.
I believe there is a saying that says when good men stand by and do nothing evil will flourish. We live in an era where political correctness has truth and decency in a chokehold. Soon, these attributes will be so far removed from mankind that we might all wish for the Apocolypse. There was a time during the cold war we lived with threat of nuclear annihilation, now we live with the threat of annihilation of true north principals and love for our fellowman. Better the the atom bomb spit on us tgan to live this way.
The greatest teacher who has ever lived lived His life freed from the understanding of man's wayward and erroneous ideolgy. Love was the whole foundation and principal of His stewardship then in the ancient of days and still resonates today. Therefore I am a firm believer that His truth will prevail if not in my lifetime, but it will prevail.
Exceptional poem with your style which displays a higher calibre of thinking.
Have a great evening friend.. Jimi
Comment Written 25-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2015
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What a woman....-smile- Hey Jimbob....lol.......O i'm Michael, one apple shy of stardom acting like I'm there anyway....-smile-...you still got my autograph right...ahhh alright, thank you so much for indepth review and scaring the shit out of me...-wink- Okay ake sure you check back before the Pale rider enters the picture...just kidding...thank you dear Lady...love michael
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